Pokemon Topaz

[Death Rogers]

No, it's not a hack or new game, it's a comic series. By me! It's basically a bunch of shorts where a protagonist faces an issue which eventually gets him killed. There's no real plot.

WARNING: These comics involve swearing and violence. I do not recommend you to read them if you are under the age of 13.
NOT-SO-SERIOUS-WARNING: If you are overweight, you may find "It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat" to be somewhat offensive as it involves overweight characters having heart attacks.

"It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat."
#1 So Hungry
#2 SECURITY!
#3 Nonsense

"Why do you even want it?"

"G-G-ghost!!"
#1 This isn't funny!
#2 But why?

The Fall of Giovanni (Don't be fooled by the title, this comic miniseries is anything but serious.)
#1 The Jig Is Up!

 

[Esupio]

Your aiming for a humourous comic, yes? Well I suggest getting better material, because somebody having a heart attack isn't that funny, neither is the diaglouge.

Work on the humour and you might find yourself with a better comic.

Its not bad, but the humour is, just work on the humour, and use speech bubbles

 

[D R E ™]

What are you talkin bout dis is mad funny, lol i like all of them please continue it

 

[Chizzy]

I didn't find it funny neither. Many may find this offensive too.

Work on your humour to improve this.

 

[Death Rogers]

Offensive? Do you mean like insulting to fat people or curse-words-wise? If it's the second one, I put a warning, so I can't take any blame if someone reads it and doesn't like it.

Anyway, I just finished another.

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

I can't really see that offence much, I meen, I won't lie, I'm a little overweight and I even created a chaiter called "Fat may" and she weighed...*thinks* 400 something pounds. So, if some people think its offensive, you should put in the warning bar -may be offence to some-

 

[Death Rogers]

I finished the comic. Please comment on it.

 

[Fox♠]

It can be seen as very offensive, making a crude joke about heart attacks isn't funny, the Misty issue wasn't bad.

 

[Death Rogers]

Yeah, I tried not to offend too much with the second one.

I didn't know what to do with the first. So I made a comic about what came to mind first, which was heart attacks. But really, the heart attack wasn't the main joke in comic 1-3. The main joke I had in there was when the fat guy said "Nonsense, those are for fat people."

 

[Fox♠]

I know, i did chuckle at that bit, the comment on why it was offensive was more or less directed at Achamo and cuttyflam.

 

[Defranco]

Nice Comics keep up the good work.

 

[Pikakid]

Lol, this is hilarious. I am making a Sprite comic too. It is called Pokesonic. It's when the Sonic characters get their first pokemon and become pokemon trainers.

 

[Signomi]

Once again, don't advertise in another person's comic thread. Another post like that and it's a warning. :/

Basically, all posts must refer completely to the comic. I see you're new around here, so keep that in mind.

 

[Captain Arcane]

I like them! ^_^ But they seem a little empty at times, like, try having a little more pictures. But overall, I think they were pretty good, but you can do way better I bet!

Keep it up! ^_'

 

[Death Rogers]

Thank you.

By the way, I'm working on a new comic. It should be done by Saturday.

 

[Cursed]

Good to hear, Death Rogers, although the first group of comics was a little noncontinuous. Maybe some more comics in between with maybe a visit to the doctor or something?

 

[Death Rogers]

Wow. I'm getting a lot of positive feedback. But still, I'd like some comments on the ghost one.

 

[Pikakid]

The Ghost one was kinda funny but it was kinda Like a haunted movie

 

[Xochi]

I didn't think the first one was funny, but I did like the other two.

Little thing: In the second ghost comic, there's a typo. "Did'nt" instead of "didn't."

 

[ちりRina]

The ghost one is a little... odd... clefairy is normal and dusclops has levitate.... but I guess it doesn't matter in a comic xD Good job on it anyways :)