Ruby hack: Pokemon Jade Version

[Lord Varion]

Info:

Spoiler:

This hack was orginally called Pokemon Itszu Region Saga
I changed thing on it but it is still the same hack,region etc

Story:
Your a 15 year old child ever since your were 8 you adored pokémon
Your favourate pokémon was a phanpy. Your father, DUKE, became the champion of the itzsu region when he was 28. when he became champion
he never returned home.your mother was devastated.Most children get there pokémon at the age of 10.But your mother wanted to wait till you were mature.Now two months after your birthday your neighbor Prof.MASON
is glad to help ...

Media:
Screenshots:

Videos

YT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aXpAqxeP5Y

RTH: https://romhacktube.com/video/6AWS7A6...n-Jade-Trailer

*Cant put the cid staright on to PC i dont know how to do youtube tags :/*

The offical August 2010 Pokemon Jade trailer ;)




Features:
*A brand new Itzsu Region
*Battle Kris Gold Silver Red and Blue
*Visit 1,2,&3 Island (Newly improved)
*Battle tower
*Rise of team live ;D
*Battle the emtionally Disturbed Rival Ronald
*Collect the 8 dark coins and enter the dark catacombs

Gym guide:
1st gym - POISON type

Spoiler:

Youngster Pete
Pkmn 1 : Koffing lvl 10
Pkmn 2 : Grimer lvl 11
Leader Faze
Pkmn 1: Ninjask lvl 12
Pkmn 2 : Zubat lvl 14

Credits:~
Me , Overworld(Not shown yet) , Mapping , Story plotting
Banjora Marxvile , Critism
Shiny quasgire , Music hacker
Mr Kurus ~ , Music hacker

Progress till beta 1

Spoiler:

Fallenleaf town 100% Mapped
Route 400 100% Mapped
Dersen city 100% mapped
Genecide Cave 100% mapped
Route 402 100% mapped
Dunesberg city 0% mapped
Alpoko Castle 0% mapped
Route 402 0% mapped
Beige Town 0% mapped
Route 403 0% mapped
Route 404 0% mapped
Route 405 0% mapped
WhiteRose City 0% mapped
Sparkle Lighthouse 2% mapped
Root Woods 0% mapped
Root Resthome 1% mapped
RootBroot City 0% mapped
~End of Beta~

Downloads :)
None yet :(

Thanks for listening

 

[Kevin]

"One must acknowledge one's defeat before he can move on ...
... I will go solo for now ... So that on day i will form a stronger
organization!
Putting together the potential of many is how you produce a huge power ...
Thats what a organization is
That's the strength of an organization...
But! I failed... to make the best use of my subordinates' potential...!
But you shall witness one day the revival of me and my Team ROcket!
........ One Day you will understand ......."
-6 years later-
... Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported ...
No team rocket ... No muggings...Robbing...Nothing
Life is perfect as they would say ... We found the perfect power source
to fuel our region -Itszu- and More pokemon have been discovered
But today i am 15 and i get my first pokemon ... I can't wait
I am destined to become the Newest Pokemon Master
I will beat the bigshots like Red Gold and Brendan

That's the old story. Itzsu Region Sage remade, eh? You mapping skills did approve, also. So that's a good thing. Good luck on this.

 

[jodonel]

I would make that lake in the first town smaller. Too much empty space. If you make a good tileset this could be a great hack

 

[Lord Varion]

That's the old story. Itzsu Region Sage remade, eh? You mapping skills did approve, also. So that's a good thing. Good luck on this.

Yeah the old story was mostly Giovanni's speech to silver
i may use that as a prologue :)

I would make that lake in the first town smaller. Too much empty space. If you make a good tileset this could be a great hack

Yeah the first town failed
i will re-map it i was mostly concentrating on Dersen City (Town 2)

 

[Super Ultra Mega Charizard]

the mapping isn't very good but some later maps seem to have improved.
also the headbutt tree is...horrible.
so far the scripting just looks reused from firered but you've only dhowed one script so idk.
tile errors I found circled in attachment

 

[imevil]

the town looks WAY to big

 

[Pearlone]

I like your Ideas, BUT The 1st Gym pokemon should be changed. Maybe:
Youngster Pete
Pkmn 1 : Grimer lvl 10
Pkmn 2 : Nidoran (M) lvl 11
Leader Faze
Pkmn 1: Koffing lvl 12
Pkmn 2 : Nidorino lvl 14

 

[Lord Varion]

the town looks WAY to big

the mapping isn't very good but some later maps seem to have improved.
also the headbutt tree is...horrible.
so far the scripting just looks reused from firered but you've only dhowed one script so idk.
tile errors I found circled in attachment

The fence behind the Lab was a accident
The grass at the side will be change
as will the tree at the bottom
And i dont see anything wrong with the house???

I like your Ideas, BUT The 1st Gym pokemon should be changed. Maybe:
Youngster Pete
Pkmn 1 : Grimer lvl 10
Pkmn 2 : Nidoran (M) lvl 11
Leader Faze
Pkmn 1: Koffing lvl 12
Pkmn 2 : Nidorino lvl 14

Aww Coool
I'll umm maybe use that :D ta (Will give credit)
~-Let the credit givin commence-~

 

[Super Ultra Mega Charizard]

the house has no door. houses have doors.

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

the house has no door. houses have doors.

Actually, in FR, there are loads of houses with no doors. I find that error to be fine, personally. Do all houses in cities have doors facing south? So, even then, FR can be wrong.

 

[Lord Varion]

the house has no door. houses have doors.

not all of them do on pokemon

and
~~Update~~

A little gift for you all since its my b-day
but im not showin where you get it

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

not all of them do on pokemon

and
~~Update~~

A little gift for you all since its my b-day
but im not showin where you get it

Probably not where you get it, but "Met in Dersen Lab" hints where you get it, if it is telling the truth. Which I hope it is. If not, then you sir are a liar.

 

[Lord Varion]

Hi, I have a little question about posting a new threat.
Always if I click submit to submit my threat then it doesn't appear in the forums. Can you please help me??

Um.. ask a Mod or a Admin :L

Probably not where you get it, but "Met in Dersen Lab" hints where you get it, if it is telling the truth. Which I hope it is. If not, then you sir are a liar.

Yes But there will be many People in Dersen Lab
Since it has a school too :P

 

[Lord Varion]

:..:~UPDATE~:..:
New Trees and Grass and New hero OW

Dersen City updates

Genecide Carverns

Dunseberg City:

 

[I-Like-Shiny-Pichu]

Looks cool Samface, just one thing, if u r gonna change the name, pllllllllz dont call it Topaz Version, go with Jade Version. Also, that cave map looks pretty good, your mapping is definately improving.

 

[Spherical Ice]

Dersen City updates

That path is a real eye-sore. Try softening the colours a little? Remember that the paths etc. are the background, so shouldn't stand out so much unless they need to.

Genecide Carverns

If I'm right in assuming the 'e' is a typo, then... why are you calling a cave Genocide Cavern? And, more to the point, why would people be in this place? ...seriously...

Dunseberg City:

I dunno about everyone but I don't think I would announce that I'm an emo in big bold letters on a signpost (in a hypothetical world). Also, is Marble really a name (read: don't bombard me with 'is brock a real name' or something. not everything game freak does is correct)?

This story is... well, it could be presented in a more organised manner. The overuse of elipses makes it unnatractive to read, and doesn't read how I assume you want it to read (which isn't like: "Hello." five second pause. "My name is John.").

Good luck.

 

[Lord Varion]

Looks cool Samface, just one thing, if u r gonna change the name, pllllllllz dont call it Topaz Version, go with Jade Version. Also, that cave map looks pretty good, your mapping is definately improving.

Yes I may go with Jade version :P

That path is a real eye-sore. Try softening the colours a little? Remember that the paths etc. are the background, so shouldn't stand out so much unless they need to.

Hmm... I dont see much wrong with it
But over time i may make it blend in with the house tiles.

If I'm right in assuming the 'e' is a typo, then... why are you calling a cave Genocide Cavern? And, more to the point, why would people be in this place? ...seriously...

It's named "Genocide Caverns" because
200,000 years ago ... a powerful tribe entered the Cavern in search for
an Magical Power ... A certain species of Pokémon Protected this "power"
The tribe Wiped out the Pokémon In result means they committed Genocide

(The species that were wiped will be obtainable deep within the Caverns :) )

I dunno about everyone but I don't think I would announce that I'm an emo in big bold letters on a signpost (in a hypothetical world). Also, is Marble really a name (read: don't bombard me with 'is brock a real name' or something. not everything game freak does is correct)?

This story is... well, it could be presented in a more organised manner. The overuse of elipses makes it unnatractive to read, and doesn't read how I assume you want it to read (which isn't like: "Hello." five second pause. "My name is John.").

Good luck.

I see Your Point with the Name part That is the default name
Since the first gym was going to be a ground gym
I changed it to poison though :P

As for the emo part ... Why not ?

 

[Spherical Ice]

Because 'emo' is an insultive term?

Either way, why would someone go excavating in a cave called Genocide? Surely they'd be put off.

Anyway, idk, go ahead.

 

[giradialkia]

Because 'emo' is an insultive term?

Either way, why would someone go excavating in a cave called Genocide? Surely they'd be put off.

Anyway, idk, go ahead.

Not necessarily. 'Emo' just derives from 'emotional rocker' so... While it's used insultingly (according to my phone, that's a word) alot of the time, when it's a person describing themselves (which does happen), it is not.
A bit of advice would be to completely change that Dersen City path, IMO. The colours look really unnatural for a path, to me.

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

Seriously, you don't see anything wrong with that path? It is quite... Eye drawing, and not the good kind. More the kind that distracts and annoys the player... Well, it would annoy me. Please do change the colours a bit...