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Death Rogers

Death Rogers

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    No, it's not a hack or new game, it's a comic series. By me! It's basically a bunch of shorts where a protagonist faces an issue which eventually gets him killed. There's no real plot.

    WARNING: These comics involve swearing and violence. I do not recommend you to read them if you are under the age of 13.
    NOT-SO-SERIOUS-WARNING: If you are overweight, you may find "It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat" to be somewhat offensive as it involves overweight characters having heart attacks.

    "It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat."
    #1 So Hungry
    #2 SECURITY!
    #3 Nonsense

    "Why do you even want it?"

    "G-G-ghost!!"
    #1 This isn't funny!
    #2 But why?

    The Fall of Giovanni (Don't be fooled by the title, this comic miniseries is anything but serious.)
    #1 The Jig Is Up!
     
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    Your aiming for a humourous comic, yes? Well I suggest getting better material, because somebody having a heart attack isn't that funny, neither is the diaglouge.

    Work on the humour and you might find yourself with a better comic.

    Its not bad, but the humour is, just work on the humour, and use speech bubbles
     
    I didn't find it funny neither. Many may find this offensive too.

    Work on your humour to improve this.
     
    Offensive? Do you mean like insulting to fat people or curse-words-wise? If it's the second one, I put a warning, so I can't take any blame if someone reads it and doesn't like it.

    Anyway, I just finished another.
     
    I can't really see that offence much, I meen, I won't lie, I'm a little overweight and I even created a chaiter called "Fat may" and she weighed...*thinks* 400 something pounds. So, if some people think its offensive, you should put in the warning bar -may be offence to some-
     
    It can be seen as very offensive, making a crude joke about heart attacks isn't funny, the Misty issue wasn't bad.
     
    Yeah, I tried not to offend too much with the second one.

    I didn't know what to do with the first. So I made a comic about what came to mind first, which was heart attacks. But really, the heart attack wasn't the main joke in comic 1-3. The main joke I had in there was when the fat guy said "Nonsense, those are for fat people."
     
    I know, i did chuckle at that bit, the comment on why it was offensive was more or less directed at Achamo and cuttyflam.
     
    Lol, this is hilarious. I am making a Sprite comic too. It is called Pokesonic. It's when the Sonic characters get their first pokemon and become pokemon trainers.
     
    Once again, don't advertise in another person's comic thread. Another post like that and it's a warning. :/

    Basically, all posts must refer completely to the comic. I see you're new around here, so keep that in mind.
     
    I like them! ^_^ But they seem a little empty at times, like, try having a little more pictures. But overall, I think they were pretty good, but you can do way better I bet!

    Keep it up! ^_'
     
    Good to hear, Death Rogers, although the first group of comics was a little noncontinuous. Maybe some more comics in between with maybe a visit to the doctor or something?
     
    The Ghost one was kinda funny but it was kinda Like a haunted movie
     
    The ghost one is a little... odd... clefairy is normal and dusclops has levitate.... but I guess it doesn't matter in a comic xD Good job on it anyways :)
     
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