Sarcastic Prince
Starting anew...
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- Seen Nov 18, 2015
Hey, Xatoku. I played the Beta and I think it's awesome!
Gold has pretty bad drawing...
Anyways, here are some glitches (Mostly Grammar Errors).
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2416/1636pokemonfireredversi.png)
It wouldn't make sense if you start with "GOLD:" because Team Rocket's talkin' to ya.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6014/1636pokemonfireredversir.png)
The name "Karen" only has one "R". And do you have plans for making Karen's OW?
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4379/67389277.png)
You missed a period at the end of "battle".
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3646/1636pokemonfireredversigm.png)
It should be "its" not "it's". They have different meanings, y'know.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6468/sday.png)
It should be "name's" not "names".
Oh, and one more thing. Do you plan to add my character later in the story?
Gold has pretty bad drawing...
Anyways, here are some glitches (Mostly Grammar Errors).
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2416/1636pokemonfireredversi.png)
It wouldn't make sense if you start with "GOLD:" because Team Rocket's talkin' to ya.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6014/1636pokemonfireredversir.png)
The name "Karen" only has one "R". And do you have plans for making Karen's OW?
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4379/67389277.png)
You missed a period at the end of "battle".
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3646/1636pokemonfireredversigm.png)
It should be "its" not "it's". They have different meanings, y'know.
![[PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Garnet](https://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6468/sday.png)
It should be "name's" not "names".
Oh, and one more thing. Do you plan to add my character later in the story?