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Hey, people. I'm feeling a little better( got some antibiotics)...and I'll be active...although, I still need to make OWs for Flandre and solspear, so requests now, please...And school starts tomorrow, so this won't the so quick to manage. (plus, I have my own project)
Hey, people. I0m feeling a little better( got some antibiotics)...and I'll be active...although, I still need to make OWs for Flandre and solspear, so requests now, please...And school starts tomorrow, so this won't the so quick to manage. (plus, I have my own project)
Name: DoomLucario (Or luke)
Skill: Storyline artist
Proof of work:
Unfortunately, team phantom got there ahead of you. You watch, feeling panicky, as they turn on the machine and capture Dialga. Palkia, backs away, trying to defend himself, but the machine is too strong. Palkia gets sucked in as well. "I've gotta free 'em." you think. Is there a way? "Infernape, go!" Yells a phantom grunt who's just noticed you. "Umbreon, go!" You yell!
I can do more if you want, but I'd be honored to be a team member.
Alright, long story...here goes:
"No" yelled all of Team Phantom as the rocks began to fall from the ceiling. Garitina was coming. "This is one fight we cannot get involved in." Said Prof. Oak. "Come, once we get out of this cave, I've something for you."
You race out of the cave, but find yourself surrounded by phantom grunts. "They look angry." Prof Oak comments.
The nearest grunt walks up to you and punches you in the face. Then he notices the poke balls and your waist.
"Hehehehe" he chuckles to himself, a greedy look on his face, while the other grunts approach.
{Insert epic battle with excellent music here}
In the distance, you hear the cry of Dialga, who's still in the cave.
"Alright, here you go." Said Prof. Oak. He hands you a small red box. It looks familiar. "This is a national pokedex. It can catch and record data on all pokemon" Oak explains. "Now, I want you to travel to Johto and catch some pokemon there. You can take the Rustboro train to the Kanto region, then take a ferry to Johto."
Binary, I'm about ready to send you the maps, I'm only figuring out how to fix some doorerrors and I'm still making the sprites and ow's for the main characters, but you can use the ingame sprites. The scripting I'd like you to do is in the spoiler:
Spoiler:
"You wake up, then your mum calls you, says your granddad is dying."
You walk outside (freely, not scripted).
When you're outside, your mum and dad are there, they say you have to follow them, this should be a followmescript.
The three of you enter a house (which is in Montiny springs), where your grandpa is (2nd floor), in bed. He tells you a story, which is in the spoiler. He breaths out one last time, and he dies. You greeve or cry, dunno, with your mum and dad, then they leave. You can walk freely, and you leave the building. When you leave the house, the script starts again, your parents say: "let's go home." A followmescript. When you are halfway there, a man bumps into you. It's our version of scott; Lt. Raine. He asks after your grandpa, hears he passed away, he thinks, then tells you some big news. Prof Maple has been kidnapped, by pirates as some people say. You and your dad go with him, and he sends you two in the direction the pirates went. That'd be south, at route 1. Dad has to follow you, but if it's possible I'd like them to walk side by side. This is where the script ends, I only want a inmap script in the Route1-map which makes you unable to go another way than south. I mean like Raine comes running to you and says: "Where the heck do you think you're going, go kick their ass."
I'll make the maps for the pirates' hideout later, also the further scripting things.
Spoiler:
It all started with the battle between three legendary water type pokemon, each representing a sea. Frigis (which is latin for cold), the water-ice pokemon in the north, Ignis (which is latin for fire/warmth) the tropical sea in the south east and Aeteris (latin for eternity) in the ancient bay at the south west. Obviously these names can easily be improved, that's for later. They kept fighting eachother, and all creatures on the island were frightened. Untill a pokemon on the island got struck by thunder, and so received very strong electrical powers. He defeated the three water pokemon, and forced them in an eternal sleep(each in one of the smaller Islands on the map), by taking their powers and putting those in an orb (in the lake in the middle of the Island). Peace came to the region, and then humans came to live there. The region bloomed, cities were build. But with prosperity came evil. An evil pokemon, who was to weak for the water pokemon coz of his ground/dark type, knew this was his chance. And he did almost defeat the electric pokemon, but he was stopped by a alliance of the best trainers and the quickly awakened water pokemon. The evil pokemon was defeated and locked up under the highest mountain in the region, the water pokemon were brought back to sleep. The count (the ruler of the region) awarded the eight best of these trainers with a medal, and a shard. These eight shards are needed to (un)lock the prison of the evil pokemon. The eight trainers are now, as you might've guessed, the gym leaders.
Here's the patch:
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Oh, and Solspear, sorry, I thought your hack was off for a while, I'll start right away. Which rombase do you want to use, regular FR?
Binary, I'm about ready to send you the maps, I'm only figuring out how to fix some doorerrors and I'm still making the sprites and ow's for the main characters, but you can use the ingame sprites. The scripting I'd like you to do is in the spoiler:
Spoiler:
"You wake up, then your mum calls you, says your granddad is dying."
You walk outside (not scripted).
"When you're outside, your mum and dad are there, they say you have to follow them, this should be a walkingscript."
"The three of you enter a house, where your grandpa is, in bed. He tells you a story, which is in the spoiler. He breaths out one last time, and he dies. You greeve or cry, dunno, with your mum and dad, then they leave." You can walk freely, and you leave the building. "When you leave the house, the script starts again, your parents say, let's go home. When you are halfway there, a man bumps into you. It's our version of scott. He asks after your grandpa, hears he passed away, he thinks, then tells you some big news. Prof Maple has been kidnapped, by pirates as some people say. You and your dad go with him, and he sends you two in the direction the pirates went. Dad has to follow you, but if it's possible I'd like them to walk side by side. You beat them, you come home, your rival wants a battle."
I hope you're willing and able to do this.
If you need to do it in A-map, let me know, so I can make the maps first.
Spoiler:
It all started with the battle between three legendary water type pokemon, each representing a sea. Frigis (which is latin for cold), the water-ice pokemon in the north, Ignis (which is latin for fire/warmth) the tropical sea in the south east and Aeteris (latin for eternity) in the ancient bay at the south west. Obviously these names can easily be improved, that's for later. They kept fighting eachother, and all creatures on the island were frightened. Untill a pokemon on the island got struck by thunder, and so received very strong electrical powers. He defeated the three water pokemon, and forced them in an eternal sleep(each in one of the smaller Islands on the map), by taking their powers and putting those in an orb (in the lake in the middle of the Island). Peace came to the region, and then humans came to live there. The region bloomed, cities were build. But with prosperity came evil. An evil pokemon, who was to weak for the water pokemon coz of his ground/dark type, knew this was his chance. And he did almost defeat the electric pokemon, but he was stopped by a alliance of the best trainers and the quickly awakened water pokemon. The evil pokemon was defeated and locked up under the highest mountain in the region, the water pokemon were brought back to sleep. The count (the ruler of the region) awarded the eight best of these trainers with a medal, and a shard. These eight shards are needed to (un)lock the prison of the evil pokemon. The eight trainers are now, as you might've guessed, the gym leaders.
Oh, and Solspear, sorry, I thought your hack was off for a while, I'll start right away. Which rombase do you want to use, regular FR?
Okay, Solspear, listen up.
I'll start making three (less or more) kinds of prototypes of each map, that'll be finished on sunday. You'll tell me whether or not you like them and, in that case, which one you like best. After that, I'll work that one out.
Alright, long story...here goes:
"No" yelled all of Team Phantom as the rocks began to fall from the ceiling. Garitina was coming. "This is one fight we cannot get involved in." Said Prof. Oak. "Come, once we get out of this cave, I've something for you."
You race out of the cave, but find yourself surrounded by phantom grunts. "They look angry." Prof Oak comments.
The nearest grunt walks up to you and punches you in the face. Then he notices the poke balls and your waist.
"Hehehehe" he chuckles to himself, a greedy look on his face, while the other grunts approach.
{Insert epic battle with excellent music here}
In the distance, you hear the cry of Dialga, who's still in the cave.
"Alright, here you go." Said Prof. Oak. He hands you a small red box. It looks familiar. "This is a national pokedex. It can catch and record data on all pokemon" Oak explains. "Now, I want you to travel to Johto and catch some pokemon there. You can take the Rustboro train to the Kanto region, then take a ferry to Johto."
Time to put my writing-criticism to work. x]
First off, a few typographical errors here and there. Wrong spellings, too. Pokemon is Pokemon, not pokemon. I'm not really amused with plots are giving an "instruction" to players. It kills the suspense. Grammar errors are also abound.
If you were to ask me: you'd be PENDING.
@Faline: Long ago, when we we're still in the old thread I told you to add me as a Storyline Editor. >:O
Could someone do me a titlescreen if I provided the background?
I can't do the Pokemon text and background, it gets screwed up, FR by the way. I just noticed this is my first time requesting something since I joined the team :O
Who even said that you're cocky in the first place? XD;
Okay. To me the map looks pretty good. The shape of the mountains and tree placement is good. The lake looks a little empty, but still, overall it's a nice map. Okay, so you're... Accepted.
But, I would like to see some more maps from you, if you're not feeling lazy or anything.
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