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Kitsukitty's Fakemon/Other Sprites

How do you think my sprites are right now?

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Nyu~♥!

Pokémon Opal Producer
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    Kitsukitty's Sprites!
    Or, I guess you could say "Nyu~♥!'s sprites" now...
    But, feel free to call me kitty! XD
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    Hey peoples! As few of you know, I'm making a fakemon game, Pokemon Opal.
    Here I will be posting some sprites that will be used in the game! I know I'm not a proffesional, duh, but I want some advice so that I may get better. Please use criticism but try not to be rude. Someone's said "It looks terrible..." once, and I didn't really appreciate that, so     please use a nice criticism.
    STEAL AND YOU'LL EXPLODE IN YOUR SLEEP!

    :3

    Well, here are a couple of sprites to start with.
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    Kerosprite.png
    Keroback.png
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    I needed to replace these ones because it seems that some people still wanted to rate the old ones!

    A big one:
    picture.php



    I think that's all I have.
    Please rate some, all if you wish. Hehe!
    Thank you for looking. As I keep going I'll post more.
    Links

    My deviantart
    HiatuWiki, Fakemondex
    Official Pokemon Opal Thread

    G'day!
     
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    Domin-8

    aka Unoringinally Funny
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    • Your fakemon need better shading, you can barely tell the difference between shades. But otherwise I like your stuff.
     

    FireTears

    Animator and Artist
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    14
    Years
    • They are cute ^^

    The shading is almost unnoticeable, it is best to use darker shades and lighter highlights. The second sprite is lacking in black, use black whenever the area is darkest or has shading. If black shows too much, your shading is too light. Otherwise, use a darker shade of your current outline color instead of the black.
     

    Nyu~♥!

    Pokémon Opal Producer
    478
    Posts
    14
    Years
    • FireTears said:
    They are cute ^^

    The shading is almost unnoticeable, it is best to use darker shades and lighter highlights. The second sprite is lacking in black, use black whenever the area is darkest or has shading. If black shows too much, your shading is too light. Otherwise, use a darker shade of your current outline color instead of the black.
    Click to expand...

    Oh, thank you! I'll certainly keep this in mind.

    Domin-8 said:
    You have great outlines, but its just the shading.

    Check out this tutorial by skeddles it helped me make the newest sprite (check it out) in my thread(shading wise)
    http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=144629
    Click to expand...

    Alright, your sprites are great.
    I'll use that tutorial, now I understand that my shading is the real problem.
     
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    Nyu~♥!

    Pokémon Opal Producer
    478
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    14
    Years


    • Here's another!
    This is Gattomier, designed by Kitsunez, for my game!
    Please critique nicely. ^^

    And I know it's really dark, I should've made it lighter?
     

    Nyu~♥!

    Pokémon Opal Producer
    478
    Posts
    14
    Years
    • hehe, well I guess I can't get any feedback from you since you're really sucky at it... at least that's what you think.
     

    Kitsunez

    Poke'mon Artist
    13
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    14
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    • I do suck at spriting! It would be difficult for me to draw up something and then make it looked pixalized. And I can't just work on a clean canfas, I'm not good at completely digital art~
     

    Nyu~♥!

    Pokémon Opal Producer
    478
    Posts
    14
    Years
    • hehe, here's Gattomier's back sprite.

    I don't know why HiatuWiki's being a jerk.. o_0 makin the image smaller...
     

    skeddles

    159
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    16
    Years
    • Hello!

    My suggestion for the now is use more contrast between the colors on your sprites: Lighter highlights, darker shadows.

    Also, you may want to tone down the dithering a bit, you don't need it that much.

    You may want expiriment with more detailed shading, like more shading on the yellows head , showing fur and stuff.

    On the yellow one: I'd make the highlight on the head slightly bigger.


    Hope some of that helps ^^
     
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