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- Yorkshire, England
- Seen Sep 2, 2011
@ siper x, there are tile erors, namely where the shallow water 'path' connects the land to the two islands.
It doesn't look natural in its Geography and Geology.
them flowers are there for the sake of filling space yes? If so then some should be removed and the open area made smaller.
another thing, you say this is for a hack? how come the sea isnt blocked off with rocks? thats gonna be a nightmare with border errors..
Overall, theres lots wrong, and i wouldnt put it in a hack, because it needs improving. 4/10
@Duoryan, I like how it does'nt look square, with the paths and trees. There's not much wrong at all, which is why this will be shorter than above. The only thing i can suggest is to close up the space below the rightmost house then it would get full marks for me, 9/10
It doesn't look natural in its Geography and Geology.
them flowers are there for the sake of filling space yes? If so then some should be removed and the open area made smaller.
another thing, you say this is for a hack? how come the sea isnt blocked off with rocks? thats gonna be a nightmare with border errors..
Overall, theres lots wrong, and i wouldnt put it in a hack, because it needs improving. 4/10
@Duoryan, I like how it does'nt look square, with the paths and trees. There's not much wrong at all, which is why this will be shorter than above. The only thing i can suggest is to close up the space below the rightmost house then it would get full marks for me, 9/10