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[Showcase] My Drawings

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vegeta_ssjg_by_muhi313-d9jjwj3.jpg


buu_forms_by_muhi313-d9jjwj2.jpg


kitty_waiting_for_noms_by_muhi313-d9jjwjg.jpg


a_fox_has_a_leaf_by_muhi313-d9jjwjk.jpg


vegeta__1_by_muhi313-d9jjwjy.jpg


mew_in_bubble_by_muhi313-d9jjwk6.jpg


goku_crying_by_muhi313-d9jjwk2.jpg


bardock__goku__gohan_and_goten_by_muhi313-d9jjwki.jpg


ssj2_gohan_drawing_by_muhi313-d9jjwko.jpg


dragon_ball_super___frost_by_muhi313-d9mzb0g.jpg


dragon_ball_super___kabe_cabba_cabe_kaba_by_muhi313-d9q0rfc.jpg


dragonball_z___broly_1_by_muhi313-d9q0rfo.jpg


dragonball_z___broly_2_by_muhi313-d9q0rfy.jpg


Can you tell me which one you think is good? I don't really like any of my drawings. I have a couple of likes on my art album on facebook but I don't get feedbacks on it. Thanks.
 
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These are great! A few things I'll point out, although it looks like you fixed a lot of them going through:
http://orig12.deviantart.net/a777/f/2015/343/b/1/goku_crying_by_muhi313-d9jjwk2.jpg
I'll use this one as an example. The outline is really well done, but the hair looks like you used a really dull pencil, or maybe one layer of colored pencil? I myself struggle with colored pencils, but if you did use a pencil remember to always keep it sharp. Dull pencils make shading look like peach fuzz.

Second, the tears look a bit odd. Like his eye is a faucet or something, there's way too many tears to look natural.

http://orig09.deviantart.net/4fe8/f...__kabe_cabba_cabe_kaba_by_muhi313-d9q0rfc.jpg

With this one, the body looks great! But, the head is disproportionate to the body, and the eyes/nose/mouth are all squashed together on the bottom of the face. I assume since you don't have that problem in other drawings that you've learned how to fix that.

http://orig14.deviantart.net/d2fc/f/2016/031/0/7/dragonball_z___broly_2_by_muhi313-d9q0rfy.jpg
http://orig15.deviantart.net/783c/f/2016/031/d/2/dragonball_z___broly_1_by_muhi313-d9q0rfo.jpg

These ones, I've yet to find a flaw in, which is awesome since I'm very picky XD So awesome job with them!


Overall you're really good and have huge potential in the future! Keep making more! I'm looking forward to seeing more stuff from you!
 
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