pokemon treasure version

[pikachoo456]

(proffesor):you are ready to experience with pokemon and how to raise them
so you have to travel far wide to experience with pokemon

story:you wake up change real quickly and
hurry to proffesor oak's lab (you have to
answer these question's)
gender:
name:
rival's name:
there are three pokeballs
flamerizer:the fiery but nice fire type
aquaburst:the curious and water type
grasseary:the fearsome grass type

you pick one and then you have to battle your rival
more story coming

 

[|Maximus|]

That is the most weirrdest story I have ever heard.

 

[pluslefan]

That is a cool story pikachoo456.

 

[Geeked]

lol you should put more thoughts and ideas thats only the beggining

 

[pikachoo456]

if anyone would like to help me make
the towns and routes

made my own pokemon

 

[pluslefan]

I would like to help and your picture looks
kind of good but you need to put a little
bit of shade on it.

 

[pikachoo456]

my town little oak
i did not copy any town
this one i made

 

[pluslefan]

That is a cool town pikachoo456.

 

[Flameguru]

The Pokemon and the Map both need lots of work.

 

[Improfane]

The Pokemon and the Map both need lots of work.

The pokemon, yea but what is wrong with the town?
Perhaps it needs more detail, like dancing flowers and it's otherwise too symmetrical but fine.

 

[Flameguru]

1) The Town is too symmetrical
2) There are openings everywhere! (Between Trees)
3) Too much open space
4) At the top it's just so ridiculous and needs to be fixed a lot
5) Random Mailbox!? No other houses have them...
6) A Fenced in area leading to a "Tent" ?
7) Errors with the fencing
8) The door to a house in the bottom left is way too close to the Tree
9) Uneven spacing between trees creates major design flaws and open space