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Pokemon:Sevii ilands Journey!(better version)

Patamon_Master

thx 2 me 4 my avatar!!!!!!!!!!
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    • Seen Apr 6, 2006
    sorry bout all of that(it will be up again)plz mods give me a chance
     
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    You need to spell correctly, have control of your capital letters, and to have a decent story line. Check out Pokemon Kanto Dimension, Pokemon Instincts (all of them) and Pokemon Oddysyey. Check out mine if you want, but mine follows the story of the manga series...(Link in sig...)...
     
    A few suggestions.

    A). Just giving us a series of links means nothing. Try to give each part of your comic a title, even if it's just 'Part 1' or something simple like that, at least we can understand a logical order.

    B). Organise those links! Put one on each line because it just looks ugly as it is. (ie, discover the power of the Enter key) Also I can't tell where one link ends and the next begins.

    C). What is the comic about? What about characters? Storyline: is it serious or fun? Explain a bit about the comic, so others will want to read it.
     
    Did I forget? Do link the Pictures. Comics aren't called comic strips for nothing!
     
    Dashiel said:
    1.Learn to spell
    2.Dont save as Gif
    3.Their called comic strips for a reason
    4.Give credit
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    Also dont forget to NOT over-run your speech bubbles...
     
    Well everyone else here has it right.
    Get good sprites
    Save as PNG
    Learn to spell
    Tell us which comic is which
    Dont use chatspeak
    Put comics in one line.
    Read other comics to get the feel of how to lay it out.
    Try to fix those things and maybe you'll be fine.
     
    No point in giving up just when you've started. I think you tried to do too much too soon though. Give it a few weeks, improve by reading all the advice here, and then try again.
     
    yeh matt,mena, or any1 else who makes comics can u help i need recolored sprites 4 my comic plz and where do i get routes and other stuff???
     
    hey its me patamon_master!my new account has a better name i rekon
     
    Shadowed_Venasaur said:
    i dont care im made this thread
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    Sorry, but you want help? First of all, you just spammed, massivly Off-Topic (not to mention reacting with attitude towards Dash...)...secondly, why didn't you just request a new name for yourself in general discusion? thirdly, i can't understand you...please speak English...and punctuate properly...and If you improve in all of these, i may help, depending on my buisiness...
     
    i close this thread (mods help wif this 1 plz.)
     
    Shadowed_Venasaur: Who on earth do you think you are? First off, don't spam this thread. Secondly, regardless of you being new, obey the rules of the forum. This is not a matter of choice, it's a demand. So I expect you do so immediately.

    As for the rest of you, pay no attention to him.
     
    sorry signomi (its me patamon_master)hi...........lame i am and lame i shall alsways be im real sorry 4 b4
     
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