Love in Sinnoh(AshxDawn)PG-13

empoleonrules and Dialgapalkia, you have been warned for spamming.

And people, try to give an appropiate review instead of trolling around, asking for more chapters. It doesn't contribute to the topic.

More conveniently, you should really read the rules. Party time is over.
 
Great story!Havn't seen something this pure(and long) in a great amount of time.I'm watching shows and writting done things to put(similiar but NOT PLAGUERISIM(sp?))in and go through trail and error with people.All together this is a smashing story(yes i'm British)
 
i have an idea how about you get ash and dawn in some kind of accident where they're trapped together and they get real shy!
 
williamsiner said:
ash and dawn do make a perfect couple seriously
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offtopic:NEVA!!I say MistyxAsh is better,but This kinda changed my mind(slaps self upside head).I hate may-_-

ONtopic:Can't wait until the next chapter is written
 
Gotta love the love! I like this fic, well written, Decent sotry, and a perfect couple XD although i'm not to preferable to dawn...
 
Great fic! Your grammar needs work but other than that I think this story is great.
Just listen to the constuctive critisism you get on the grammar and You'll be fine.
 
how long will it take to wright another chaptor?
 
Don't be so impatient, I'm sure he's doing his best to create the chapter, don't worry, he'll post it soon

The people are getting impatient, silverfox, put the next chapter on before they get out of control !
 
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Not to be rude or anything but,MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER BEFORE THE FAT MAN COMES! Please.
 
Not to be rude or anything but,MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER BEFORE THE FAT MAN COMES! Please.

Oh and please hurry up before this get's locked
 
Hi. Do you know when your gonna update your story because it's getting very good!
 
Be patient, I don't think sliverfox gets on anymore....

I have an idea for a chapter, tell me what you think:

Now, Dawn is getting more and more in love with Awsh. But, she doesn't know how to express her feelings. So, while Ash is sleeping Dawn tries to suprise Ash by dressing up as him. But will it work

Some parts of the chapter:
"Dawn ? Dawn ? Where are you ?" Ash questioned
"Suprise !" Dawn shouted. Dawn was wearing Ash clothes
"Gimme my clothes back !" Ash demaned
"Oh, don't worry, there's still MY clothese" NDawn replied
"I'm not wearing a mini-skirt" Ash said

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I have an idea for a chapter, tell me what you think:

Now, Dawn is getting more and more in love with Awsh. But, she doesn't know how to express her feelings. So, while Ash is sleeping Dawn tries to suprise Ash by dressing up as him. But will it work

Some parts of the chapter:
"Dawn ? Dawn ? Where are you ?" Ash questioned
"Suprise !" Dawn shouted. Dawn was wearing Ash clothes
"Gimme my clothes back !" Ash demaned
"Oh, don't worry, there's still MY clothes" Dawn replied
"I'm not wearing a mini-skirt" Ash said

"I can't believe I'm wearing a mini-skirt" Ash said, lamely
"Oh, but you look so cute in it !" Dawn replied

Maybe I should continue, what do YOU think ?
 
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