need help for a competitive team

[gamefan1]

ok so i dont really get wath makes a team competitive or not but so far im restarting all over my team this is wat i have so far

Blastoise:
leftover

-counter
-mirror coat
-protect
-rapid spin
(currently trainig maxing out SP.Def and Def)

houndoom: flash fire
focus band

-flamethrower
-will-o-wisp
-pursuit
-crunch
(currently trainig maxing out SP.Att and Speed)

Gengar: leftover
levitate

-thunderbolt
-shadow ball
-psychic
-destiny bond
(max speed and HP)

im currently looking for the others i have heart gold finished and pokemon emerald with complete national dex so im open to any idea XD

 

[.Gamer]

https://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/intro_comp_pokemon

this is probably going to be a very helpful article judging by the first half of your first sentence.

 

[gamefan1]

mmmk i see i dint get eveything but since i have lots of my pokemon using moves like double team etc... ill need to make lots of change thx for the link

 

[PlatinumDude]

This team needs some serious remodeling:

ok so i dont really get wath makes a team competitive or not but so far im restarting all over my team this is wat i have so far

Blastoise:
leftover

-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Toxic
-rapid spin
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/4 SAtk

houndoom: flash fire
Life Orb/Leftovers

-flamethrower
-Nasty Plot
-Dark Pulse
-Hidden Power (Grass)
(currently trainig maxing out SP.Att and Speed)
Nature: Timid

Gengar: Life Orb
levitate

-Focus Blast
-shadow ball
-Thunderbolt
-Hidden Power (Fire)/Explosion
Nature: Timid
EVs: 4 HP/252 SAtk/252 Spe

im currently looking for the others i have heart gold finished and pokemon emerald with complete national dex so im open to any idea XD

Comments/suggestions in bold. You'll need some more team members, though.

 

[gamefan1]

oky using pokemon mariland team rater and smogon rule heres th team i made :

sceptile:
jolly nature
leftover
Ev'S:4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed

-sword dance
-leaf blade
-earthquake
-rock slide

vaporeon:
bold nature
focus band
Ev'S188 HP / 252 Def / 68 SpD

-surf
-haze
-toxic
-ice beam


charizard
adamant nature
lum berry
Ev'S:144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spe

-flare blitz
-eartquake
-sword dance
-roost


shedinja:
lonely nature
choice band
Ev'S:252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

-arial ace
-sword dance
-toxic
-protect


gengar:
timid
silk scarf
Ev'S:4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

-shadow ball
-thunderbolt
-psychic
-explosion


for the last pokemon i was thinking about jolteon or tyranator i still dont know XD.

(btw must of my team was constructed by following smogon pk example so thx again fot the link :)

 

[*ADJ*]

Id go with a dragon dancing tyranitar personally

Nature: Jolly
Item: Babiri Berry / Life Orb / Lum Berry
Moveset:
~ Dragon Dance
~ Stone Edge / Rock Slide
~ Crunch
~ Fire Punch / Earthquake / Aqua Tail
Ev Spread: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

 

[SacredMiKeY]

Why does Vaporeon have a Focus Band, that's considered a hax item since it's based on luck not skill, it should have Leftovers.

 

[Dark Azelf]

K lets sort this out.

oky using pokemon mariland team rater and smogon rule heres th team i made :

sceptile:
jolly nature
leftover
Ev'S:4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed

-sword dance
-leaf blade
-earthquake
-rock slide

Inferior Breloom imo.

Breloom@ Toxic Orb
12 HP / 252 Atk / 244 Spe
Adamant Nature
Trait : Poison Heal
- Spore
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Stone Edge / Seed Bomb

Also takes status for your team.


vaporeon:
bold nature
Leftovers
Ev'S188 HP / 252 Def / 68 SpD

-surf
-Wish
-Protect
-Hidden Power Electric

Lol Focus Band. Also needs lefties, Wish and Protect for healing. HP Electric because Gyarados kinda steam rolls you.

charizard
adamant nature
lum berry
Ev'S:144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spe

-flare blitz
-eartquake
-sword dance
-roost

Infernape does this set better.

Infernape@ Life Orb / Black Belt
252 Att / 252 Speed / 6 HP
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Close Combat
- Flare Blitz (with Black Belt) / Fire Punch / Blaze Kick
- Stone Edge / Mach Punch

Not SR weak and hits harder and has better coverage. Stone Edge is for Gyarados and Mence whilst Mach Punch is for scarfers like Heatran and Tar to stop them revenge killing you.

shedinja:
lonely nature
choice band
Ev'S:252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

-arial ace
-sword dance
-toxic
-protect


Dont use this. Loses to EVERYTHING. SR/Spikes/T-Spikes gone up ? Nice wasted slot. Hippowdon, Aboma or Tar in play ? Nice wasted slot.

Scizor@Choice Band
248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Speed
Trait : Technician
Adamant Nature
- Bullet Punch
- U-Turn
- SuperPower
- Pursuit / Quick Attack

Superior Bug.



gengar:
timid
Life Orb
Ev'S:4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

-shadow ball
-Substitute
-Focus Blast
-Pain Split

This Gengar gets more done and has better coverage. Sub + Pain Split lets you beat counters like Blissey.

K his looks a little better. Comments in bold.