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The Story...
Eruu hated the life his parents had tried to set for him. It was far from his ambitions and curiosity of pokemon. At age fourteen he ran away from home with a Torchic his grandmother gifted him, and his grandfather's request. He goes on to become the regional Hoenn pokemon champion. However he abandoned his position, and traveled to Kanto to find his true passion for himself and his pokemon.
He begins training to become a fight master realizing power brings out the very best in pokemon and people. His slight obsession with power costs him the love of his life and his only connection to his past. He struggles to put his life together. Now nearing nineteen He will discover secrets that will threaten to destory the very life he is searching so hard to restore.
About the Fan Fiction (Update!)
I am using Pokemon Anime Canon and the Anime characters are much older now. The story follows this young man who falls in love with May during his journey around Hoenn. After defeating the Hoenn pokemon champion, he moves to Kanto to live in the Battle Arena with Kanto Frontier Brain Greta to train as a Fight Master, or a fighting type specialist. May breaks off their relationship because Eruu reveals his negative thoughts on Pokemon Contests and would rather compete in the Indigo Leauge than watch her perform in the Sinnoh Grand Festival. After realizing how bad he hurt her, he travels to find her and apologize hoping to renew thier relationship. Drew's current relationship with May only agitates him and makes him jealous. Little does he know he is being hunted by Team Rocket in order to execute thier global plans for conquest, because his genes hold the key to unlocking his forgotten father's Soulless Deoxys Project.
This is my first fan fiction ever! So let me know how good or terrible it is. Thanks for your time and enjoy!
Chapters (Badge)
Badge One - Champion Battle (A Champion is born)
Badge Two - Lost Love
Badge Three - Jail House Blues
Badge Four - An Early Release
Badge Five - Not your Ordinary Day (Drown your troubles in a bottle of saké)
Badge Six - Kidnapped! (Unknowingly eluding capture)
Badge Seven - Awakening (The demon within)
(Final) Badge Eight - TBA
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BADGE ONE: Champion Battle
Eruu Sato was born in Rustboro City to struggling parents. His parents didn't have well paying jobs and throughout Eruu's childhood they moved several times within the city. He was the couple's only child. His parents did not send him to school because they could not afford it. Eruu had finally turned 10, but his parents did not want to allow him to journey. His father didn't like pokemon very much, and his mother always agreed with his father. Instead his mother had him sent to live and work at her parents's farm in Fallarbor Town who were Eruu's grandparents. Eruu's grandfather came to pick him up and they both left. Eruu only saw his parents on special occasions. They sent Eruu to Fallarbor town to teach him how to become a hardworker. Eruu was very curious and fond of pokemon. After a while Eruu began to perfer living with his grandparents because they were nicer, and warm hearted people. Eruu would work in the field with his grandpa, and would learn to clean and cook with his grandma.
Eruu had now turned 14 and his grandmother gave him a pokemon egg for his birthday that she recieved from a close friend. The pokemon egg was Eruu's most prized possession. He would take the egg everywhere, into town on errands, on the farm, and even keept it close as he sleept. Eruu began to wonder what egg would hatch, he asked his grandmother, but she didn't want to ruin the surprise for him. Eruu and his grandparents were enjoying a nice evening outside when the egg suddently began to hatch. The egg finally hatched into a baby Torchic, Eruu was excited in the fact that the pokemon was his. They became very close friends and took Torchic everywhere, just like he did when it was still in it's egg. Eruu would read all of his grandfather's pokemon textbooks because he was very curious and intrested in pokemon. Eruu decided to try and become a pokemon reseacher. Eruu became very eager to return to Rustboro City, because he wanted to attend the Pokemon Academy.
Eruu had finally returned to Rustboro city, on his own, hoping to convince his parents about his pokemon researcher dream. Unfortunately, his parents did not allow it. Eruu was dissapointed in his parents lack of support, when his grandparents supported him. Eruu wanted to return back to Fallarbor town, but his father wanted him work at a job he got him.
He hated the job and instead wanted to study more about pokemon. Torchic stayed at his parents home while he worked. Eruu's father felt that the pokemon was becoming a distraction to Eruu because he was performing poorly at his job. Eruu's dad threatend to give the pokemon away if he did not improve.
He was distraught at the idea that his dad would give away his best friend. More tragety struck as Eruu's grandmother passed away in Fallarbor town. Eruu's grandfather sold the farm and moved in with Eruu's parents. Eruu's father decided to take the Torchic away from Eruu once and for all, almost for no reason. Eruu was saddened, and couldn't help but break into tears once the Torchic was taken away.
Later that night, Eruu's grandfather took Torchic away from Eruu's father without him noticing and gave it back to Eruu. He also packed him a backpack with supplies and gave him the rest of the money they gave him for selling the farm. He urged Eruu to go on his own pokemon journey and learn about pokemon. He promised his grandpa that he would learn as much as he could. He recommended Eruu to challange the eight pokemon gyms across Hoenn and participate in the Hoenn Leauge. Eruu snuck out of his home in Rustboro City and left, never too look back. He was reluctant about becoming a pokemon trainer, but he promised his grandfather he would. Torchic became very fond of the idea of Eruu becoming a trainer and battling alongside him.
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One year later
The stadium crowd roars. Eruu stands on the trainer corner in the pokemon stadium with sweat driping down his face. Glaceon is hit with a powerful jet of water that reflects the staduim lights, giving off a hue of rainbow. Glaceon is thrusted backward. The primary jet of water dissolved after it thrusted the Glaceon away, leaving sparkles of water that glisten in the air. Glaceon falls several feet in front of Eruu.
"Glaceon is unable to battle!" yells the judge. The crowd cheers as the announcer repeats the judge's words. Eruu knows clearly that the crowd isn't on his side. Eruu pulls out Glaceon's pokeball and returns it. He looks at pokeball and thanks his pokemon. Eruu is amazed how the champions pokemon attacks are elgantly displayed. Not only does he manage to hit his pokemon; he does it with a flamboyant and dazzling style.
"You did your best Glaceon, thank you", He says as he returns his Glaceon. On the opposite side of the battlefield stands a Milotic that looks injured but is still ready to battle. It has dirt smudges, scratches, an bits of frost all over its body. Just a few feet behind the Milotic stands a pokemon trainer on the opposite trainer corner with light blue, somewhat long hair.
His name is Wallace, the current Hoenn pokemon champion.
"That was a remarkable battle! I congradulate you on raising such an elegant and tough Glaceon" remarks Wallace.
"Both trainers are down to thier last pokemon! Who will Eruu choose to battle?" says the stadium announcer. Eruu bites his lip and reaches for the back of his hip and pulls out a pokeball.
"This is it! Go Blaziken!" Eruu yells, as he throws the pokeball onto the battlefield. Blaziken emerges from the pokeball. Blaziken heavily focused at the Milotic standing opposite to it then intensely lit up it's wrists with fire.
"Eruu sends out his Blaziken! It has shown remarkable reslilence, and power throughout the Evergrande conference! But will it be enough to finally stop Wallace's Milotic?" states the announcer.
The crowd's cheers sends a chill down Eruu spine. He knows that Milotic has the type advantage, but after battling two consecutive battles, with Eruu's Salamance and Glaceon, it should be exhausted. But Milotic's recover move had been keeping it going. To win, Blaziken needs to strike fast and hard. Wallace reminds his Milotic to not underestimate the fire pokemon. Milotic turns its head to him, and gives him a small nod then turns to Blaziken standing on the otherside of the battlefield. The judge raises his two hands and shouts to begin the battle.
"Milotic, use hydro pump" orders Wallace. Milotic unleashes another dazzling jet of water towards Blaziken.
Blaziken jumps up into the startling night sky and evades the blast of water.
"Use brave bird! Now!" Blaziken covers itself in a blue aura while still airborne and charges at the Milotic. Blaziken hits the ground running, charging full speed at Milotic!
"A direct attack?!" yells Wallace. He is stunned.
Wallace orders Milotic to defend itself with whirlpool, but order is given too late. Blaziken collides with Milotic at full speed. Milotic is sent flying past Wallace and hits the stadium wall. Blaziken kneels on one knee, clearly have taken recoil damage but stands right back up. Milotic manages to pull through, but with one eye open and clenching it teeth.
"Recover!" orders Wallace. Milotic begins to glow brightly; giving off a mult-colored hue. Again, Wallace is displaying his attacks with elegance and beauty.
Eruu quickly reacted, "Don't allow it Blaziken! Thunderpunch!".
Blaziken rushes towards Milotic, englufing both fists in electricity. Milotic stops glowing and bearly evades the powerful thunderpunches. Blaziken instead punches the walls with both fists!
"Counter it with whirlpool!" commands Wallace to Milotic. Blaziken jumps out of the way as Milotic spins up a large wirlpool. The Wirlpool sucks in Blaziken, and Blaziken is spun around the vortex of water. Eruu helplessly watches as Blaziken is spun around, thrusted away then hit with a hydro pump combination. Blaziken falls several feet in front of Eruu.
"Shake it off Blaziken!" commanded Eruu. Blaziken struggles a bit to get up, but pulls through. Milotic uses that oppurtunity to recover, the pokemon slowly begins to glow vividly again.
"No you won't! Blaziken flamethower!" commanded Eruu. Blaziken eyes glowed red then unleashed a powerful flamethower.
"Blaze? Already!?" Eruu thought to himself. Blaziken's ability blaze had kicked in. He was a little surprised that Blaziken was wearing out rather quick.
"Hydro pump!" ordered Wallace. He was bit frustrated that Milotic didn't have time to recover. Milotic used Hydro pump to counter the powerful flamethower. Milotic and Blaziken keept up the attacks, almost evenly matched. Although, Miotic couldn't keep the Hydro pump going strongly enough. The flamethower got closer and closer to Milotic. Suddently due to exuastation, Milotic stopped using hydro pump and the flamethower hit it at full power and pushed back the Milotic.
"This is your chance!" yells Eruu. Blaziken englufs it's fists in electricty again and charges full speed at the Milotic!
"You need to use whirlpool to defend yourself!" pleaded Wallace. Milotic is still struggling to get up from the pervious attack.
"NOW! YOU HAVE IT!" exclaims Eruu. Blaziken leaped into the air and fell right onto Milotic. Milotic helplessly looks up at Blaziken as it lands a thunderpunch on its face. Milotic's head is flinged deep into ground, emitting a cloud of debris and dust.
<End of Badge 1>
(To be continued)
Eruu hated the life his parents had tried to set for him. It was far from his ambitions and curiosity of pokemon. At age fourteen he ran away from home with a Torchic his grandmother gifted him, and his grandfather's request. He goes on to become the regional Hoenn pokemon champion. However he abandoned his position, and traveled to Kanto to find his true passion for himself and his pokemon.
He begins training to become a fight master realizing power brings out the very best in pokemon and people. His slight obsession with power costs him the love of his life and his only connection to his past. He struggles to put his life together. Now nearing nineteen He will discover secrets that will threaten to destory the very life he is searching so hard to restore.
About the Fan Fiction (Update!)
I am using Pokemon Anime Canon and the Anime characters are much older now. The story follows this young man who falls in love with May during his journey around Hoenn. After defeating the Hoenn pokemon champion, he moves to Kanto to live in the Battle Arena with Kanto Frontier Brain Greta to train as a Fight Master, or a fighting type specialist. May breaks off their relationship because Eruu reveals his negative thoughts on Pokemon Contests and would rather compete in the Indigo Leauge than watch her perform in the Sinnoh Grand Festival. After realizing how bad he hurt her, he travels to find her and apologize hoping to renew thier relationship. Drew's current relationship with May only agitates him and makes him jealous. Little does he know he is being hunted by Team Rocket in order to execute thier global plans for conquest, because his genes hold the key to unlocking his forgotten father's Soulless Deoxys Project.
This is my first fan fiction ever! So let me know how good or terrible it is. Thanks for your time and enjoy!
Chapters (Badge)
Badge One - Champion Battle (A Champion is born)
Badge Two - Lost Love
Badge Three - Jail House Blues
Badge Four - An Early Release
Badge Five - Not your Ordinary Day (Drown your troubles in a bottle of saké)
Badge Six - Kidnapped! (Unknowingly eluding capture)
Badge Seven - Awakening (The demon within)
(Final) Badge Eight - TBA
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BADGE ONE: Champion Battle
Eruu Sato was born in Rustboro City to struggling parents. His parents didn't have well paying jobs and throughout Eruu's childhood they moved several times within the city. He was the couple's only child. His parents did not send him to school because they could not afford it. Eruu had finally turned 10, but his parents did not want to allow him to journey. His father didn't like pokemon very much, and his mother always agreed with his father. Instead his mother had him sent to live and work at her parents's farm in Fallarbor Town who were Eruu's grandparents. Eruu's grandfather came to pick him up and they both left. Eruu only saw his parents on special occasions. They sent Eruu to Fallarbor town to teach him how to become a hardworker. Eruu was very curious and fond of pokemon. After a while Eruu began to perfer living with his grandparents because they were nicer, and warm hearted people. Eruu would work in the field with his grandpa, and would learn to clean and cook with his grandma.
Eruu had now turned 14 and his grandmother gave him a pokemon egg for his birthday that she recieved from a close friend. The pokemon egg was Eruu's most prized possession. He would take the egg everywhere, into town on errands, on the farm, and even keept it close as he sleept. Eruu began to wonder what egg would hatch, he asked his grandmother, but she didn't want to ruin the surprise for him. Eruu and his grandparents were enjoying a nice evening outside when the egg suddently began to hatch. The egg finally hatched into a baby Torchic, Eruu was excited in the fact that the pokemon was his. They became very close friends and took Torchic everywhere, just like he did when it was still in it's egg. Eruu would read all of his grandfather's pokemon textbooks because he was very curious and intrested in pokemon. Eruu decided to try and become a pokemon reseacher. Eruu became very eager to return to Rustboro City, because he wanted to attend the Pokemon Academy.
Eruu had finally returned to Rustboro city, on his own, hoping to convince his parents about his pokemon researcher dream. Unfortunately, his parents did not allow it. Eruu was dissapointed in his parents lack of support, when his grandparents supported him. Eruu wanted to return back to Fallarbor town, but his father wanted him work at a job he got him.
He hated the job and instead wanted to study more about pokemon. Torchic stayed at his parents home while he worked. Eruu's father felt that the pokemon was becoming a distraction to Eruu because he was performing poorly at his job. Eruu's dad threatend to give the pokemon away if he did not improve.
He was distraught at the idea that his dad would give away his best friend. More tragety struck as Eruu's grandmother passed away in Fallarbor town. Eruu's grandfather sold the farm and moved in with Eruu's parents. Eruu's father decided to take the Torchic away from Eruu once and for all, almost for no reason. Eruu was saddened, and couldn't help but break into tears once the Torchic was taken away.
Later that night, Eruu's grandfather took Torchic away from Eruu's father without him noticing and gave it back to Eruu. He also packed him a backpack with supplies and gave him the rest of the money they gave him for selling the farm. He urged Eruu to go on his own pokemon journey and learn about pokemon. He promised his grandpa that he would learn as much as he could. He recommended Eruu to challange the eight pokemon gyms across Hoenn and participate in the Hoenn Leauge. Eruu snuck out of his home in Rustboro City and left, never too look back. He was reluctant about becoming a pokemon trainer, but he promised his grandfather he would. Torchic became very fond of the idea of Eruu becoming a trainer and battling alongside him.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
One year later
The stadium crowd roars. Eruu stands on the trainer corner in the pokemon stadium with sweat driping down his face. Glaceon is hit with a powerful jet of water that reflects the staduim lights, giving off a hue of rainbow. Glaceon is thrusted backward. The primary jet of water dissolved after it thrusted the Glaceon away, leaving sparkles of water that glisten in the air. Glaceon falls several feet in front of Eruu.
"Glaceon is unable to battle!" yells the judge. The crowd cheers as the announcer repeats the judge's words. Eruu knows clearly that the crowd isn't on his side. Eruu pulls out Glaceon's pokeball and returns it. He looks at pokeball and thanks his pokemon. Eruu is amazed how the champions pokemon attacks are elgantly displayed. Not only does he manage to hit his pokemon; he does it with a flamboyant and dazzling style.
"You did your best Glaceon, thank you", He says as he returns his Glaceon. On the opposite side of the battlefield stands a Milotic that looks injured but is still ready to battle. It has dirt smudges, scratches, an bits of frost all over its body. Just a few feet behind the Milotic stands a pokemon trainer on the opposite trainer corner with light blue, somewhat long hair.
His name is Wallace, the current Hoenn pokemon champion.
"That was a remarkable battle! I congradulate you on raising such an elegant and tough Glaceon" remarks Wallace.
"Both trainers are down to thier last pokemon! Who will Eruu choose to battle?" says the stadium announcer. Eruu bites his lip and reaches for the back of his hip and pulls out a pokeball.
"This is it! Go Blaziken!" Eruu yells, as he throws the pokeball onto the battlefield. Blaziken emerges from the pokeball. Blaziken heavily focused at the Milotic standing opposite to it then intensely lit up it's wrists with fire.
"Eruu sends out his Blaziken! It has shown remarkable reslilence, and power throughout the Evergrande conference! But will it be enough to finally stop Wallace's Milotic?" states the announcer.
The crowd's cheers sends a chill down Eruu spine. He knows that Milotic has the type advantage, but after battling two consecutive battles, with Eruu's Salamance and Glaceon, it should be exhausted. But Milotic's recover move had been keeping it going. To win, Blaziken needs to strike fast and hard. Wallace reminds his Milotic to not underestimate the fire pokemon. Milotic turns its head to him, and gives him a small nod then turns to Blaziken standing on the otherside of the battlefield. The judge raises his two hands and shouts to begin the battle.
"Milotic, use hydro pump" orders Wallace. Milotic unleashes another dazzling jet of water towards Blaziken.
Blaziken jumps up into the startling night sky and evades the blast of water.
"Use brave bird! Now!" Blaziken covers itself in a blue aura while still airborne and charges at the Milotic. Blaziken hits the ground running, charging full speed at Milotic!
"A direct attack?!" yells Wallace. He is stunned.
Wallace orders Milotic to defend itself with whirlpool, but order is given too late. Blaziken collides with Milotic at full speed. Milotic is sent flying past Wallace and hits the stadium wall. Blaziken kneels on one knee, clearly have taken recoil damage but stands right back up. Milotic manages to pull through, but with one eye open and clenching it teeth.
"Recover!" orders Wallace. Milotic begins to glow brightly; giving off a mult-colored hue. Again, Wallace is displaying his attacks with elegance and beauty.
Eruu quickly reacted, "Don't allow it Blaziken! Thunderpunch!".
Blaziken rushes towards Milotic, englufing both fists in electricity. Milotic stops glowing and bearly evades the powerful thunderpunches. Blaziken instead punches the walls with both fists!
"Counter it with whirlpool!" commands Wallace to Milotic. Blaziken jumps out of the way as Milotic spins up a large wirlpool. The Wirlpool sucks in Blaziken, and Blaziken is spun around the vortex of water. Eruu helplessly watches as Blaziken is spun around, thrusted away then hit with a hydro pump combination. Blaziken falls several feet in front of Eruu.
"Shake it off Blaziken!" commanded Eruu. Blaziken struggles a bit to get up, but pulls through. Milotic uses that oppurtunity to recover, the pokemon slowly begins to glow vividly again.
"No you won't! Blaziken flamethower!" commanded Eruu. Blaziken eyes glowed red then unleashed a powerful flamethower.
"Blaze? Already!?" Eruu thought to himself. Blaziken's ability blaze had kicked in. He was a little surprised that Blaziken was wearing out rather quick.
"Hydro pump!" ordered Wallace. He was bit frustrated that Milotic didn't have time to recover. Milotic used Hydro pump to counter the powerful flamethower. Milotic and Blaziken keept up the attacks, almost evenly matched. Although, Miotic couldn't keep the Hydro pump going strongly enough. The flamethower got closer and closer to Milotic. Suddently due to exuastation, Milotic stopped using hydro pump and the flamethower hit it at full power and pushed back the Milotic.
"This is your chance!" yells Eruu. Blaziken englufs it's fists in electricty again and charges full speed at the Milotic!
"You need to use whirlpool to defend yourself!" pleaded Wallace. Milotic is still struggling to get up from the pervious attack.
"NOW! YOU HAVE IT!" exclaims Eruu. Blaziken leaped into the air and fell right onto Milotic. Milotic helplessly looks up at Blaziken as it lands a thunderpunch on its face. Milotic's head is flinged deep into ground, emitting a cloud of debris and dust.
<End of Badge 1>
(To be continued)
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