my first wifi Team

[Pikachu™]

Is this team okay?

Physical Wall

Hippowdon Leftovers
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Def, 6 Atk.
Sand Stream
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang
-Roar
-Slack Off

my lead to set off sandstorm for Garchomp

Special Sweeper

Lucario Leftovers
Nature: Modest
EVs: 252 Sp. Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP.
Inner Focus
-Calm Mind
-Aura Sphere
-Dark Pulse
-Dragon Pulse

Lucario for general sweeping

Physical Sweeper

Garchomp Salac Berry
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP
Sand Veil
-Substitute
-Swords Dance
-Earthquake
-Dragon Claw

With sandstorm to boost its speed from Hippowdon maybe i will get lucky with some Hax ice beams

Defensive Calm Mind

Celebi Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 Hp, 148 Def, 32 Sp, 76 Sp.Def.
Nature Cure
-Energy ball
-Calm Mind
-Leech Seed
-Recover

Celebi is their to be a pain in the neck and keep alive to get some calm minds in

Trick Room

Dusknoir Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EVs: 252 HP, 178 Def, 80 Sp. Def.
Pressure
-Trick Room
-Will-o-Wisp
-Mean Look
-Shadow Punch

just your general dusknoir with trick room to turn the odds against those fast pokes

Rest Talker

Lapres leftovers
Nature: Modest
EVs: 192 Def, 160 SpA, 156 Sp. Atk.
Water Absorb
-Ice beam
-Thunder Bolt
-Rest
-Sleep Talk

I tried to be unique here with a uu poke here is lapres with t bolt to get rid of some other bulky water types

 

[DonRoyale]

*cracks knuckles*
omy. what to do...

Is this team okay?

Physical Wall

Hippowdon Leftovers
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Def, 6 Atk.
Sand Stream
-Earthquake
-Ice Fang
-Stealth Rock
-Slack Off

my lead to set off sandstorm for Garchomp

The Hungry Hungry Hippo cannot lead without Stealth Rock. Roar is only for mid-to-late-game excursions where you save Hippowdon. In short, SR >> Roar.

Special Sweeper

Lucario @ Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
EVs: 252 Sp. Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP.
Inner Focus
-Vaccuum Wave
-Aura Sphere
-Dark Pulse
-Dragon Pulse / HP Ice

Lucario for general sweeping

You mean to tell me you're trying Calm Mind Lucario without a Life Orb? Lulz. Anyway, SpecsLuke does more damage anyway. Get with Vaccuum Wave because Lucario's pretty slow, lol. HP Ice is strongly recommended or Salamence lulz at you.

Physical Sweeper

Garchomp Salac Berry
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP
Sand Veil
-Substitute
-Swords Dance
-Earthquake
-Dragon Claw

With sandstorm to boost its speed from Hippowdon maybe i will get lucky with some Hax ice beams

Uhh, no? Uberchomp is Uberchomp. Get this piece of shat off my screen kthnx.

Defensive Calm Mind

Celebi Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 Hp, 220 Defense, 36 Speed
Nature Cure
-Energy ball
-HP Fire / HP Ice
-Leech Seed
-Recover

Celebi is their to be a pain in the neck and keep alive to get some calm minds in

Uhh...with one attack that's walled by 90% of everything, this becomes setup fodder (plus, a lot of what switches into this poses an immediate threat to it), so drop CM, readjust the EV's, and throw in a Hidden Power. This way, you don't have to switch this thing out every two seconds because you can't do more than 3HKO practically everything (factoring in 1 Calm Mind ._.) because Salamence, Heatran, and a myriad of other Pokemon come in on their 4x resist and start setting up (Salamence) or rip you apart (Heatran).

Trick Room

Dusknoir Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EVs: 252 HP, 178 Def, 80 Sp. Def.
Pressure
-Trick Room
-Will-o-Wisp
-Mean Look
-Shadow Punch

just your general dusknoir with trick room to turn the odds against those fast pokes

What...does this do for you? I'm really not seeing it. Waste of a Pokemon, really.

Rest Talker

Lapres leftovers
Nature: Modest
EVs: 192 Def, 160 SpA, 156 Sp. Atk.
Water Absorb
-Ice beam
-Thunder Bolt
-Rest
-Sleep Talk

I tried to be unique here with a uu poke here is lapres with t bolt to get rid of some other bulky water types

Vaporeon is laughing its ass off right now.

Seriously, this entire team, barring Hippowdon, needs a complete facelift. This is a mess; there's no synergy anywhere, you're using a Uber and a UU, practically everything isn't doing the optimal set for it.

I don't even know where to begin on how this team could be better.

 

[Pikachu™]

yea thx mate for taking the pis out of my first team uberchomp i know he's uber that doesn't mean u don't rate him your suggsetions are preety crappy aswell they don't help me what so ever all im hearing is this team is a load of crap I would prefer help on making this team better then being told im crap

 

[Dark Azelf]

yea thx mate for taking the pis out of my first team uberchomp i know he's uber that doesn't mean u don't rate him your suggsetions are preety crappy aswell they don't help me what so ever all im hearing is this team is a load of crap I would prefer help on making this team better then being told im crap

Actually his suggestions were decent. Sure he could of suggested stuff to replace stuff with, BUT he was right about the majority of it. Also not once did he say your team was "crap", "needs a facelift/revamp" =/= "your team is crap"

Also this thread would of been left open if you wouldnt of said this

your suggsetions are preety crappy aswell they don't help me what so ever

in which case MORE people would of been able to come to help you, then you could take the best from each suggestion made to you.

Maybe you could elaborate why they dont help you before saying this sort of thing?

Heck you could of even said "i dont like your suggestions because....." without saying they were crappy. Which is just unnecessarily rude.

Point of thread; Learn to take criticism please or just dont bother posting.



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