Of Vices and Virtues[M](OOC)

[Kikpanther]

I'm sorry! D:

I worked too hard to quit now! DX

 

[The warden]

For those of you waiting to be accepted, I will make my decision some time tomorrow because I've only got my phone right now and I hate trying to write long posts on it.

 

[Fuyu]

No problem Warden. :) Please take your time. I am glad you like them both though Zero.

 

[The warden]

To Kiklion and Fuyu who are waiting for me to pass judgement on your SUs. I have read both of them and am impressed by what I have seen. I commend the both of you on your efforts. However only one of you is able to take the aspects you wish for. I have noted things in each of your SUs and am awaiting a TornZero's thoughts on them.

There is a simple solution that you may agree to however. You could negotiate between the two of you and decide for one of you to keep one of the aspects and each also change one. This would result in the least amount of work for each of you. If you manage to come to any agreement let me know. Otherwise TornZero and I will have a decision to you soon.

 

[Lt. Col. Fantastic]

Heres what I have so far.

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Sins/Virtues​

Spoiler:

I: Normal Form

Name: Dillon Summers

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sin: Sloth

Virtue: Temperance

Appearance: Dillon is a six foot one man, with light blond hair and electric blue eyes. He is fairly muscular, able to keep up with the stronger guys on his football (soccer) team. (although he quit last year) He's also strikingly handsome. His usual clothes are black jeans, black/violet converse shoes, t-shirts, and usually a jacket or hoodie of some kind. He spikes his hair up into an anime-faux hawk style hairdo, which is about two and a half inches tall, but the sides and back are buzzed down, so his haircut looks kinda stupid whenever he forgets to gel it. Also, Dillon wears a pair of purple foakleys (fake oakleys), which he always wears (whether on his shirt or on his face) He drives a motorcycle, and wears riding gloves/jackets and a violet helmet when on the road.

Personality: Dillon is an extremely laid back guy. He doesn't care about much, not even himself. He just wants to have fun, and he does what he wants. He doesn't do what he doesn't want, and usually that is any type of work. He is friendly to people he likes, and jokes around a lot, but is a downright dickhead to people he doesn't care for. He wouldn't hesitate to bash someone for asking a dumb question, or even call them out when they lie. Otherwise, he looks out for his "bros", and usually has their back. In school, he makes great grades on tests, as he is a very intelligent man. But he doesn't ever do homework, and only does classwork when its with a group (and by do classwork I mean copy someone else) so he sits in the top 10% comfortably and carefree. He cares for his grandmother, and does what he can for her. She looked after him until he moved out a year ago, and now he visits her often to make sure she's okay. I guess you could call her his weak spot for caring.

History: Dillon was born and raised in Melbourne, Australia. His parents were both wealthy doctors, and Dillon was expected to follow in their footsteps. From an early age, his parents stressed the importance of making good grades, and doing well in school. Dillon was focused and amnitious as a child, always competing to be the best in the class. He didn't have to, but he studied a lot and learned extra information, usually just reading the entire textbook collection on the subject. He soon discovered that this was completely unneccesary and a waste of time, and began to dwindle in his studies. He still made top scores in class, but he slowly stopped working for it. The breaking point into full out BIRDGAFosity (B**** I Really Don't Give A F***) was when his parents died. He was 13, almost in high school, when he just completely stopped. When his parents died, he came to the conclusion that nothing really matters, and he should just do what he wants, before he dies unexpectingly. He still made good grades, but only because his perfect test average pulled up his 25% classwork/homework average. He lives with his grandmother now, and rides a motorcycle. Why? Because he f***ing wants to.

Powers: His first human power is to sap others' willpower. He can simple make them not want to do something, or even reverse it and drive them to it. His other power is to tell if someone is trying to decieve him. He basidally turns into a human lie detector, only instead of reading heart beats or other bullcrap he just knows

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II: Holy Form

Appearance: Dillon's holy form mainly changes clothing. He dons a pure white version of his black jeans, with a golden t-shirt that has a picture of a halo on it. His blonde hair turns slightly golder, and his glasses turn pure gold. His eyes go from brigt blue to livid green, and the pulsate with yellow and gold energy deep inside.

Artefact: "Welcome to the Temperate Zone", the sunglasses. They are secured with magic on his face, and are unremovable by any force besides his own. His sense of humor shows when he names these.

Powers:

MASSive power: Dillon can control his mass, becoming more dense to become an unmovable object, or lowering it to become intangable. This can be spred to what he is touching, though it takes more focus to do more than his clothes.

Karmatic Optics: Dillon can see if a person is doing something wrong or evil, or if they are about to do something wrong. When he looks at an evil-doer, the glow red. If he sees a person doing the right thing, they just look normal.

Soul Seeker: Dillon can read a person's soul, which can give him information on every karmatic decision they have made in their life. It also grants him the ability to see their desires, hopes and dreams, as well as fears or regrets.

Flight: Dillon can levitate, or fly at will. Honestly simple.

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III: Hell Form

Appearance: Dillon's Hell Form takes the shape of a humanoid dragon. Hos body is covered in black scales, with grey scales around his face and hands/feet. His face is elongated to look more dragon like, and his teeth get very pointy. Another cool thing is his back sprouts a pair of batlike wings, covered in black and red scales (red near the tips to resemble flame). He can use these to fly. Also, his hands grow claws, and he grows a long, reptilian tail.

Powers:

Exert Force: Dragillon can exert force, which can knock people back. It is basically a shockwave that goes all around hos body and extends outwards, pushing things back.

Dragon Breath: Dillon can shoot lightning or fire out of his mouth. The fire is dark red, and leaves lava behind on anything it touches. The lightning is red, and is more like a flamethrower than an actual lighning bolt.

Soul Arrows: Dillon can shoot soul energy from his hands, taking the shape of whatever he decides (a bullet, ball, arrow, banana, you name it.)

Chaotic Lightning: Basically looks like force lightning, only it is red coloured and is much stronger. This can be used to buff Dillons fist attacks or to be launched at foes. He can charge it up for stronger bursts.

 

[The warden]

I have made a decision on the Kiklion and Fuyu front. Any arrangements that need to be made will be made with the two players via PM.

 

[moon]

I'm tempted to sign up (with Envy/Diligence) but I'm not sure what this RP is really meant to be about. Will it be a "school RP" or will it mostly take place in other situations? I understand there is some kind of plot behind this, but I just feel a bit too blind to blindly sign up atm ^^'

 

[TornZero]

Hooray, the Legendary Red is interested!

The setting will generally be a school; the world will get distorted at times, there are certain cases where alternate dimensions may be involved, there's possibly going to be some Inception-like scenes, etc., but overall the RP will almost entirely take place in a boarding school.

 

[The warden]

I'm tempted to sign up (with Envy/Diligence) but I'm not sure what this RP is really meant to be about. Will it be a "school RP" or will it mostly take place in other situations? I understand there is some kind of plot behind this, but I just feel a bit too blind to blindly sign up atm ^^'

It's a school based RP with a mix of different genres in it. Though the main theme is internal struggle with your feelings there will be many other themes. There will be supernatural elements, action, horror, quite possibly romance and that's not all. There are quite a few plots that have been worked on and the rather open ended story line is intended to give a great range of freedom.

p.s. If you haven't gained anything from this then it's not a problem. I understand I can waffle on a bit at times. Try asking about specific things and I'll better be able to answer you. You may get a better answer that way. :)

 

[Lt. Col. Fantastic]

Alright, changed some stuff around. Tell me what you guys think.

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Sins/Virtues​

Spoiler:

I: Normal Form

Name: Dillon Summers

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sin: Sloth

Virtue: Temperance

Appearance: Dillon is a six foot one man, with light blond hair and electric blue eyes. He is fairly muscular, able to keep up with the stronger guys on his football (soccer) team. (although he quit last year) He's also strikingly handsome. His usual clothes are black jeans, black/violet converse shoes, t-shirts, and usually a jacket or hoodie of some kind. He spikes his hair up into an anime-faux hawk style hairdo, which is about two and a half inches tall, but the sides and back are buzzed down, so his haircut looks kinda stupid whenever he forgets to gel it. Also, Dillon wears a pair of purple foakleys (fake oakleys), which he always wears (whether on his shirt or on his face) He drives a motorcycle, and wears riding gloves/jackets and a violet helmet when on the road.

Personality: Dillon is an extremely laid back guy. He doesn't care about much, not even himself. He just wants to have fun, and he does what he wants. He doesn't do what he doesn't want, and usually that is any type of work. He is friendly to people he likes, and jokes around a lot, but is a downright dickhead to people he doesn't care for. He wouldn't hesitate to bash someone for asking a dumb question, or even call them out when they lie. Otherwise, he looks out for his "bros", and usually has their back. In school, he makes great grades on tests, as he is a very intelligent man. But he doesn't ever do homework, and only does classwork when its with a group (and by do classwork I mean copy someone else) so he sits in the top 10% comfortably and carefree. He cares for his grandmother, and does what he can for her. She looked after him until he moved out a year ago, and now he visits her often to make sure she's okay. I guess you could call her his weak spot for caring. His laziness doesn't often reflect on his appearance, however. He always makes sure to dress nicely and gel his hair the right way.

He is also a member of the marching band, and can play any brass instrument and the piano. His favorite thing to do is jam on his keyboard, and he can be seen carrying it throughout the halls on occasion, playing and singing loud songs. Most people either find this hilarious, awesome, or downright annoying. But he doesn't care, because he does what he pleases!

History: Dillon was born and raised in Melbourne, Australia. His parents were both wealthy doctors, and Dillon was expected to follow in their footsteps. From an early age, his parents stressed the importance of making good grades, and doing well in school. Dillon was focused and ambitious as a child, always competing to be the best in the class. He didn't have to, but he studied a lot and learned extra information, usually just reading the entire textbook collection on the subject. He soon discovered that this was completely unnecessary and a waste of time, and began to dwindle in his studies. He still made top scores in class, but he slowly stopped working for it. The breaking point into full out BIRDGAFosity (B**** I Really Don't Give A F***) was when his parents died. He was 13, almost in high school, when he just completely stopped. When his parents died, he came to the conclusion that nothing really matters, and he should just do what he wants, before he dies unexpectedly. He still made good grades, but only because his perfect test average pulled up his 25% classwork/homework average. He lived with his grandmother until last year. He moved out because her small apartment was getting crowded for the two of them. He tried renting an apartment nearby, but he couldn't find one for the right price. He now lives with his friend George's dad's hotel, getting a special discount on a room to stay in.

He has been doing a lot of potentially dangerous things lately, like trading in his car for a motorcycle, and recklessly stopping a convenient store robbery on his block.

Powers: His first human power is to sap/build others' willpower. He can simply make them not want to do something, or even reverse it and drive them to it. His other power is to tell if someone is trying to deceive him. He basically turns into a human lie detector, only instead of reading heart beats or other bull crap he just knows if they are lying.

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II: Holy Form

Appearance: Dillon's holy form mainly changes clothing. He dons a pure white version of his black jeans, with a golden t-shirt that has a white and black piano keyboard on it. His shoes go from violet to gold, with white laces instead of black. His blonde hair turns slightly golder, and his glasses turn pure gold. His eyes go from bright blue to livid green, and the pulsate with yellow and gold energy deep inside. He also grows a pair of large, feathery wings, the feathers being the same color as his hair.

Artefact: "Welcome to the Temperate Zone", the sunglasses. They are secured with magic on his face, and are non removable by any force besides his own. His sense of humor shows when he names these.

Powers:

MASSive power: Dillon can control his mass, becoming more dense to become an unmovable object, or lowering it to become intangible. This can be spread to what he is touching, though it takes more focus to do more than his clothes.

Karmic Optics: Dillon can see if a person is doing something wrong or evil, or if they are about to do something wrong. When he looks at an evil-doer, the glow red. If he sees a person doing the right thing, they just look normal.

Soul Seeker: Dillon can read a person's soul, which can give him information on every karmic decision they have made in their life. It also grants him the ability to see their desires, hopes and dreams, as well as fears or regrets.

Sunlight Blade: Dillon can create swords made of pure white energy. Ironically they are gold in color, and he dubbed them sunlight blades. They are sort of like light sabers, only much cooler looking. (think of him holding a thunderbolt as a sword)

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III: Hell Form

Appearance: Dillon turns demon, growing Taurus like black horns from his head. He also has a long, black furred tail as well. His hair turns black, and his eyes go from blue to glowing red, with blackness coming off of his pupils and seeping into his irises. His fingernails turn into a more claw like state, and turn black. His teeth are sharp and pointy as well. His clothing changes into all black everything, with red shoes and belt. His skin also changes to be grey instead of its white-ish color. He can grow wings too, but they can also be hidden from sight.

Powers:

Willpowerups: Can steal away peoples willpower to power himself up. The more intent the enemy is on fighting him, the stronger he becomes.

ChronoKinetics: Can manipulate time. Basically, he can freeze time itself, or slow it down or even speed it up. He can also travel around in time, but has to create a stable time loop to do so. (think the hourglass necklace thing in Harry Potter)

Insect manipulation: Dillon can recruit insects to do his evil bidding! Even though it says insects, spiders and other arachnia can be used too.

Webbing: Dillon can shoot webs, like spider-man!

 

[TornZero]

Aside from fixing up the formatting, and obviously expanding (quite a bit) on the powers since some require some major balance, the biggest problem with the holy and hell forms I can see at a glance is chronokinesis. We let Raikiri have gravity manipulation because he's got the reputation for it; we know he'll keep himself in check without having to intervene, likely not even once. It's also able to be moderated similarly to telekinesis, so it can be altered rather freely to fit the pseudo-psychic position. Time manipulation, however, is something utterly forbidden in general. There is literally no way whatsoever to moderate and balance it without having to completely disable it and its effectiveness, and there is no way I can conceive to use it without crossing the borders into godmoding or, again, completely disabling it and its effectiveness.

Unless The warden's actually willing to give you a chance to make this worth the while, this'll be non-negotiable.

Explaining on the powers (This is just me pointing out what I think of them as I read through them.)

Temperance:

Spoiler:

• The Karmic Optics: This seems rather useless. Even a sin can do good, and virtues evil. This power makes it seem as if you believe it's black and white, and it can easily get confused if the good guy is attacking the evil-doer. I mean, if the good guy's on offense with murderous intent (say, revenge for the bad guy killing his girlfriend or something), who'll have the red glow?

• MASSive Power: This, without the major balance like I said, can get so overpowered that it's to the point of being ridiculous. Without a serious limit, you could become as dense as the Earth, invulnerable to damage, or accidentally dissipate your body into air.

• Soul Seeker: Maybe make it so he can only see the most recent karmic decisions, and only their most visible hopes and fears?

• Sunlight Blades: This really just needs some balance; I don't see a problem having this power at all. He summons them; does he have to maintain their form and usefulness? Also, what can they penetrate? or are they the equivalent of light sabers in their entirety and can cut through generally anything?

Overall, none of your Holy powers are even related to temperance as a virtue. Regulation; balance; restraint and self-control. While the powers can still be used and they can grow stronger over time, not a single one has a relation to Dillon's virtue, at least that I can see. Also, how has the virtue affected Dillon's personality? All he's become is more reckless, which is the total opposite of his virtue.

Sloth:

Spoiler:

• Willpowerup: Stealing people's willpower will only leave Dillon as strong as when he started, as he won't have a continuous stream of willpower to support exerting the power he stole. (Stealing implies that they won't have it any more once Dillon takes it.) This needs to be rephrased if you want anything useful out of it.

• Insect & Arachnid Control: This one, and the Webbing, is like the Sunlight Blades. I don't mind them being here at all—they're pretty dang cool—they just need some balance to make them applicable. Does he have a range of control, and can the bugs' personalities or instincts conflict with his orders? Does he have a limit on how much webbing he can produce in a certain period of time?

While your Sloth powers are generally going to be easier to work with than the Temperance powers, you still face the issue that only one of them is even Sloth-related, and it only makes others lose the will to bother fighting. As with Temperance, you should also explain how the sin has affected Dillon's personality.

 

[Lt. Col. Fantastic]

Alrighty, I will jump on those changes.

(And btws on the karma vision thing, I'd say the attacker would be red, because even though hes a good guy he is doing a bad thing, revenge, at the time he looked. It was kinda like a right-then thing. But I'm changing it anyway so it doesn't really matter.)

 

[The warden]

While it seems we have a lack of players I'm still going to go ahead with this. If you have a character in the making be sure to post them before Monday. On Monday I will fill any remaining places for the sins/virtues places myself. After that the IC thread should be up and we should be able to start.

 

[Fuyu]

Could I possibly make an ordinary student, to help fill in some places?

 

[TornZero]

Of course, Fuyu! We weren't expecting 14 players, so feel free to make a normal student.

 

[Fuyu]

Okay thanks! I shall start now! XD Finished! Sorry, it's not as epic as my other one. I'm running on low steam.

Spoiler:

Name: Josiah "Joey" Spanner

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Sin: Envy

Virtue: Diligence

Appearance:

Well, aren't you a cutie?

If Joey has to hear that one more time, he'll cry. He really will. He's been called a girl more than most rockstars and he is not even a punk. That just isn't nice you know. Anyway...

Joey is the unfortunate soul whose lack of puberty has led him to looking significantly less male than he ought to look. Lots of people are embarrassed by this, no one more than he himself. It is not simply his lack of height that gives this illusion, though he's pretty sure it isn't hindering it either. It's the fact that he's... curvy. Most males don't have curves, particularly ones that make your form look according to specialists,petite. It's rather humiliating, especially when you take into consideration that he's also got a mild case of asthma. He tends to have to look up at people a lot, nine times out of ten at people in his own age group. His skin is rather tan actually, he does spend time in the sun. Plus one of his parents was supposedly of foreign descent (Not that he's sure) which accentuates his skin color to a light golden-brown. His father jokes that it matches the rest of him.

He's a little blond boy, angelic in the face and naturally fulfilling every stereotype despite the color being the color of wheat and his face sporting a couple of early pimples. His smiles hold a dimple and accentuate his multicolored eyes, one of which is hazel and the other forest green. Both have a slight tinge of grey, which in his opinion is just plain odd. His hair is a wild mass of fluffed up everywhere, so it sticks up all over the place. In his ears are a pair of small blue hearing aids and a red bandanna sometimes rests on his head to keep his unkempt hair out of his eyes.

Joey wears old, baggy clothes. Part of this is to hide how girly he looks, while another part is simply because he doesn't want to get paint on nice things. Everything he owns basically dangles off his limbs like noodles. Underneath a black smock is a white shirt, buttoned formally so it doesn't slip off. Blue jeans are held up by a belt and torn at the cuffs, leaving his mostly bare feet to barely be covered by plain sneakers. Around his neck is a cross, one that he doesn't know if it means any value to him or not. Also, Joey carries a "man-purse" because he gets rather paranoid about his art supplies and such, as well as his homework. There's no makeup or girly things in there... except a teddy bear.

Personality:

Joey is that kid at the side of the room who knows the answer the question but doesn't have enough guts to actually poke it out of his mouth. That would require speaking and he has about as much confidence in that as a sea anemone. It's not that he's scared of people actually. He grew up with about five brothers, three sisters, and his parents for god's sake. He got over his fear of people years ago. He just has this horrible case of permanent stage fright. It makes him stutter, jump, slur a couple words, and be a general nuisance to the population. Joey can talk to people. In fact, small groups without any particular big and scary authority are perfectly fine for him. Just no class, no classroom with high expectations. EVER.

Even when he talks to people, Joey has a quiet voice, almost rather shy. However, it's also somewhat peppy. He has the natural ability to get people interested in what he's saying. He also speaks to the point. While he's very happy listening to people ramble about kittens, he knows people really don't want to listen to him do it. He doesn't look or sound much like a boy so he figures it's just because his sheer oddity is disconcerting. He can be found mumbling to himself, mostly because he's very forgetful and recording it with a pen he carries in his pocket.

Joey is a well-known cloud-cuckoolander. He's a brilliant boy mind you, but he's also rather dreamy, spacing out and accidentally doodling on his homework. He'll also lose his train of thought rather easily and drift off mid-sentence. Then he'll jump back with something about pumpkins or another equally as random topic. He happens to know a lot about everything but his inability to use this information is rather disheartening... along with the fact that he blurts some of it randomly. This dreamy sort of thought process sometimes causes him to confuse people but he has faith he will get the right thing eventually. He's rather willing to wait.

He really likes animals and art, especially sheep he's accidentally dumped paint on. He's been around animals since he was very young and misses his miniature horse Bella, who was such a sweet darling to him. He gets rather... focused when working on his works. It's just a shame his handwriting is god awful. Joey is a bit of a nature freak. If there was a topic he could remember, it's that one.

Josiah dislikes showoffs and super talented people. Ironically, he has the potential to be one of those people. He just... doesn't. He's really jealous of them because they don't bother to deal with everyone else and plow on ahead with what they want. He's of course also angry but he mostly wishes he could overcome his own issues. He's really jealous of people who can play sports, since he's well... got a few issues with that. He's doing his best though. He's getting slowly better at running. Joey works hard to overcome things... even though he usually falls flat on his face. Everything is so great in concept right?

History:

Josiah was probably born in Hawaii. Or Toronto. Or somewhere over there. He doesn't know. What he does know is that he was adopted from a Wales orphanage after being very abruptly dropped onto the manager's lap as a toddler by a couple of enigmatic people who he has no memory of. He wasn't very well liked at this place, but he wasn't hated either. He was the weird little kid who could barely hear and run around, but read books rather well. A couple, having an oddly large family that enjoyed mixing themselves with the other children, pulled him along for the ride at the age of six.

Poor Josiah ended up that day with four siblings (at the time) and a whole lot of animals on the closest thing to a city farm that exists. He was dragged all around a house by kids he didn't even know and proceeded to scream and run outside, hiding in the sand dune for about six hours. They did thankfully find him. He unfortunately didn't have a particularly good time for a good few months, even years due to the family havign this bad habit of magically multiplying. However, he did grow used to it and the whole being homeschooled thing. He didn't mind learning at home, his siblings certainly didn't. After all, this was faster, had use of the internet, and tended not to make him wake up early.Also, they gave him hearing aids, which he's very happy about.

However, others, namely neighbors, did.

His brothers had this little habit of... screaming while they were outside. People didn't like that at eleven in the morning, particularly since all of their children were in little rooms doing work. Gosh darn it all so would the crazy Spanner clan. However, whenever they came to complain, all they saw was Josiah, studiously working away under the tutelage of his adoptive mother, as well as a few of the quieter children. Well, them and the occasional farm animal laying nearby. No one was quite sure what to say to this.

It was around this point, before the big scary test day, that Joey started raising Bella as a "project". She wasn't precisely easy to tame but the two of them had fun. Besides, what neighbor kid could say they had a horse? Really now, that was the pinnacle of cool! Sort of.

The whole thing with the academy was unfortunately neighbors taking notice and "blackmailing" the poor Spanner group into giving it a test run. No one, least of all Joey, expected him to get in. Sadly he did and to be honest, it still kind of scares him.

 

[Kikpanther]

Alrighty. Have kind of been stuck in things I need to do and then musing over how to change my SU.

Gonna try and get it Saturday or Sunday.

 

[TornZero]

As long as you get it in, Kiklion. ^_^

 

[Lt. Col. Fantastic]

I've changed up the abilities. Of course, let me know if anything is non satisfactory!

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Spoiler:

I: Normal Form

Name: Dillon Summers

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sin: Sloth

Virtue: Temperance

Appearance: Dillon is a six foot one man, with light blond hair and electric blue eyes. He is fairly muscular, able to keep up with the stronger guys on his football (soccer) team. (although he quit last year) He's also strikingly handsome. His usual clothes are black jeans, black/violet converse shoes, t-shirts, and usually a jacket or hoodie of some kind. He spikes his hair up into an anime-faux hawk style hairdo, which is about two and a half inches tall, but the sides and back are buzzed down, so his haircut looks kinda stupid whenever he forgets to gel it. Also, Dillon wears a pair of purple foakleys (fake oakleys), which he always wears (whether on his shirt or on his face) He drives a motorcycle, and wears riding gloves/jackets and a violet helmet when on the road.

Personality: Dillon is an extremely laid back guy. He doesn't care about much, not even himself. He just wants to have fun, and he does what he wants. He doesn't do what he doesn't want, and usually that is any type of work. He is friendly to people he likes, and jokes around a lot, but is a downright dickhead to people he doesn't care for. He wouldn't hesitate to bash someone for asking a dumb question, or even call them out when they lie. Otherwise, he looks out for his "bros", and usually has their back. In school, he makes great grades on tests, as he is a very intelligent man. But he doesn't ever do homework, and only does classwork when its with a group (and by do classwork I mean copy someone else) so he sits in the top 10% comfortably and carefree. He cares for his grandmother, and does what he can for her. She looked after him until he moved out a year ago, and now he visits her often to make sure she's okay. I guess you could call her his weak spot for caring. His laziness doean't often reflect on his aapearence, however. He always makes sure to dress nicely and gel his hair the right way.

He is also a member of the marching band, and can play any brass instrument and the piano. His favorite thing to do is jam on his keyboard, and he can be seen carrying it throughout the halls on occasion, playing and singing loud songs. Most people either find this hilarious, awesome, or downright annoying. But he doesn't care, because he does what he pleases!

History: Dillon was born and raised in Melbourne, Australia. His parents were both wealthy doctors, and Dillon was expected to follow in their footsteps. From an early age, his parents stressed the importance of making good grades, and doing well in school. Dillon was focused and amnitious as a child, always competing to be the best in the class. He didn't have to, but he studied a lot and learned extra information, usually just reading the entire textbook collection on the subject. He soon discovered that this was completely unneccesary and a waste of time, and began to dwindle in his studies. He still made top scores in class, but he slowly stopped working for it. The breaking point into full out BIRDGAFosity (B**** I Really Don't Give A F***) was when his parents died. He was 13, almost in high school, when he just completely stopped. When his parents died, he came to the conclusion that nothing really matters, and he should just do what he wants, before he dies unexpectingly. He still made good grades, but only because his perfect test average pulled up his 25% classwork/homework average. He lived with his grandmother until last year. He moved out beacause her small appartment was getting crowded for the two of them. He tried renting an appartment nearby, but he couldn't find one for the right price. He now lives with his friend George's dad's hotel, getting a special discount on a room to stay in.

He has been doing a lot of potentially dangerous things lately, like trading in his car for a motorcycle, and recklessly stopping a convienant store robbery on his block. Even more Recently, he has been able to control his temper better, not that it was really an issue to begin with. But he has also pretty much given up on success, not taking anything seriously. He really doesn't care if he gets in to St. Judes or not and only sent in an application to shut up his grandmother. He still shows up to work, but only because he has nothing better to do, and actually enjoys it. (he helps the middle school band as an assistant directer)

Due to his sin, he has recently stopped caring about doing much anything, sometimes even being to lazy to eat or buy necessary groceries.

Powers: His first human power is to sap/build others' willpower. He can simply make them not want to do something, or even reverse it and drive them to it. His other power, coming from his virtue, is

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II: Holy Form

Appearance: Dillon's holy form mainly changes clothing. He dons a pure white version of his black jeans, with a golden t-shirt that has a white and black piano keyboard on it. His shoes go from violet to gold, with white laces instead of black. His blonde hair turns slightly golder, and his glasses turn pure gold. His eyes go from brigt blue to livid green, and the pulsate with yellow and gold energy deep inside. He also grows a pair of large, feathery wings, the feathers being the same color as his hair.

Artefact: "Welcome to the Temperate Zone", the sunglasses. They are secured with magic on his face, and are unremovable by any force besides his own. His sense of humor shows when he names these.

Powers:

MASSive power: Dillon can control his mass, becoming more dense to become an unmovable object, or lowering it to become intangable. This can be spred to what he is touching, though it takes more focus to do more than his clothes. He can become intangible enough to go through walls and such, but not enough to be a totally gaseous form. He can increase his mass to be that of about a SUV.

Hothead: Dillon can cause people to lose some control, makingnthem more hot headed and irrational.

Mello: Dillon's presence can cause people to act more rationally and level headed around him. In a sense, they have more self control.

Sunlight Blade: Dillon can create swords made of pure white energy. Ironically they are gold in color, and he dubbed them sunlight blades. They are sort of like lightsabers, only much cooler looking. (think of him holding a thunderbolt as a sword) They can cut through most anything, but denser materials can stop it (like lead) They can go through common metals like steel and iron. When he summons them, they usually take the form of dual swords, but they can be smaller like knives as well. (but not any bigger than say a claymore)

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III: Hell Form

Appearance: Dillon turns demon, growing Taurus like black horns from his head. He also has a long, black furred tail as well. His hair turns black, and his eyes go from blue to glowing red, with blackness coming off of his pupils and seeping into his irises. His fingernails turn into a more clawlike state, and turn black. His teeth ar sharp and pointy as well. His clothing changes into all black everything, with red shoes and belt. His skin also changes to be grey instead of its white-ish color. He can grow wings too, but they can also be hidden from sight.

Powers:

Willpowerups: Can boost off of people's willpower to power himself up. The more intent the enemy is on fighting him, the stronger he becomes.

Sloth: (Real creative name, LCF....) Dillon can make people's reflexes and movements slightly slower/lazier. Although he can turn it on and off, it affects everyone (even his allies) when its on.

Insect manipulation: Dillon can recruit insects to do his evil bidding! Even though it says insects, spiders and other arachnia can be used too. He has to be within range to recruit them, but after that they can go as far away from him as they want. They will carry out their mission from the last time they were ordered by Dillon. The dumber ones (ants and the like; hive based insects) will actually starve to death if given a mission they don't complete quickly.

Webbing: Dillon can shoot webs, like spider-man! There is a limit to how much he can make, and it refills overtime. He can usually shoot around 30 lbs of it before running dry. They are really strong, but they can be cut through or burned (Even broken, by something as strong or stronger than a horse)

 

[Fuyu]

I finished my "normal" person! Let me know if he's not up to snuff! :D