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PKMN Territories... REDUX!

((Actually, the slowpoke/rain myth is more of a legend than a known fact))

Umbra bounded to the dragon's den, and when he saw all of his old enemies, including latias fighting a larger monster.
"Heh, let's mix things up a bit..." He said, as he bounded toward the latias that was hovering just in biting range. He then jumped up and took a firm chomp on Latias' feet/fins.
Latias cried out as Umbra cackled, but then jetted up high into the air due to shock.
"Waaaaaah! Slow down!" Umbra shouted, as latias grew close to the clouds, rolling to shake umbra off as it flew toward the sky.

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Suddenly, the metagross Chip was on top of started staggering around, seeming drowsy. Chip clenched his teeth.
"As long as it doesn't flip over, I should be fine..."
Then he noticed the small pink fellow nibbles, standing there pleased with himself as the metagross staggered near him, ready to smash the pokemon with his giant foot. Chip reacted quickly, pulling up on metagross' X, causing the giant pokemon to rear back, and flip over crushing Chip.
"Ugh... Don't... Wanna pass out..." Chip thought as he tried to crawl out from under the hulking beast, but was only able to see a bit of light after poking his torso out from under the monster before blacking out.
 
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(I know that, but I like to think its a fact... but whatever, whats a little rain gonna do? Even if it isnt there I don't really mind.)
"What the...?" Nibbles asked himself as he saw a strange Pokemon fly from nowhere and attack the Latios.
Nibbles looked back to see the Metagross about to crush him, and Chip stop him. In the process, crushing Chip.
"Chip!" Nibbles yelled as he saw chip get crushed by the Metagross.
"The others can handle the Metagross if it wakes up..." Nibbles thought to himself as he rushed over to attempt to help Chip.
 
The metagross flew off Chip KO'd after Granite blasted it with the Focus Punch, but Chip still lay unconcious. Now that the metagross was gone, you could see that his belly down was fairly scratched up and slightly bruised, and one of his legs was twisted into an awkward position. Chip didn't budge.

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"Urk!" Umbra grunted, "Stop flying you stupid bird!"
As latias flew above the clouds, it started a divebomb that gave umbra the ability to swing up on top of Latias, and grip it's neck. Latias squirmed slightly, as it continued it's incredibly fast downward course to an area near the nearly destroyed dragon's den. After a bit, Flames started to lick around latias as it flew straight down.
"Not good!" Umbra shouted as latias sped toward the ground, "C'mon! Stall or you'll kill us both!"
He pulled latias up on it's neck and tightened the grip of his jaws.
 
"CRI-I-ITICAL HIT....." The Metagross yelled, as it slid to the edge of a precarious cliff overlooking the crashing waves. "And now for the finishing blow.... KO PAWNCH!" Granite yelled as he charged at the metagross, which jumped at the last second, and spiraled into a meteor mash, knocking Granite off the cliff. "BIGGEST THREAT EXTERMINATED!" It yelled, just before a hyper beam blasted up, destroying the cliff, bringing it with Granite to its doom.
 
Running over to Chip, Nibbles noticed the odd position of his leg, and that he wasn't moving. No breathing, no heartbeat, no nothing (which even the dim-witted Slowpoke, Nibbles, knew was not a good sign.)
(I forgot to mention this, but Nibbles is a bit of a scavenger)
Nibbles reached into his bag and pulled out a few things...
"empty magic spray bottle (potion)... no..."
"Red and white magic ball things... no..."
"Aha! A magical revive thing..."
Nibbles put the revive into Chip's mouth and watched as he swallowed it. The heartbeat and breathing had returned, but he was still in bad shape.
"Draggy? Tyranitar? someone help!"
 
Latias finnaly stalled, and the flames dissapeared. However, due to the intense speed of the divebomb, she crashed through a tree, then wheeled around and started flying toward the unnamed mountain region.
"No! Turn around!" Umbra shouted at latias, "We need to destroy my enemies! Stupid bird!"
Suddenly, latais broke into an extremespeed, and crashed straight into a mountainside, taking a substantial chunk out of it. She then continued flying, but spiraled awkwardly because she had injured her wing on the impact.
"Your going to kill me!" Umbra shouted at Latias, who was now headed toward lugon lake, heading straight into it, "Fly straight!"
Umbra and latias then trucked into lugon lake, and after going several meters down, they floated unconciously at the top.

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Chip's eyes blinked open, and he saw the panicked slowpoke above him.
"Nibbles... You have to be more careful in battle..." He warbled out. Then, he got up, but fell down right after.
"My leg... It's a mess..."
 
"Heh... we're both going down..."a weak granite groaned as he scrambled at the smooth walls during his descent... guess there's nothing but- HUH!?" he said as he noticed a blue disk on a rocky outcrop, which crumbled away as he grabbed it. Granite touched the disc accedentally, and it glowed, before plummeting into the depths. now, however, Granite knew what to do. a bunch of rubble glowed blue and formed together into a makeshift surfboard. "SURF'S UP, DUUUUUDE!" he yelled as a wave came up, crashed over the metagross, and carried him to the cliff edge. Everyone was startled when they saw fingers grasp the cliff edge, and Granite pull himself up. "Heh... I dont die... that easil-l-ly... "he groaned, and then collapsed from exhaustion on Terra Firma.
 
((Oy lightning, just read the above page and you'll basically be filled in))

Chip saw Granite crawl up over the ledge.
"A bit cocky in our new evolution, are we? Ah, well, no matter. Now will someone please help me back to my shop?" Chip said right before rolling on to his back and groaning, "And him too..."
 
(@Lightning Put Giant Metagross to sleep with a yawn after the barrier was broken. Chip prevented the Metagross from crushing Nibbles, but crushed himself in the process. Umbra nabbed Latias. Granite evolved.)
"I apologize Chip, I didn't notice you on top of the giant Metagross..." Nibbles said with great sorrow.
"Hopefully someone is headed this way to help you to somewhere safe. Arceus knows I can't help you myself."
"Oy! Tyranitar! We need some help over here" Nibbles shouted towards the exhausted looking Tyranitar.
 
(darn that was my fight lol)

"Well that was a waste of my abilty." Draggy thought!
Through all this mass histeria Draggy had snuck back into the dragons den
"Here, here is the stone! Now it shall be mine..."
Draggy lifted the stone off its perch...It glowed and Draggy could feal the energy.
"This...this power...I can't control it!"
Draggy's body was ingulfed in purple fire, his wings, tail, and body grew longer.
After the transformation was done Draggy was still ingulfed in dragon energy.
His body shape looked like the ones you have heard about in myths.
"This power....Must control....." Draggy studderd while being burned by the flames,
"I never thought the stone would cause this much energy output..."
Draggy limped to the opening to dragons den.
"Can't loose control! SOMEONE GET THIS STONE OF MEE!" Draggy screamed in aganizing pain
 
Hearing Draggy, and Seeing Chip, Nibbles was unsure of what to do...
"Chip, wait here, that Tyranitar oughta be on his way here, I'm gonna go help Draggy."
Still slighty unsure, Nibbles ran towards the Dragon's Den.
"Sorry about this Draggy!" Nibbles yelled
"Zen Headbutt!"
Nibbles hit Draggy with great force, knocking the orb back into the cave... Nibbles was exhausted, partially from the force of the headbutt, partially from the fact that Draggy had sent back about half the power of the headbutt...
Nibbles collapsed, with last thing he saw before passing out was Draggy shrinking again
 
"Hey, Nibbles," Chip got out, "Go give our pal Granite an orran berry, okay?"

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Umbra regained conscious on the shore of Lugon lake. He struggled to his feet, and then regarded Latias down the shore. He slowly made his way to Latias, and looked her over. She was pretty banged up from the joyride, and her wing was badly hurt.
"Tch..." Umbra said to himself, "Your defeating Ho-oh was a fluke... Your far weaker."
He kicked some dirt on Latias and turned and walked away muttering: "Useless bird..."
 
"GRAAAAAWRWARARAWRA!" Draggy screamed as the Dragons orb flew out of him.
There was definatly more to the orb then he thought.
The detransformation was just as painfull as the transformation itself.
Draggy was screaming and crying but to no aval did the pain stop.
Draggy stutterd "Than...Thank....youu....nibbles...."
And thats the last thing draggy heard before passing out
 
((@ Lightning: Chip is crippled, and granite is badly hurt/helpng Chip... And umbra is just plain a jerkbag, and wouldn't be willing to do it.))

"Thanks, Granite... I owe you..." Chip said as he applied some bandage.
"Here's some for you too..." He said as he put some bandage on Granite.
"Now... That'll be 100P for medical services~"
 
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