my first sprites

[Negative-Zero]

i maded a new fish thing with the antena that i posted on the fakemon game

 

[Negative-Zero]

here it iz the fishy thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[~Kian~]

want my advice make one sprite and build and improve it and perfect the shading and make unique features in the sprite rather than making Loads of not very good sprites because then your not learning to improve :/

 

[Negative-Zero]

thanks 4 the tip ive re shaded them but unfortunetly their not game insertable

 

[ScizorZ]

your still not following his advice! Try to work on ONE at a time. I would continue to work on the snake if I were you. It's your best one and needs work on shading so work on that one's shading and then the worse ones will be easier and easier to work with.

 

[5qwerty]

thanks 4 the tip ive re shaded them but unfortunetly their not game insertable

Spider: Hmm... See, Pokemon sprites face bottom left, rather than straight at the player. So try to make its face look bottom left. As I said before, that spider only contains not even eight colours. And can you see that one leg is behind the other? Well make the legs in the back darker.
Hand Thingy: What is that? Get rid of the default colours.
Fish: Probably your best one, you should probably change the contrast of the colours.
Snake: Oh come on, no one saw through that edit? But for a first edit, that's pretty good.

 

[Kotone]

they're good, better than i could ever do.
i would work on your shading.
your pixels are very flat in my opinion. xD

 

[Negative-Zero]

im choosing to work on the spider because it was my first idea and my favorite.
i made its feet flat and its now facing the right way i think so here it iz

 

[Haz]

Looks better but the leg needs to be darker on the right side.

 

[Visualization]

You need to make your sprites look a bit more 3-D, because they look rather plain to me. Try to put that extra detail into it.

Also, I think it would be best to add all your sprites to the thread starter...

 

[Negative-Zero]

i shaded the one leg and i hope it looks better and i maded a shiny version

 

[Negative-Zero]

now fox or any other administrator please dont block this post because i told my freind i would put his sprite on here because im not sure how to put it on privite messages and this is rockman0's idea not mine so if u like the idea please tell him not me

 

[ScizorZ]

why would they block it. Also it needs to be a little bigger and it needs shading. It's a pretty good concept, of an electric fox maybe?

 

[Negative-Zero]

like i said its rockman0's idea and its name is Denkage wich means shadow hound. and the reason that a moderator would delete it is because it is a double post.also i made a newly shaded spider and it has the color set. one thing ive noticed about this thread is that all of you critisize me and i want to be critisized and judged but like at the beginning i said that it would be nice if you helped me think of names and im not forcing or ordering you to think of names im SUGGESTING you to

 

[Negative-Zero]

i put a flame on it so that it looks more uh fire type-y

 

[Negative-Zero]

im running out of ideas so ya know if u want culd u give me some?

 

[~Kian~]

um well how about a little creature that isnt an animal or an object that you could make a pokemon then add features and maybe make the top of the spider's legs rounder like a real spider

 

[Negative-Zero]

i rounded the legs hope it looks better but i gotta go BYZ

 

[Negative-Zero]

some things on that
1) on its back is real fire
2)i already gave it the name pyracnid
3)its the volcano spider pokemon
oh and NEW SPRITE!!!
its name virog(i need to think of better names...)

 

[Negative-Zero]

update. sorry i havent been on in a while heres a new sprite i made. really i just made it in a few minutes by experementing when trying to make a dinosaur