Starsprite
This is how we live!
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- Age 27
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- Seen Dec 25, 2016
@CrumbledCandyWrapper: Alright, so you are pending. The reason? Your history really isn't a lot of history. I gather that he moved to Iccirus City, and that he doesn't like the cold, but I need to know more.
How did he meet his best friends and his Pokemon? Did he do anything with his Pokemon (go on a journey, train in the gym every day) that would qualify him for the tournament. And most of all, how did his team get to be decent? There are a lot of wonderful histories all throughout the thread if you need to see what I'm looking for.
I like your characters, and I like that he has little quirks, but you need to really expand on that history~ He's had 24 years of life, and I imagine he did quite a bit with his Pokemaon in those years.
How did he meet his best friends and his Pokemon? Did he do anything with his Pokemon (go on a journey, train in the gym every day) that would qualify him for the tournament. And most of all, how did his team get to be decent? There are a lot of wonderful histories all throughout the thread if you need to see what I'm looking for.
I like your characters, and I like that he has little quirks, but you need to really expand on that history~ He's had 24 years of life, and I imagine he did quite a bit with his Pokemaon in those years.