FireRed hack: Pokemon Dragon master

[874521]

Wow! this hack has the nice tiles and palettes. Good luck!

 

[Satoshi Ookami]

This tileset is freakin' awesome.
And ya made a great job in doing backgrounds

 

[the_angell]

looks cool and great work with the intro I luv the dragonite!!
You have my support!!!

 

[Curt_09]

This hack looks very well done so far, and I hope that the work continues as such.
I like the tiles, especially that big tree. The OW's and sprites look pretty good, and the titlescreen is clearly pure excellence.
Good luck.

 

[Konet]

You said you need someone to help edit the story? I'd be more than willing to help. I don't have much experience with hacking itself, but I will be an English major. Just let me know if there's anything I can do.

 

[mindfreak]

@! AvatarKris !: Sorry but I didn't use a male base...
@Konet: Thanks I'll send a pm if I need you.
@At everybody else:Tanks for your comments.
(Btw the great tree is just a Mother 3 rip<-- I forgot to mention that in my previous post)

Not much updates today but here is the Bootscreen!

I hope you like it.
[edit] Hooray Second page!

 

[negative]

Wow. It looks very professional. I also love the Titlescreen and the Story. Hope to see more, good luck.

 

[dragonface]

mindfreek if you need any help with the hack i would be happy to help. check out my hack. its pokemon etzion. anything in the game i made is what i know how to do basically.

 

[Neo-Wolf]

Edited and Corrected Story -

Spoiler:

A long time ago, the world was a wonderful place.
All creatures in the world lived together in peace and harmony.
Until ...
In the middle of a dark forest , a mystic dark , red Gem appeared.
Suddenly , all Pokemon in the forest became evil.
Fire pokemon burned down some parts of the forest.
Flying pokemon started to eat the bug pokemon.
Ground pokemon created huge earthquakes.
The forest guardian Celebi tried to stop this mess but it couldn't stop them all.
And in the end , the forest guardian disappeared .

When the forest guardian was gone , some humans became worried.
They tried to remove the stone from the forest but nobody even reached the Gem.
But then a mystical man in a cape from the Jotho region appeared.
He claimed that he was Dragon Master and said that he would destroy the red Gem.
Everybody laughed at him and said that he never would return.
But brave as he was , he traveled through the forest and found the Gem.
He tried to destroy the Gem but nothing worked.
He knew that if he didn't destroy the Gem , everybody would laugh at him . So , he summoned his Gyarados and ordered him to eat the Gem.
The moment the Gem was eaten , everything returned to normal .Except the Gyarados of the Dragon Master.
The blue color of the Gyarados changed to red and he became ill.
He returned his Gyarados and ran through the forest to the closest Pokemon Center.
The nurse in the Pokemon Center healed the Gyarados as good as she could.
And when the Gyarados was fully healed , he was out of control.
He destroyed the Pokemon Center and fled to the forest. The Dragon Master ran after him as quick as he could.
And in the forest he saw something he would never forget.
The forest guardian had returned and stopped the Gyarados with a Red Scale.
When it saw the Dragon Master , it gave the Red Scale to him as a gift for rescuing the forest.
The forest was saved .


500 Years later , the 3 Gems appeared in the Kitaura region.
One in a forest
One in a lake
And one in a cave.

....

 

[Master Terrador]

Boot Screen Background is Epic and the font is great...
Nice Job~

 

[Neo-Wolf]

Your art skills are great ! The titlescreen as a work of art . One of the best I have ever seen .

 

[Konet]

NeoWolf has the right idea, I probably should have edited it to show how I worked.

Spoiler:

Many years ago, in an idyllic world, all of the creatures lived harmoniously.

However, this utopia was shattered when suddenly, in the middle of a dark forest, a red gem materialized, corrupting all of the Pokèmon inhabitants with its evil influence.
Fire Pokèmon set parts of the forest ablaze, Flying Pokèmon began to consume Bug types, while Ground types began to summon earthquakes…

Celebi, the forest's protector, attempted to end the chaos, but it ultimately failed, disappearing shortly after.

Humans began to worry after the forest's guardian disappeared, and attempted to remove the gem that had caused the decline of the once peaceful world.
Unfortunately, no one even found the gem, and so they despaired.

Until, that is, a caped mystical man appeared from the Johto region, claiming that he was the Dragon Master, and that he would solve their problems by destroying the red gem.

The people laughed at his statements, jeering that he would not return, however, his unprecedented courage allowed him to go through the forest and locate the vile jewel. Unfortunately, none of his attempts to destroy it worked. Knowing that the others would taunt him if he couldn't destroy it, he summoned his mighty Gyrados, commanding it to eat the gem.

As soon as this happened, the world returned to the way it was before the gem's corruption.

Everything, that is, apart from the Dragon Master's Gyrados, who's once blue scales turned crimson, as the Pokèmon became ill.

The man recalled the leviathan to its Pokèball, and ran out of the forest, desperate to find a Pokèmon Center. While the nurse healed the Gyrados to the best of her abilities, after it regained its strength it became uncontrollable.
Destroying the Pokèmon Center, it fled to the forest, and its trainer took chase. As he ran, he saw a scene that would never leave his memory: Celebi had returned, and halted the Gyrados's onslaught with a mysterious red scale. Seeing the Dragon Master, it bestowed to him the scale, a reward for rescuing the
forest. Finally, it was saved.

Five centuries later, three more gems appeared in the region of Kitaura.

One in a lake.
One in a cave.
One... in a forest.

Hopefully that will give you an idea of what I can do.

 

[Aerodynamic]

If you think this is great, wait till you see his intro script;)

 

[cooley]

If you think this is great, wait till you see his intro script;)

I bet it's either something to do with a dream or a legend. :P

 

[Satoshi Ookami]

If you think this is great, wait till you see his intro script;)

Um nice cliffhanger xD
Ya gotta tell us more :D

 

[NarutoActor]

rele nice title screen and battle background how did you do the battle background?

 

[iPlayurROMhax]

omg DRAGONITE FTW!!!

since its fire/water/grass, i dont have to worry about u having dragon starters ^.^''
thinking about doing that...
bagon/dratini/?????


isnt celebi a girl though? or is it genderless? i dont know much about celebi.

 

[Konet]

Celebi is genderless, although the one in PMD2 is implied to be female.

 

[Satoshi Ookami]

Celebi is genderless, although the one in PMD2 is implied to be female.

In fact I think thanks to PMD2 we know that normal Celebi is male...
Only shiny ones are females...

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

In fact I think thanks to PMD2 we know that normal Celebi is male...
Only shiny ones are females...

But no matter how Celebi's color's changed and how Celebi looks like, it still looks like that it is a female! That's what I think.