need help on writing chapter 3

What's your overall aim for this chapter?
As in, what is the overarching thing you're trying to do with this one?
I think that's a good place to start to have some direction.
 
What's your overall aim for this chapter?
As in, what is the overarching thing you're trying to do with this one?
I think that's a good place to start to have some direction.

i was thinking of having roko tell kimiko the eevee how she met kindle at school *when he was still a eevee* in the form of a flashback


that's all i've got at the moment...
 
That flashback idea seems like it'll be fine for that chapter. You have an idea of how Kimiko met Kindle?

kimiko didn't meet kindle yet at that time... roko did... at school... roko is just telling her how she met him



kindle, when he was a eevee, saved her from bullies *a Banette & a Salandit* when they were at school..
 
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