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PKMN Territories... REDUX!

After the Rock Monster grabbed Gyarados' tail, it surged with electricity and jolted out of the water.
Gyarados was now on land, dragging both Umbra and Rock Monster with it, and creating a small pond. it was now raining heavily.
"I'll get you!" Umbra said as he skillfully swung up in the air by letting go of the Gyarados' face fin, and flew down with an Iron head, knocking off the right most of the Gyarados' three horns. The Gyarados roared and seized into the air again, sending Rock Monster hurtling into Umbra. The two flew backward on contact, and landed in the lake. The Gyarados had multiplied the lake's size by about two now, and had destroyed some forest.
It then rose up above the water, and charged a powerful hyper beam attack aimed straight at the two.
 
((YOU CAN POST JUST FINE FD. JUST GO TO ADVANCED POSTING AND LOOK UNDER. AND YES, UMBRA IS IN NO WAY SHAPE OR FORM AN UMBREON))

"Keh," Umbra thought as he saw Latias attack the Gyarados, "The weakling pulled through. She'll make a powerful weapon later."
Umbra then fired an ice beam, freezing the stunned gyarados.
"Now to finish it!" Umbra yelled as he crashed in to the Gyarados at high speed. The ice shattered, and the Gyarados sent off one last roar, then sunk to the bottom of the lake.
Umbra got out of the now expanded lake and looked angrily toward Latias.
"Your with me now," Umbra said to Latias, "Come right now and I won't have to force you."
 
"Darn it's raining I quess my sunbathing will have to be cut short today."Draggy Said
"What is that in the distance? It seems like a fire and flashes! It must be a battle!" Draggy stood up and flew into the air.
"O my a red gyarados! and a latias! I must go help that poor thing!"
Draggy flew and high speeds until he reached a scorched and ruined part of the forest with a huge lake inside. He saw the latias and it was being attackted. Not by just by any pokemon it was umbra!
"Hey you! You jerk leave that pokemon alone! Hyper beam!"
Draggy shot a huge hyper beam at the mawile.
"Dodge this!"
 
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When Umbra saw Draggy fire a hyper beam, he immediately dove to the side. It grazed his leg, but didn't do much as it wasn't very effective.
"Listen Dragon, I defeated that Gyarados all on my own, I think I can defeat you! And don't think I'm as weak as before..."
Umbra smirked, and then without any warning, fired an Ice Beam at Draggy's wings, freezing them and sending draggy falling in to a tree.
"He's not defeated, but he's pretty damaged and mostly immobilized..." Umbra said to himself, "It bought me enough time. Now, Latias, your coming with me." He said glaring at the poor creature and readying a super effective ice beam.
 
((Brb guys, getting a haircut :D))

Umbra blocked the drill peck easily with his jaws, and it most of the shots clanged off.
"Ha! Weak..." Umbra said as he fired an ice beam at Tailwind while he recoiled from the beak on metal impact. Tailwind was hit sharply, and was frozen. He fell to the ground in a block of ice, possibly KOed.
"Hm... That bariier is wearing out Latias, and so is my patience! Get over here now!" He readied a third ice beam and aimed it at Latias.
Latias hovered there in fear, completely wordless.
 
(Sorry for the absence, didn't feel like posting/playing too much xbox)
Nibbles, on his way back to the store, heard a racket coming from the lake. Hurrying as fast as his little Slowpoke legs would take him, he got to a small overlook and saw a red Gyrados plummet to the bottom of the lake. Nibbles, deciding to make sure the people at Chip's store and Dragon's Den were alright, saw that strange Pokemon again. He saw it charging up an ice beam and was going to stop him, but it was too late. He heard a crash as the ice beam struck and caused its target to fall. Making his way to the crash site, he saw Draggy, incased in ice.
"Draggy!" Nibbles exclaimed.
Nibbles then spent some time breaking away the ice to get to Draggy's head and gave him an Aspear berry to heal the freeze condition.
"There you go! Now here, take this" Nibbles said as he handed him an oran berry and a Yache berry (weakens the super effective ice type move)
"The oran berry will heal you, and the Yache berry will protect you, quite well actually, from ice type moves"
 
((HHAHAHA Wow, Umbra's new moveset is just TOO perfect :D))

Umbra's ice beam was interrupted by a not very effective ice fang.
He shook off the ice and yelled: "Gah! Stop attacking me weaklings!"
Umbra then grabbed the totodile with a thunder fang and flung it in to the lake.
"Huh... Well it looks like birdy's evolved. Still frozen and can't move. Better ensure it stays that way."
Umbra used Ice Beam on Tailwind once more, freezing him over fully, and PROBABLY (Almost definitely now!) KOing him.
"Now, Latias! Eat Ice Beam!"
Umbra fired an ice beam at Latias, sending her spiraling to the ground.
"Now Latias, you listen to me, or I destroy you! Got it?"
 
((DID TOTODILE OVERLOOK THE FACT UMBRA THUNDERFANGED IT AND CHUCKED IT ASIDE?!?! Ugh c'mon FD...))

Umbra crawled out from under the rocks, damaged pretty badly.
"Thats it, I don't know how you got up so fast, but THUNDER FANG! Once More!"
Umbra crunched the Totodile with a powerful thunder fang, and threw it in to the forest.
"Let's see it get up after that!" Umbra said, as he limped toward Latias.
"Now, I think all the pests are taken care of. You come with me!"
Latias, who had been unfrozen, got up and hovered. Umbra aimed his jaws for an ice beam and said: "Move."
Latias started hovering, then he used an Ice Beam and KO'd Her.
"Now I can get you back to the quarry without any trouble from those fools." Umbra picked Latias gently in his Maw, and dragged Latias in the direction of the quarry.
 
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(Ugh, COME on. This again, stealing what is mine????)

Tailwind wakes up.
Tailwind: Ugh..... I have to team up with that Totodile. It's - it's powerful. The Mawile, I dont know.. I'll show him to take whats not his - after I do something. He's heading towards the Quarry.

Tailwind goes and finds the Totodile, and flies near the quarry-without Umbra seeing him. He heals the totodile, and asks him to help him.

Totodile: Ugh.... WHAT?! Do that?
Tailwind: Yes. Please. And whisper.
Totodile: (Whispering) Ok.
Tailwind: Ready that Focus Punch and I'll ready that Fly.
Totodile: Ok....and, Taiwind, I have a Pokeball....I think it has a Pokemon in it......

(I'm not giving up without a fight!)
 
((technically, Latias isn't YOURS... Not that Umbra isn't kidnapping her :p))

"Good work Latias." Umbra said as Latias blasted a Lairon into a pile of metal. They had been training for a while, and Latias was seeming more and more upset.
"I... Want to leave please..." Latias whimpered. A tear was running down her cheek.
"What did I tell you earlier?!? You work for me now!" Umbra yelled at Latias, "Look at you! Your twice as powerful as before! We'll be the perfect battling team! Everyone will answer to us!"
"But... I don't want to hurt these people..." Latias let out, "Why can't you just be nice?"
"This isn't about being nice!" Umbra yelled, "This is about having control over these weaklings! Now, Get back to training. See that Graveler? Try using energy ball!"
"... Yes, Umbra..." Latias cried out quietly, before charging the attack.
 
(Oh, yeah....But with the way your treating her....)

Taiilwind: Ok, go!
Totodile sneaked up on Umbra. Latias noticed him and it was too late....
But Latias' Energy Ball hit... TOTODILE!
Tailwind came in, but footsteps were heard.

Tailwind: Oh-oh..... If I think what this is.... HIDE, LATIAS! HIDE, YOU MAWILE!
U TOO, TOTODILE!!
All the PKMN hid.
(Plot 2 The humans attack)
It was a group of humans, in a group called Team GALATIC.
???: I know I saw a Latias, Mawile, a Totodile focus punching the Mawile, and a Swellow flew in.
???: Yeah, Boss! Lets caputure the Latias, and make it a Dark Pokemon! Like the--
???: They CAN understand us, Charon...
???: I'll take the Swellow, personally.
???: SILENCE. Lets get them all. The Latias, Totodile, Mawile, all of them!!!
All of the humans: OK!!!!!
 
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