Time for my in-depth evaluations!!
1. in the intro; after the pic of the hero (the sprite) has faded and the charset comes out, the pic comes out again. (don't know if this was done purposely)
2. I felt that the kitchen in your room was a bit small, and the path to it, was a bit narrow compared to the entire room.
3. the woman in the newbark, her charset's moving constantly. (not moving as in steps, but she's moving, like her arms are moving.)
4. the tree tops are cut off.
5. the mail box's cut off
6. you teleport out of the houses once you're stepping on the black tiles. I think you should set a touch hero event.
7. I can't move in the tiles right above the table. (bottom left house)
8. your rival turns toward you at first when you first talk to him.
9. after you pick your pokemon, the pokeball doesn't disappear.
10. maybe you could add some lighting in the buildings.
11. I think the colour of the grass animation's a bit bright at night. Maybe you could have 2 grass animations for light and dark.
12. the trainer charaset in route 1 is continuously moving as well.
13. I can't exit the gatekeeping house using the top door.
14. when I try to get back to route 1 through the gatekeeping house, I get transported to another city.
15. the hero's moving too fast to the old guy who tours you in cherrygrove.
16. the old man takes me to a patch of grass which isn't even next to the sea.
17. after the old man disappears, I can't move.
note: 16 & 17 only happen if you press the action key while the man's walking. e.g pressing the action key right after the message's ended.
18. the phone kind of thing in the old man's house is cut off. (cherrygrove)
19. I CAN WALK THROUGH BLACK TILES!!!!!!!!!!
20. I think that there are too many flowers
21. the TV top's cut off in the house with the 2 kids speaking.
22. I think that you should add some door opening graphics for the PC and Mart.
I'll continue as I play more!!!!!!!