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You need to sort your formatting, BloodLucario.
 
I'd like a shot at this, But I'm not sure how much I can put here right now.

Gym Name
Atmos Gym
Gym Type(s)
Steel
Gym Number
7-8?


Gym Sign:
Atmos City Gym
Leader: Azure, The steel-willed astronomer!
Gym Nerd Speech: Hi again, champ-in-making! This Gym's trainers use steel types. Don't tell me you don't know your type matchups at this point!

Gym Trainers

Trainer 1
Rich Boy Festus

Opening Speech: Welcome to our Gym. I'll be your welcome committee today!


Team

No sprites yet...

Lairon
Lv.48 Male​

Forretress
Lv.51 Male​



Closing Speech: Darn, I lost, even here! If I give you some extra money, will you pretend I won?
Overworld defeat speech: I'm serious, tell the next guy I won! Huh, whaddya mean, "then how'd you get there"?​


Trainer 2
Ace Trainer Jacob

Opening Speech: Sigh... That Festus kid thinks he can buy anything. Oh, a challenger!


Team

Skarmory
Lv.50 Male

Bronzong
Lv.54 Neutral

Magnezone
Lv.58 Neutral

Closing Speech: Gah! I'm gone too... Good match. I'm going to go mooch some money off Festus to help me feel better.

Trainer 3: Guitarist Jonnie​

Opening Speech: Whooooaaahh...YEAH! A new trainer! Lemme play something real deep for you.​

Exploud
Lv.65 Male​
(with water pulse, hyper voice, zen headbutt, and hammer arm, if you could do that. if not, default will be fine)
Closing speech:
POW!
Uh, no, that wasn't me, that was one of my micro-amps. Ahh! I'm going to have to buy a new one!
Gym Leader



Opening Speech:


Team (Pictures, Levels, & Movesets must be included)


Closing Speech:


Final Words:


TM:
Badge:
ROUND 2


Gym Name
Gym Type(s)
Gym Number




Gym Leader


Opening Speech:


Team (Pictures, Levels, & Movesets must be included)


Closing Speech:

I'll fill in the rest later...
 
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Pyro Gym
Fire
Gym 5

Gym Sign - Pyro Gym, Leader: Sonny, Too hot for the competition!
Gym Nerd - Hey champ in the making, you may be a hot shot... but can you handle the heat from the fire type pokémon used in this gym?

Gym Trainer 1:
Firebreather Aidan

Opening Speech: Haha, my pokémon share my firebreathing skills! We are an unbeatable combination!

Team
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Slugma
Level 35
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Torkoal
Level 35

Closing Speech: What? How did you beat our combination?

Gym Trainer 2:
Beauty Cindy

Opening Speech: Hee hee, look at my cute pokémon!

Team

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Flareon
Level 38

Closing Speech: How dare you treat my pokémon like that!

Gym Trainer 3:
Cooltrainer Bart

Opening Speech: Think you're hot enough to hang with me?

Team

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Ninetales
Level 35

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Houndoom
Level 36

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Infernape
Level 38

Closing Speech: You're still not hot enough to hang with me...

Gym Leader
Leader Sonny

Opening Speech: Haha, a new challenger! I am Sonny, leader of Pyro Gym. We specialise in Fire type pokémon. So kid, think you can stand the heat?

Team

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Arcanine
Level 40
-Extremespeed
-Fire Fang
-Take Down
-Flamethrower
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Magmortar
Level 42
-Thunder Punch
-Fire Punch
-Confuse Ray
-Lava Plume
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Typhlosion
Level 46
-Swift
-Lava Plume
-Gyro Ball
-Flamethrower
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Charizard
Level 48
-Wing Attack
-Fire Fang
-Slash
-Flamethrower

Closing Speech: Wow kid, you showed real fire in that battle!

Final words: That was a great battle kid, you showed a real burning desire. You really earned this badge! (Player receives Lava Badge). You'll go far kid, I know it! Take this TM to help you on your journey. (Player receives TM50 Overheat) That TM contains Overheat... it's one powerful move, but be careful how you use it!

TM: TM50 Overheat
Badge: Lava Badge

Round 2


Opening Speech: Good to see you again kid. My extra trainings made my pokémon too hot for even you too handle!

Team

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Arcanine
Level 76
-Extremespeed
-Fire Fang
-Take Down
-Flamethrower
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Blaziken
Level 77
-Blaze Kick
-Sky Uppercut
-Brave Bird
-Flare Blitz
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Magmortar
Level 77
-Flamethrower
-Sunny Day
-Fire Blast
-Hyper Beam
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Typhlosion
Level 78
-Gyro Ball
-Flamethrower
-Double Edge
-Eruption
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Charizard
Level 79
-Slash
-Wing Attack
-Heat Wave
-Flare Blitz

Closing Words: You still won? You really are something kid...

Final Words: Never lose that burning spirit kid. It will take you far...
 
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Opening Speech: Good to see you again kid. My extra trainings made my pokémon too hot for even you too handle!

Team

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Arcanine
Level 76
-Extremespeed
-Fire Fang
-Take Down
-Flamethrower
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Blaziken
Level 77
-Blaze Kick
-Sky Uppercut
-Brave Bird
-Flare Blitz
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Magmortar
Level 77
-Flamethrower
-Sunny Day
-Fire Blast
-Hyper Beam
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Typhlosion
Level 78
-Gyro Ball
-Flamethrower
-Double Edge
-Eruption
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Charizard
Level 79
-Slash
-Wing Attack
-Heat Wave
-Flare Blitz

Closing Words: You still won? You really are something kid...

Final Words: Never lose that burning spirit kid. It will take you far...

I like how you've used the first 3 generations fire stater pokemon :D
 
Dang, thought I had a good chance with my Ground Type gym. I don't have any more time this week to make another gym so, oh well. That is unless I can repost that gym with slight Pokemon changes and level changes.
 
Dang, thought I had a good chance with my Ground Type gym. I don't have any more time this week to make another gym so, oh well. That is unless I can repost that gym with slight Pokemon changes and level changes.

i wouldn't.. He didn't pick that for a reason. Unless it was second bnest and the fighting was just epic. Your choice :D
 
BloodLucario, please don't discourage others from posting; that was a close round and I liked all the gyms. Your Ground gym was excellent HallwayKid, and I would love to see a slightly edited version of it, or if you get the time, a new gym all together. Also, BloodLucario, please please please don't quote whole gyms. They are hugely expansive posts, and quoting them all takes up a shitload of space.

Now I have some comments =).

Originally Posted by Charmageddon
Hold on - gym 4's already closed? I thought it closed tomorrow! GAH! I had an awesome one planned out and everything, but I couldn't complete it yesterday because my laptop broke! Aarghh!
Sorry! I didn't extend the deadline, despite my being late to start the round. Btw, Charmageddon, I have chosen you for the Guest Judge. I'm often too busy to make comments on every gym, so I need a little help. Don't worry, you'll still be able to submit gyms and such, I just need someone to give some guidance and enforce some basic rules. Tell me if this works for you =)

BloodLucario's Bug Gym

As Charmageddon mentioned, the formatting needs a little work. By this I mean Spacing & Bold/Underlining to make it more readable. Also, Hyper Beam on Scizor and Giga Impact on Roserade are not competetively viable by any means. Hyper Beam is Special & Giga Impact is Physical, so they both are attacks that hit these pokemon on their weaker offensive stats. Also, the recharge turn is not so sexy. So my big themes are formatting and competetively viableness. It's a good gym overall, thanks for submitting.

You Had Me At Hello's Fire Gym

I love it. I'm sooo glad to see you back from Round 2: you were my #2 choice there in that round. The gym is beautifully done, all the formatting and the rules are followed, and you gave the Gym Trainers appropriate Pokemon (i.e. a Flareon for the Beauty, you know what I mean.) I have no complaints with this gym, though I would ask that you change the name from Ash. It makes sense with the Fire types, but...I think you know what I'm getting at. Great job.
 
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I've been saving up for this one! Have fun! :D
Gym Name:
Avian Cliffs Pokémon Gym
Gym Type(s)
Flying
Gym Number:
5


Gym Sign:
Avian Cliffs Pokémon Gym.
Leader: Vladimir - the swooping swordsman.

Gym Nerd Speech: (he's outside the gym)*wheeze, wheeze*Long time, no see champ! This gym is ridiculous. When I tried to enter the gym, it was all dark inside, and trainers just kept coming from all angles whilst yelling at me! With such aerial movement, they must be flying-type trainers. Zap, freeze, or toss rocks at them to break their wings and avenge me!

Gym description: The standard colour scheme for this one is a mixture between dark green walls, and white brick platforms. The other tiles are filled with a white-ish fog.

Gym Puzzle:
Spoiler:

Okay, here's the key:
Have you been to Brawleys gym in Dewford before? The one that lights up more the more trainers you defeat? This one is like that, only that if you use flash, you'll be able to see everything. Otherwise, every trainer you win against will illuminate the area a little.
Apart from that, this gym is partly platforms/levels, partly air only. The big white squares on the map mark the platforms (if it's something on the square, you can be pretty darn sure it's a platform)
A red dot marks a spot where you can glide from one red dot to another, provided you have a flying pokemon with you.
A blue dot marks a spot where there are favourable winds blowing from below, so you can glide up to the level above by stepping on it.
A green dot marks a spot where you can swoop down from above to a lower level. The black lines show where you're headed if you step on a green/blue spot.
The light purple dots are the gym trainers, and the dark purple dot is the gym leader.
So, for the tricky part:
The light brown squares are strength boulders. If you push them over the edge, they will fall and eventually land on the same spot on a lower level. By doing so, these boulders will become bridges to allow you to access certain parts of the gym. The blue lines mark where the boulders should go, in order to pass the puzzle. (Please note that the two boulders on the south platform on lvl 3 are there only for a shortcut after you've beaten the leader, they are not required to push down in order to actually pass the gym)

EDIT: The entrance is located at level 1, between trainer 1 and 2, btw, in case that wasn't clear enough.


Gym Trainers
(Minimum of 2 <-- lol)


Trainer 1 (facing east)
Ace Trainer Sullivan


Opening Speech: Another weak one? I'll get rid of your disgrace!

Team:
Golbat lvl 36
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Staraptor lvl 38
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Closing Speech: I guess you're the real deal, huh?

Final Words: Nice to see a strong person for a change. Say hello to the nerd outside for me, will ya? Hahaha!
Trainer 2 (facing west)
Ace Trainer Steve


Opening Speech: Flying-types can't get hit by Earthquakes! They're invincible!

Team :
Crobat lvl 42
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Staravia lvl 34
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Closing Speech: You make me want to feel invisible…

Final Words: Gosh dang it. How did I forget about the other 16 types?

Trainer 3 (should be facing the red spot on the map/north)
Bug Catcher Allyson


Opening Speech: Ah, have you learned to ride your aerial pokemon?

Team:
Scyther lvl 45
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Closing Speech: Well, I crashed.

Final Words: Wondering how to get to the next platform? Step on the spot in front of me, and glide over using your beloved flying-type!

Trainer 4 (facing west)
Bird Catcher Dunstan


Opening Speech: A bird flew into my trap!

Team :
Xatu lvl 42
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Togetic lvl 40
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Delibird lvl 41
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Closing Speech: That's not a bird…

Final Words: Nothing but birds come here anyway, I was shocked seeing you!

Trainer 5 (facing east)
Flower Lady Brenda


Opening Speech: Not all flying-types have wings.

Team :
Jumpluff lvl 41
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Drifblim lvl 39
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Closing Speech: … Not that it mattered in the end though.

Final Words: You can fly up a level by walking near the current.

Trainer 6 (facing west)
Bird Catcher Sheryll


Opening Speech: Surprise strikes from above!

Team :
Pidgeot lvl 40
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Fearow lvl 40
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Closing Speech: …Yet you were over me.

Final Words: To strike from above, fly higher!

Trainer 7 (facing north)
Bug Catcher Johnatan


Opening Speech: I'll tell you a fun fact if you win.

Team:
Jumpluff lvl 41
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Ledian lvl 44
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Closing Speech: Okay…

Final Words: Did you know… that the only Pokémon incapable of jumping is Donphan?

Trainer 8 (facing north)
Veteran Braxton


Opening Speech: Don't step on this current! There's nothing to see up there!

Team :
Gligar lvl 40
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Beautifly lvl 42
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Closing Speech: Really! Don't!

Final Words: I told you so…

Trainer 9 (facing south)
Dragon Tamer Andrina


Opening Speech: You've made it pretty far. Let me test you!

Team :
Altaria lvl 43
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Charizard lvl 41
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Closing Speech: There's a reason for that too!

Final Words: Oh, wow. Even Arceus would be in trouble against you!

Trainer 10 (facing east)
Pokemon Breeder Hollis


Opening Speech: I'm on a completely different level than you!

Team :
Mantine lvl 38
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Drifloon lvl 36
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Tropius lvl 35
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Ninjask lvl 37
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Farfetch'd lvl 39
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Closing Speech: I just realized. Dang.

Final Words: In order to reach me, you'd have to be on the same level! Damn it!

Trainer 11 (facing west)
Ace Trainer Dorian


Opening Speech: Hah! I'm literally at the top!

Team :
Dodrio lvl 43
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Vespiquen lvl 44
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Closing Speech: Apparently, so are you.

Final Words: Hmph! Fine! You may beat me, but Vladimir will crush you!

Trainer 12 (facing west)
Ace Trainer Davinia


Opening Speech: You will never reach our gym leader!

Team :
Honchkrow lvl 43
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Masquerain lvl 42
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Peplipper lvl 44
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Closing Speech: Well, you may reach him, but you won't beat him!

Final Words: I will do everything in order to serve Vladimir! Ho-hah!

Trainer 13 (facing east)
Pokemaniac Martin


Opening Speech: I use pokemon other people never use. Think you can beat them?

Team :
Hoppip lvl 39
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Drifloon lvl 37
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Taillow lvl 40
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Pidgey lvl 43
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Closing Speech: I guess there's a reason for that.

Final Words: Oh! My B-button is jammed! Of course they won't evolve!

Trainer 14 (facing north)
Bird Catcher Nathalie


Opening Speech: Not good enough!

Team :
Aerodactyl lvl 45
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Swellow lvl 42
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Closing Speech: Not good enough!

Final Words: Not good enough!





Gym Leader Vladimir:
Appearance: Very pale skin, with deep chestnut-brown eyes and blonde smoothly cut hair. He wears a black coat, complete with a red tightly buttoned skirt inside, a pair of black pants, and a white tie. He is also using two swords as a cane, something along the lines of the last panel in this comic.



Opening Speech: I welcome you to my humble gym. Seeing you here mean that my followers must be punished… Well, shall we begin? I have a… thirst for revenge.

Team :

Yanmega lvl 45
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Tinted Lens
- Bug Buzz
- Air Slash
- Ancientpower
- U-turn

Gyarados lvl 47 @ Leftovers
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Intimidate
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Waterfall
- Dragon Dance

Gliscor lvl 46
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Hyper Cutter
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Stealth Rock
- Roost

Dodrio lvl 48@ Choice Band
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Early Bird
- Return
- Brave Bird
- Quick Attack
- Payback

Skarmory lvl 49@ Life Orb
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Keen Eye
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Swords Dance
- Substitute

Closing Speech: That was… well done. You were brave, and even in the face of me you did your very best. You beating my peasants were no fluke after all! You are worthy of the Daring Badge! (doo dee da doo). That little thing'll let you fly outside of battles, so go out and explore the world! Oh, and here, take this TM as a reward for beating the best of the best! (receive TM 38/or w/e Brave Bird)

Final Words: Come back later for a better showdown. We're not done yet!

TM: 38 -> Brave Bird (120 BP Flying move -> deals 33% recoil to user)
Badge: Daring BadgeA black and yellow badge that looks like a frightened face, sort of. Might also look like a duck.
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ROUND 2





Opening Speech: So, you are back. Let me pound you into oblivion!

Team :
Yanmega lvl 77 @ Choice Specs
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Tinted Lens
- Bug Buzz
- Air Slash
- Ancientpower
- Shadow Ball

Gyarados lvl 76 @ Leftovers
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Intimidate
- Dragon Dance
- Substitute
- Waterfall
- Bounce

Gliscor lvl 78 @ Leftovers
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Hyper Cutter
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Stealth Rock
- Roost

Ho-oh lvl 78 @ Life Orb
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Pressure
- Brave Bird
- Sacred Fire
- Earthquake
- Sunny Day

Skarmory lvl 79 @ Leftovers
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Keen Eye
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Swords Dance
- Substitute


Closing Speech: You beat me fair and square. NOT! I refuse to admit this loss! I'm furious! I wanted this to last for longer! Fufufufu...

Final Words: … Right.There are many people strong in this world. Right now, I believe you could go beat them all. Finish them, kid!
 
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Phantom Renegade: Holy ****. Holy ****. Holy ****. You pulled out all the stops there. Oh my god. I have nothing to say but good luck topping that to everyone else. Holy **** Amazing work.

Also, by now, I am completely fine with having one Uber in your Round 2. That doesn't mean bring out the strongest ubers you can find (Kyogre, Mewtwo, Deoxys-A), but I'm fine with Giratina, Ho-Oh, Lugia, Manaphy, and ubers along those lines.
 
Thermo City Gym
Flying Type
Gym #5

Gym Sign
Spoiler:


Gym Nerd
Spoiler:


Gym Structure
Spoiler:


First trip through gym
Spoiler:


Round Two
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Hmm i think im going to get rid of roserade completely anyway as she isn't a bug type anyway,

Also before when he said i need to sort out my formatting i used my mums laptop and it messed up everything i had done to the post and put it into one big word.
 
You Had Me At Hello's Fire Gym

I love it. I'm sooo glad to see you back from Round 2: you were my #2 choice there in that round. The gym is beautifully done, all the formatting and the rules are followed, and you gave the Gym Trainers appropriate Pokemon (i.e. a Flareon for the Beauty, you know what I mean.) I have no complaints with this gym, though I would ask that you change the name from Ash. It makes sense with the Fire types, but...I think you know what I'm getting at. Great job.

Thanks :)

Oh my god, I sooooo didn't think of that! How stupid am I? I'll go edit now :)
 
Heh, thanks Maci ^^ I think I actually ran out of flying-type pokemon that wasn't "legendary-ish" whilst making the gym... I mean, would've been a little odd if one of the trainers had a Rayquaza lvl 45 C_c
 
Heh, thanks Maci ^^ I think I actually ran out of flying-type pokemon that wasn't "legendary-ish" whilst making the gym... I mean, would've been a little odd if one of the trainers had a Rayquaza lvl 45 C_c


Lol xD you still have the three legendary birds and ho-oh and lugia though :O
 
As you can see, Ho-oh is included in round 2, so the only fully-evolved-ish flying types left out were Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Lugia, Shaymin-S, Rayquaza, Dragonite and Salamence, if my memory serves right.. :P Oh, and Noctowl lol.
 
Sorry i wasn't here last round. i just got a new cat....well, kitten. X) anyway, heres the Dark Night gym again.

Dark Night Gym
Dark type(s)
Gym #5

Gym sign : Dark Night Gym
Leader: Daniel, Master of Darkness
Gym nerd speech: Hey champ, how are you? lets hope your prepared with Fighting and Bug types, because the leader here is a master of Dark types. Good luck!

Puzzle:
There are 16 rooms with 16 buttons that will light up and dim the area. 8 light up the area, but 8 will dim the room. when you defeat the leader, push the button and the whole area will light up fully. the order of the buttons will be with the trainer i post. i'll say "Dim" or "Light" after the sprite. Light=light up the room. Dim= dim the room. You also have to defeat EVERY trainer and press all the trainers buttons before you can face the leader. The door where the leader is has a trap that will bring you back to the start while one of your pokemon with get a random status affliction (Brun, Poison, ect.). To make it so no one picks the leader door without knowing, there will be a sign with the words, "Leader Daniel's room".

Night Walker Rose (Female) Sprite:
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Light

Opening speech: Well, your the first trainer in awhile. I'm going to have to test you if your worthy of face our Gym leader!

Team
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Houndoom
Level 39
Early Bird


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Sableye
level 40
Keen Eye


Closing speech: Wow, your really good!

Final words: You just might have what it takes to beat Daniel.

Night Walker Erik (Male) Sprite:
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Light

Opening speech: I'll show you the true Power of Darkness!

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Houndour
Level 40
Flash Fire

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Murkrow
Level 40
Insomnia

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Sharpedo
Level 43
Rough Skin

Closing speech: You too strong!


Final words: I guess i was alittle over confident...

Night Walker Trish and Andrew sprite: Dim

Opening speech

Trish: We always win!
Andrew: We're unbeatable!
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Skuntank
Level 43
Stench

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Weavile
Level 43
Pressure

Closing speech:
Trish:That's a first!
Andrew: We Lost!

Final words:
Trish: Wow....your good.
Andrew: How could we lose?

Night Walker Rick sprite: Light

Opening speech: You can beat me with your kind of Pokemon!

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Crawdaunt
Level 40
Hyper cutter

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Drapion
Level 41
Battle Armor

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Unbreon
Level 40
Synchronize

Closing speech: Wait.....What?!

Final words: How did this happen?!

Night Walker Harley sprite: Dim

Opening speech: I hope you'll be a challenge then most other people!

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Weavile
Level 42
Pressure

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Spiritomb
Level 42
Pressure

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Sableye
Level 42
Keen Eye

Closing speech: Too strong! Too strong

Final words: Wow......i can't believe i lost....

Night Walker Mario sprite: Dim

Opening speech: What? You look like your dying to say something. Anyway, lets battle!

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Carvanha
Level 40
Rough Skin

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Nuzleaf
Level 40
Early Bird

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Stunky
Level 40
Aftermath

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Sneasel
Level 40
Keen Eye

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Murkrow
Level 40
Super Luck

Opening speech: Oh, i think i know what your trying to say.

Final words: No, i'm not Mario from the Videogames.
Night Walker Mike sprite: Light

Opening speech: Well well, you made it this far. but i'll stop you here!

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Cacturne
Level 40
Sand Veil

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Sharpedo
Level 42
Rough skin

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Houndoom
Level 40
Flash Fire

Night Walker Amy (Female) Sprite :
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Dim

Opening speech: Prepare to lose!

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Nuzleaf
Level 41
Early Bird


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Stunky
Level 41
Stench


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Spiritomb
Level 43
Pressure


Closing speech: What?! I Lost?!

Final words: You better win, after all, you beat me!

Night Walker John sprite: Dim

Opening speech: You shall not pass!

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Absol
Level 42
Super luck

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Drapion
Level 43
Sniper

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Honchkrow
Level 42
Super Luck

Closing speech : What? How did you win?!

Final words: Looks like you got passed me after all.

Night Walker Paige sprite: Light

Opening speech: Ha! you look weak. Looks like i'll win.

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Mightyena
Level 41
Intimidate

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Shiftry
Level 41
Early Bird

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Crawdaunt
Level 41
Shell armor
Night Walker Kyle and Ashley (Male and Female) sprite: Light

Opening speech

Kyle: Together, we can't lose!
Ashley: You can't beat us!

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Carvanha
Level 40
Rough Skin

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Sneasel
Level 40
Inner Focus

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Cacturne
Level 43
Sand Veil

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Skuntank
Level 43
Aftermath

Closing Speech:

Kyle: Huh? What just Happened?
Ashley: I think we just lost...

Final words:

Kyle: We need to train more
Ashley: Two on one and we still lost.

Night Walker Helen (Female) sprite: Dim
Opening speech:
Do you know why we're tough? I'll tell you if you can beat me!

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Poochyena
Level 39
Quick Feet

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Unbreon
Level 44
Synchronize

Closing speech
I guess i'll have to tell you tell you...

Final words: We train in a very dark cave for more then hours.

Night Walker Julie sprite: Dim

If you made it this far, you must be good. Hope your ready to battle!

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Houndoom
Level 41
Flash Fire

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Shiftry
Level 41
Early Bird

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Sharpedo
Level 41
Rough Skin

Closing speech:
Wow! Your really strong!

Final words:
Wish you luck going through the rest of the gym!

Night Walker Chris sprite: Light

Opening speech
I can beat you with one Pokemon!

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Spiritomb
Level 45
Pressure

Closing speech:
Huh?!

Final words:
I guess i should get more pokemon...
Night Walker Jake (male) Sprite
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Dim

Opening Speech: I'm master Daniels apprentice, i can't lose!


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Honchkrow
Level 42
Super luck


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Shiftry
Level 44
Early Bird


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Crawdaunt
Level 42
Hyper Cutter

Closing Speech: I lost?!

Final words: I guess being an apprentice doesn't mean you'll always win...

Gym Leader Daniel (Male) Sprite:
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Light

Opening Speech: Well, i didn't expect you to get this far. But for you, this is your stopping point. I hope your not afraid of the Dark, because you'll be shown the might of its true power!
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Mightyena
Level 45
Intimidate
-Howl
-Bite
-Swagger
-Roar

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Weavile
level 46
Pressure
-Nasty Plot
-Screech
-Icy Wind
-Faint Attack

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Absol
Level 47
Pressure
-Dark Pulse
-Razor Wind
-Swords Dance
-Pursuit


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Tyranitar
Level 48
Sand Stream
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake
-Screech
-Scary Face

Closing speech: Oh my, i seem to have lost. Oh well, you have bested my team. Here.

Final words: (User receives the Lunar Badge) I hope we battle again soon. Oh, and here's a present from me. (User receives Tm 79) That Tm contains Dark Pulse, a powerful Dark type move. use it well.

Tm: 79 (Dark Pulse)
Badge: Lunar Badge: The Lunar Badge is a shape of the crescent moon.

Round Two
Dark Night Gym
Dark type(s)

Opening speech: We meet again. I've done some training, and now i think I'm ready to face you again. Don't hold back!

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Mightyena
Level 76
Intimidate
-Scary Face
-Thief
-Howl
-Bite

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Weavile
Level 76
Pressure
-Icy Wind
-Dark Pulse
-Screech
-Nasty Plot

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Absol
Level 77
Pressure
-Dark Pulse
-Night Slash
-Swords Dance
-Leer

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Tyranitar
Level 78
Sand Stream
-Hyper Beam
-Screech
-Dark Pulse
-Earthquake


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Darkrai
Level 79
Bad Dreams
-Dark Void
-Dark Pulse
-Nasty Plot
-Ominouse Wind

Closing speech: I lost again?! Impossible!......well, whats done is done.

Final words: Well, I've been bested again it seems. I'm glad i could have this final bout with you. Thank you for a grand battle. You have a long journey ahead of you, but i think you'll do just fine. Good luck!

I did some HUGE editing this time. XD Also, this is the last time i'm going to use this gym. i got some more gyms in mind. HOWEVER, if there is no Dark type gym, expect my gym leader to be in the Elite Four. Well, try to. XD also, because there's not many dark types, i had to reuse most of them. sorry for that. =)
 
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Your Ground gym was excellent HallwayKid, and I would love to see a slightly edited version of it, or if you get the time, a new gym all together.

I have so many new good idea's for my ground gym and I have about 2 hours right now to type it up. Lets hope I can get it done.


I made quite a few changes.

Gym 4
Location: Dirust Town
Type: Ground
Turf Badge

Gym Description:
Dirust Town Pokemon Gym
Leader: Arthur
"Mr. Sandman himself awaits"

Gym Tips:

"Hello there, (name). Arthur is all about Ground Types. You will need a Water or Ice Type to take him down. Good Luck battling in the sand!"

Puzzle Description:

You enter the gym and there is a sandstorm going on. It is generated by a machine you can't see. You see 2 ruins on each side and one at the very top. The top one is closed with 4 bars going across it. You have to enter a ruin and push a stone onto the switch in the room. This will then cause one of the bars in the top ruin to open up. You have to do this in each of the 4 ruins to completely open the final one. There are two trainers in each of the first 4 ruins. In the last ruin you will face the gym leader's pupils in a double battle. You are now able to face the gym leader.

Round 1

Ruin 1

Trainer 1
Ruin Maniac Lucas

Opening Speech: "Can your Pokemon withstand this sandstorm?"

Pokemon:

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Onix
Sturdy
Level 39

DragonBreath
Curse
Rock Polish
Slam

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Graveler
Sturdy
Level 39

Explosion
Earthquake
Rock Blast
Rollout

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Steelix
Sturdy
Level 40

DragonBreath
Curse
Rock Polish
Slam

Defeat Dialogue: "I guess they can withstand the sandstorm."

Closing Speech: "Be aware that only Rock, Steel, and Ground types are immune to the sandstorm."

Trainer 2
Hiker Timothy

Opening Speech: "You can't get through my defenses!"

Pokemon:

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Aggron
Rock Head
Level 42

Metal Sound
Protect
Iron Head
Take Down

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Rhyperior
Solid Rock
Level 42

Hammer Arm
Horn Drill
Take Down
Rock Blast

Defeat Dialogue: "That's impossible!"

Closing Speech: "My Pokemon had the ultimate defenses."

Ruin 2

Trainer 1
Swimmer Monica

Opening Speech: "My Water types can withstand these conditions."

Pokemon:

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Quagsire
Water Absorb
Level 40

Mud Bomb
Earthquake
Yawn
Amnesia

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Whiscash
Oblivious
Level 42

Aqua Tail
Snore
Rest
Magnitude

Defeat Dialogue: "How did I lose in these conditions?"

Closing Speech: "I thought the weather would play into my advantage."

Trainer 2
Hiker Josh

Opening Speech: "I got my Pokemon underground."

Pokemon:

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Rampardos
Mold Breaker
Level 42

Zen Headbutt
Endeavor
Ancient Power
Assurance

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Bastiodon
Sturdy
Level 43

Endure
Block
Metal Burst
Ancient Power

Defeat Dialogue: "I just didn't have enough."

Closing Speech: "Your some tough trainer."

Ruin 3

Trainer 1
Black Belt Ryan

Opening Speech: "My Pokemon are tough like me!"

Pokemon:

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Donphan
Sturdy
Level 40

Scary Face
Assurance
Fury Attack
Slam

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Steelix
Sturdy
Level 42

Iron Tail
Curse
Dragon Breath
Rock Polish

Defeat Dialogue: "How could you beat my power?"

Closing Speech: "I need to continue my training."

Trainer 2
Dragon Tamer Seth

Opening Speech: "You won't beat my Dragon Pokemon!"

Pokemon:

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Flygon
Levitate
Level 44

Screech
DragonBreath
Supersonic
Sand Tomb

Defeat Dialogue: "I thought Dragons were the ultimate type."

Closing Speech: "…"

Ruin 4

Trainer 1
Kindler Mathew

Opening Speech: "Can you take the heat?!"

Pokemon:

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Magcargo
Magma Armour
Level 39

Amnesia
Ancient Power
Recover
Harden

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Camerupt
Magma Armour
Level 40

Earth Power
Rock Slide
Lava Plume
Amnesia

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Magcargo
Flame Body
Level 41

Lava Plume
Amnesia
Ancient Power
Recover

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Camerupt
Solid Rock
Level 42

Earth Power
Rock Slide
Lava Plume
Amnesia

Defeat Dialogue: "I'm not hot enough."

Closing Speech: "Someone needs to turn up the thermostat."

Trainer 2
Ruin Maniac Leonard

Opening Speech: "Lets see how you fare against my Pokemon."


Pokemon:

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Sandslash
Sand Veil
Level 42

Slash
Sand Tomb
Crush Claw
Rollout

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Claydol
Levitate
Level 42

Sandstorm
Hyper Beam
Power Trick
Ancient Power

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Armaldo
Battle Armour
Level 42

Fury Cutter
Ancient Power
Protect
Metal Claw

Defeat Dialogue: "That was a great battle."

Closing Speech: "It was an honour facing such a tough trainer."

Gym Ruin

Pupil Trainers
Cool Trainers Mandy and Trent

Opening Speech: Mandy: "We have been training under Arthur."
Trent: "He does not have to waste time with a trainer like you."

Mandy

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Flygon
Levitate
Level 45

Dragon Claw
Screech
Dragon Breath
Supersonic

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Skarmory
Keen Eye
Level 43

Slash
Air Slash
Steel Wing
Metal Sound

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Gliscor
Sand Veil
Level 45

X-Scissor
U-Turn
Swords Dance
Night Slash


Trent

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Dugtrio
Sand Veil
Level 45

Earthquake
Slash
Mud Bomb
Earth Power

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Piloswine
Oblivious
Level 43

Earthquake
Fury Attack
Take Down
Ice Fang

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Golem
Rock Head
Level 45

Double Edge
Explosion
Earthquake
Rock Blast

Defeat Dialogue: Mandy: "How could we lose!"
Trent: "We trained so hard!"
Closing Speech: Mandy: "You are worthy to face Arthur."
Trent: "We lost, you won. It's as simple as that."

Gym Leader
Leader Arthur

Opening Speech: "Welcome young trainer. I'm glad to see someone is here to battle me. I am the master of the element earth. People like to call me Mr. Sandman. This will not be an easy battle because I will ground your Pokemon into dust."

Pokemon:

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Hippowdon
Sand Stream
Level 46

Earthquake
Crunch
Yawn
Fire Fang

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Torterra
Overgrow
Level 47

Earthquake
Wood Hammer
Leech Seed
Synthesis

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Swampert
Torrent
Level 47

Earthquake
Ice Punch
Dive
Brick Break

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Garchomp @ Sitrus Berry
Sand Veil
Level 48

Earthquake
Fire Fang
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Defeat Dialogue: "Instead, you beat my Pokemon to the ground"

Closing Speech: "That was a marvellous battle! I am quite surprised you won though. Oh well. I will now present to you the Turf Badge." (Name obtained Turf Badge.) "Because your Pokemon have ground shaking power, take this." (Obtained TM26 Earthquake) "This shell shattering move has amazing power and accuracy! It is an excellent move to knock out an opponent quickly."

Round 2 - Rematch

Gym Leader
Leader Arthur

Opening Speech: "Glad to see you again. I trained to be much stronger so that I can defeat you. I hope that this battle will be as amazing as the last one. Earth Pokemon will prevail!"

Pokemon:

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Tyranitar @ Sitrus Berry
Sand Stream
Level 78

Earthquake
Stone Edge
Crunch
Fire Punch

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Torterra @ Leftovers
Overgrow
Level 77

Earthquake
Wood Hammer
Leech Seed
Seed Bomb

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Swampert @ Muscle Band
Torrent
Level 77

Earthquake
Ice Punch
Dive
Hammer Arm

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Mamoswine @ Wide Lens
Oblivious
Level 77

Earthquake
Ancient Power
Avalanche
Fissure

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Garchomp @ Bright Powder
Sand Veil
Level 79

Earthquake
Fire Fang
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Defeat Dialogue: "I lost again! You are a worthy trainer."

Closing Speech: "Another marvellous battle. You are by far, the best trainer I have ever faced. Good luck in future battles."


The pupils are supposed to work well together because Mandy's Pokemon can't get hit by ground moves and all of Trent's Pokemon know Earthquake.

The moves for the Trainers, including the pupils, are the last 4 moves that Pokemon learns, at their level, according to Bulbapedia.


Hey, I'm only short of Phantom Renegade by 5 trainers and 10 Pokemon.
Phantom: 14 Trainers, 35 Pokemon
HallwayKid: 9 Trainers, 25 Pokemon

That's excluding the gym leader.
Technically, I have 10 if you count the pupils as separate trainers.

It does look like Phantom is going to win this round, but I do think my gym is just as good. I'm trying to give Phantom a run for his money.


Seed Bomb for Torterra as an alternative grass move if Arthur wants to keep Torterra's HP up.
 
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well, by both pokemon and trainers, i have more then Phantom. LOL
 
More isn't always better, though.

And Phantom, it's a little annoying that a Flying-type is required to progress in your gym. Otherwise, no complaints here.

PS: If you use spoiler tags properly, your post size is drastically reduced, and really makes it an easier scroll.

EDIT: I'm probably going to lose to you, Phantom, but I'd like to think I at least put up a good effort. I just happened to not see your post until it was too late, and I didn't feel like deleting hours of work. :/
 
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@ Darkfox and HKid, I always live by the rule "quality rather than quantity" :P That is to say, I really like both of your gyms, and I do not think that it's a given that I win this round... I think it's a pretty even race. I must say though, that I'm flattered that you are using me as a measure of how well you are doing! Hahah!

I have just a few minor suggestions for the gym leaders movesets.
Darkfox, your Darkrai knows Dark Pulse, Dark Void, Omnious Wind, and Nasty Plot, right? I'd change Omnious Wind to Focus Blast, mainly due to the coverage Dark + Fighting give, and also because of the slight power rise from 60 BP to 120 BP. You will hit pretty much everything harder with Dark Pulse than Omnious Wind anyway :D

HKid:
1) Tyranitar isn't a Ground-type (but that just adds to cool, so +1 internet there)
2) Due to the sandstorm Tyranitar is setting up, Torterras synthesis will only heal 25% of its max HP, not the usual 50%, so it's not as smexy as before D:
3) Grachomp loves his physical STAB, if I may be so bold :D (you might also want to add a Brightpowder to it in order to make moves miss like 30-ish% of the time, making it extremely annoying )
Otherwise, I really wish all of you good luck. I'll not be surprised if the winner turns out to be rather.. grounded...
 
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