Ah, I suppose I was unclear. I meant the hood and the head, mainly. I'll try to smooth out those edges, and I see what you mean about the body. I can't remember if I meant to miss out the rest of it or not, but it was a bad decision either way.I don't know about emphasizing the upper body (wherever that is on a snake), but the belly area on the left could have a smoother outline and the outline at the bottom is a horizontal line that bends right into a 45 degree angle as you move to the right. The tip of the tail also starts to curve upward even though if you follow the body starting from the head you would expect the tail to poke out from nearer the bottom. The image you based it on shows more of the snake in the "gap" which fills in the mental image of a continuous body, but you've cut that part out. Bring it back.
Also, your scaled down Carnivine looks good, but its front teeth are bothering me. There are gaps between all the teeth in the original and you filled some of them in with thicker teeth.
Your revamps look good as do you maps, although the one for Pokémon Crimson looks a little plain.
I see what you mean about the front teeth. It took me a bit of time to get to something I was happy with, but I think that'd be a minor edit.
The Crimson map was just fixing an existing one they already had, but I'll try to improve it if they ask.
News! New revamps and a Pokéball pixel over:
![[PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea [PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea](https://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevamp-3.png)
Fixed Delibird's feathers
![[PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea [PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea](https://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/HoundourRevamp.png)
Houndour
![[PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea [PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea](https://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Pokeballs/PokemonSelectBall.png)
![[PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea [PokeCommunity.com] NikNaks' Miscellanea](https://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Pokeballs/PokemonSelectFull.png)
Pokéball, and a mock-up of what it might look like in-game
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