New Song?

[TogeKisser]

Hey guyz, i wrote a song which i think is epic for me, and i don't feel comfortable putting it on youtube, even though i want to, would you guyz mind reviewing it for me? i'll record it right now.

IDK, i tried 4 different things but errors came up for each one? can someone explain how to put in a video or vidoe link?

Nevermind, i managed to do it! please comment!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8E9tQ8gm7J1dnAxTDk5SHFvMzg/view?usp=sharing

 

[DoomDoom]

TBH you do have a really good singing voice.
It does sound good, I'm guessing you can make it more presentable when uploaded to YT. (Editing and maybe even instrumentation.) and it could turn half decent.

 

[moon]

Hey guyz, i wrote a song which i think is epic for me, and i don't feel comfortable putting it on youtube, even though i want to, would you guyz mind reviewing it for me? i'll record it right now.

IDK, i tried 4 different things but errors came up for each one? can someone explain how to put in a video or vidoe link?

Nevermind, i managed to do it! please comment!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8E9tQ8gm7J1dnAxTDk5SHFvMzg/view?usp=sharing

Oh wow, I really like your voice! Don't rush it though, take your time to sing the words and like Johnny says, maybe singing with a back track (just percussion or something perhaps?) or having a timer could help you.

The song is interesting c: