herojelly
PMD Puzzle!
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- 17
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- California
- Seen Dec 18, 2014
Darn it. SwiftSign and Crusher already pointed out most of the errors that I had. Grr. Alright! Whatever. Your mapping has greatly improved! Just two things:
1. I still don't like that river. I would love to see it narrower. But that bridge looks really awesome! And I like the side stair. But narrow the river. Make it two tiles wide.
2. This really isn't a problem, but I think you should replace the gap in the bottom left that SwiftSign pointed out with a big tree. And the gap on the right with small trees.
Good job! *tries to find a thumbs up emotion*
EDIT: Oh yeah, also at the top, the cliff has a staircase that leads up higher. Unless you plan to have the whole game on a mountain, it makes more sense for it to go down instead of up. If you NEED to have the stairs going up, don't make the tile error. You put three tiles that were shaded on the left next to each other. The two tiles on the right need to be not shaded.
1. I still don't like that river. I would love to see it narrower. But that bridge looks really awesome! And I like the side stair. But narrow the river. Make it two tiles wide.
2. This really isn't a problem, but I think you should replace the gap in the bottom left that SwiftSign pointed out with a big tree. And the gap on the right with small trees.
Good job! *tries to find a thumbs up emotion*
EDIT: Oh yeah, also at the top, the cliff has a staircase that leads up higher. Unless you plan to have the whole game on a mountain, it makes more sense for it to go down instead of up. If you NEED to have the stairs going up, don't make the tile error. You put three tiles that were shaded on the left next to each other. The two tiles on the right need to be not shaded.
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