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Pokémon II

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"Wah!" Mace yelled as the Quilava bit his hand. He began to run around in circles since Mace was a coward. "Get it off! Get it off!" He yelled waveing his arms up and down. "Bwhahaha!" Mace's Dark Side laughed insde Mace's mind. "The chaos will never end will it? This day rocks!" Mace on the other hand was still panicing.

Meanwhile Glider followed the Spearow toward Jacob. "Flygon?" The Dragon asked with curiousity. Glider remembered Mace's orders to go to where the fire blast came from, so glider wanted to get to it a quick as possible.
 
OOC: People please, I am still seeing alot of 3 liner posts. Posts needs to be at least 4 lines. Also Obelisk-kun, United_Squirtle, and Ash Jr, would you mind writing more legibly? It is very hard to follow your posts.
 
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The bullet whistled past Lena's left ear, slightly grazing it and taking a few strands of ivory hair along with it. Her eyes followed it, watching as it continued into the clouds, as if in slow motion. She lifted a hand to her ear, and when she looked again there was a dense, red substance. She licked it, then coughed. "Espaa ..?" She looked quizically at the crimson stain on her finger and sniffed it.
 
OOC: I received a PM from Bell today and I feel I should share it to everyone in the RPG:

"I'm using Blue Variant, and they're obviously not listening to you. What do you do? I've given you time to reprimand them, and you have. But they're still breaking their agreement. Very soon now. Warning #2 is re-issued."

I have to agree, some, not all, but some are breaking their agreement to the rules. I mean is it that hard to ask for just more than 3 lines? I mean I don't know. I mean does anyone read the OOC posts I make? I don't make them for my health you know, they are there for a reason and that reason is to be read and obeyed.

I feel I have been pretty good as the creator of the RPG, I mean I never commanded or forced anything from anyone. I simply ask that everyone follows the rules and agrees. But now I have a 2nd warning. Just to remind you all if this RPG gets banned again then that's it the RPG will be banned and deleted or however the process is done here but it will not be good I can assure you. As for me I would most likely be black listed in this forum. And I don't want that.

Please, if you guys really want this RPG to continue then you must follow the rules. You all agreed to them and you all need to stick to that agreement otherwise it would of been for nothing.

If I don't see any improvement then I may have to actually kick people out of this RPG and I don't want to kick nobody out but if this continues then I may have to.

Please people I ask you yet again for your support. I know the site is acting weird but you still have to make sure that the posts are at the required minimum of lines and that you obey not only this RPG's rules but the Forum's rules as well.

This RPG was created for entertainment and entertainment alone, however these requirements and all of these rules have forced me to become stricter so please rethink this entire over. I mean you guys agreed to the rules now help me further by sticking to it.

Thank you for your time,
Darthmoose
 
(The rules are too unfair and restricting, I think they should be changed.)
 
If you think they're too unfair and restricting, don't RP here. Simple.
 
OOC: Anyway, on with the RPG!

IC:

Brad turned quickly as he heard something go wizzing by. He saw Lena almost get shot. He docked immediately.

"Quick get down!" Brad shouted as he grabbed Lena and pulled her down towards him.

"It's probably that trainer. We need to stay low."Brad thought.

"Lena, stay low otherwise you might get hurt really bad!" Brad tried to explain to her.

He turned to Luther in a panic.

"Quick get us out of here!" Brad shouted.
 
NAME:Tiffany Terock
TITLE:Trainer
Age: 14
Gender: female
Birth Date: May 6
Birthplace: foretree
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 99 lbs
Role Model: pokemon league
Group: None
POKéMON: Blaziken.
Appearence: Tiffany wears her hair in a ponytail.she wears a dark green tanktop and wears a black skort.
Personality:Tiffany is outgoing and loves to hangout.Her only friends are her pokemon so she like to work alone.
History: Tiffany is an orphan and dreamed of being the greatest trainer in the world.She wont stop until she suceeds that dream.
Rival: None yet
Strategy: She uses Strengths and weaknesses and speed.
Trainer's Pokémon: anonymous.
Self Introduction: as an orpan,tiffany has always seen pokemon battles and wanted a pokemon of her own.she vowed to become the best trainer in the world.she loves pokemon very much and her ownly friend is her blaziken.she met up with blaziken when a group of boys were beating tiffany up in the forest.Then blaziken saved her and they became friends.
Extra: None
 
The quest begins:

Tiffany was traveling on a mountain.Her Blaziken traveled along side her.Nothing could seperate the two.
 
OOC: Listen Celestial Dove, your posts need to be at least four lines long, okay. Or else this RP gets closed forever...
 
OOC: Celestal_Dove your posts need to be at least 4 lines. IF I see another post like that then you will be kicked out.
 
Lena frowned. "What is 'hurt'?" she asked as she pressed closer to Brad.
As she barely had a vocabulary of ten words, she could not understand a lot of what was said. While she could learn words, she could not understand what they meant until this person explained. And when someone else tried to tell her ... it just went over her head.
What she did know is that someone was trying to hurt her. She did not who, did not know why; but 'this person' told her he was a liar - a bad person - and that was all she needed to know. If she stayed close by 'this person', she would be safe.
 
Chris struggles to get Quilava off Mace " Whats wrong with you Quliava" Chris
shouts. She finally gives up pulling and punches Quilava's back sending him
flying to the ground yelping. " I'm so sorry Mace, I don't know whats wrong
with him, his senses must of told him wrong" Quilava's head hanged low.
Chris had never beated him or yelled at him.
 
Brad paused for a moment and looked over to see if there were any further shootings. Appearntly the fire ceased. Brad turned to Lena when she spoke to him.

"Hurt is when there is when you have a um, pain." Brad tried to explain.

"Like how you almost got hurt before, you could have great pain." Brad told her.

He didn't really know how else to explain it really, but that's what he came up with at the moment. Brad saw Lena's grazed left ear probably from the bullet that almost hit her. He reached his hand out for it and touched it gently. He blushed a bit but he was only making sure that she is alright.

"Do you feel pain? Are you hurt?" He asked again while he inspected her ear.
 
Lena blinked, then shook her head. "I am not hurt," she said slowly, thinking out each word before speaking. "Is Brad hurt?" she asked, watching Brad out of the corner of her eye.
The cold air whipped past her ear again, and she twitched her head slightly to the left and winced. She guessed that this was 'hurt' and 'pain'. As the stinging slowly subsided, she bit the finger that still had traces of blood on it, then showed the red stain to Brad. "What is it?"

((Argh, sorry ... Not very imaginitive ATM. x_x))
 
A new chapter unfolds within the young trainer's adventure. The sea boils red with a chain of underwater volcanoes making their way to Seafoam and then, the world. With only a handful of trainers trying to stop it, only three remain away from the peril situation and focus on a more serious problem at hand, the Unown. What is the cause of these beings to come back and what are their connection with the glitch that appeared three years ago?

Luther, the hot-blooded hero who defeated the glitch that day three years ago journey's to Fushia City to find answers. In the meantime, Brad protects Lena and tries to find a way to give her a better life than what she had before.

Is it possible that all of these situations at hand will be answered? Or will the memories of a lost past come back to haunt our young heroes?


The three made it to Fushia City. The Dragonite landed softly on to the ground by the shoreline. The city isn't very lively at all, very few people are out and its already very late at night already.

Brad jumps off the Dragonite and slowly helps Lena down to make sure she doesn't get hurt further.

The cut on her ear is getting worse, he has to take her somewhere to get it taken care of.

"Oh man.." Brad said as he looked at the blood.

"You're not shot, but it still doesn't look to good." Brad told her.

He looked around and thanked Luther for helping them find their way out of the boiling ocean.

"Hmm.. There's a Pokecenter right by the beach here." Brad said remembering back to when the Skarmory flew him here before.

He traced back his trail and slowly found his way to the Pokecenter in the dark night sky.

He ran to the Pokecenter holding Lena's hand so she won't get lost in the dark. They finally made it to the center, it was only a short walk, as a matter of fact its even more shorter now that there aren't that many people out on the beach at this time in the night.

As he entered he yelled at the Nurse who was sleeping on the counter. She isn't Joy but probably a Nurse that takes the night shift.

"Help! Help!" Brad shouts.

The nurse wakes up and rubs her eyes,

"Eh...?" She mutters waking up.

Brad quickly brings Lena to her,

"Quick she needs medical attention!" Brad told her.

The woman nodded quickly and then shook her head.

"Whoa, whoa, hold on there, This is a Pokecenter, we don't treat humans." The Nurse replied not knowing what to do.

"Oh man.. there has to be something, just stop the bleeding!" Brad told her.

The Nurse bent down to get a better look at Lena's ear.

"Hmm... doesn't look that bad. Hold on."

The Nurse quickly turns and runs back to the counter and bends down behind it to get something. She appears again with a First Aid Kit.

Brad nods and turns to Lena.

"Listen, she's going to help you. She'll stop the pain." Brad tried to explain to her.

The Nurse rushed back to Lena and opened the kit and took care of her ear.

After awhile....

"All done!" The Nurse said after she put a bandage on Lena's ear.

"Now remember, don't touch it, it may open up again if you do." The Nurse told her.

Brad nodded,

"Sure, I'll make sure she won't. Thank you very much." Brad told the nurse.

"Yes, be sure to be more careful. I did my best helping her but if it opens again then you may need to go to the City's hospital." The Nurse explained.

Again Brad thanked her,

"Thanks again."

He slowly brought Lena to a couch in the side of the center that has a large window behind it that has a clear view of the ocean.

"Man, I'm bushed." Brad said as he laid down in his seat and leaned his head against the window.

"I think I'm going to... take a nap...Lena.. Becareful while I'm asleep and be sure to wake me if something... *Yawn* happens.." Brad says as he falls to sleep.

He hasn't slept for awhile. He's been through a lot and went into a deep sleep pretty quickly.

The Nurse spoke across the room to Lena.

"You can sleep here, just don't make too much noise." She told them and then she to went back to sleep.

The Pokecenter became quiet once more and the whistle of cars in the distance can be heard passing by and the waves of the ocean can be heard as well. Then suddenly all noise ceased.

Something appeared behind Brad, it looked black. It hid behind him and then slowly moved away and floated next to Lena. It's a weird shaped creature that is completely black and has a large eye, the floating being is in the shape of the letter "M" it seems to bear the same resemblance as the one that was encountered before.
 
" Where am I" Nakaba inquired but got no answer he began walking away he had to buy a new gun to shoot lena as it was his destiny to kill her

Nakaba's evil side had taken physichal form and was ready to make lena's life hell. unlike nakaba he was not trying to give her what she deserved he was merely looking for a little amusement. Nakaba's evil side sent out charizard and followed dragonite tell they landed on fuschia where he lost them " Lena you can't hide." He chuckled.
 
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Mace rubbed his hand where the Quilava had bit. "It's okay." He said to Chris. "I'm use to stuff like this." The ground was shaking more violent now. Mace could barely stand up. "I hope Glider comes back soon." He said with consern. "How about we look for shelter." He said to Rika and Chris waiting for their reply. Meanwhile Glider was following still following the spearow. Glider wanted to return to the serech of where the fire blast attack came from, but also was curious about where the Spearow was going. Back on Seafoam Island Mace was getting desperate. "We have to get out of here. We have to get out of here." He kept saying to himself.
 
I'm saved YAAAAAAY!Let's go let's go. I'm on my way to where ever this flygon is taking me,dang the water lookes alot hotter then before.but who care's I'm saved.I forgot to return you .return spearow. I thought spearow sure must of been tired.Hey flygon the one I'm riding on I have some question's for you number 1 where did you come from. number two where did you come from.number three do you have trainer's.number four if you do have trainers where are they .number five where are we going.ow yay the silent treatment so fine
 
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OOC: Alright, I am very sorry but obelisk-kun you're gone. Everyone please ignore any posts that come from him as he is now kicked out. The reason why he is kicked out is because he broke the rules that were explained to everyone several times in the RPG. In case some may wonder what he did I will tell you:

- He did not make three lines in his post.
- He is still not making his posts more legible.

Also, United_Squirtle is gone as well. He broke one of the same rules as Obelisk-kun and that was still not making his posts clearer and easier to read. I mean, even I cannot follow his posts, and I have gave him a warning on Page 14 to write more legible but he still has not.

I mean, I asked this to be fixed plenty of times, but now with the 2nd warning issued I cannot take anymore chances which I think I stated pretty clearly to everyone.

For any further comments, complaints, or questions regarding to the RPG or to this topic then please PM me, do not post them in this thread.

Thank you,
Darthmoose
 
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