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Zeta, it is 1000 times better with that formatting, thank you for taking the direction so well, you just made your gym one of my favorites.
 
Originally Posted by SkipShot


I can implement Shadow Strike, so go ahead and use it =).

Awesome, I finalized ShadowStrike on Kitsunoh. Also, I added some new spaces (warp points) to the gym in the post with the gym description, so feel free to have a look!
 
Poison Pokemon Rule's Ghost Gym

Great job on this gym; it is really well done. The level progression, evolution progression, and most importantly the formatting are all well done (you will see that formatting is a big theme this round). This is one of my top picks this round, congradulations. One minor nitpick is that I would like the Gym Leader's name changed. Also, trainer's don't need movesets. Gary is a little bit too...you know what I'm getting at.

Trainer dont need movesets, i dont get it?


Gym Name: Phantom City Gym
Gym Type: Ghost
Gym Number: 6


Gym Sign: Phantom City Gym leader Tyler, The Ghost nerd.

Gym Nerd Speech: Tyler like to put opponents to sleep so you better have an Awakening with you.

Gym appearance: Just a normal gym but pitch black inside you cant use Flash in it either so it might take a while to get to leader.​

Leaders Appearance: Tyler is a 20 year old who wears Blue jeans and a white singlet and sneakers​


Gym Trainers:
Channeler: Ruby


Opening Speech: I can talk to Ghosts.


Team:
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Shuppet lvl 43
Sucker Punch
Shadow Ball
Faint Attack
Will-O-Wisp
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Shuppet lvl 43
Sucker Punch
Shadow Ball
Faint Attack
Will-O-Wisp
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Banette lvl 45
Embargo
Shadow Sneak
Shadow Ball
Faint Attack

Closing Speech: But not well enugh to win.

Final Words: You will not beat Tyler.


Channeler: Stacy
Opening Speech: You will not get past me.


Team:
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Duskull lvl 43
Payback
Curse
Shadow Sneak
Pursuit
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Dusclops lvl 44
Mean look
Curse
Will-O-Wisp
Shadow Punch
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Dusknoir lvl 45
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Fire Punch
Shadow Punch

Closing Speech: That was a fluke win.

Final Words: Our gym leader doesnt like losing.


Leader: Tyler



Opening Speech: Welcome to my gym, I see you want to vs me, very well but dont beg me for a badge when you lose.


Team:
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Mismagius lvl 49
Magical Leaf
Astonish
Spite
Psywave
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Drifblim lvl 50
Stockpile
Spit Up
Swallow
Shadow Ball
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Sableye lvl 51
Zen Headbutt
Punishment
Power Gem
Shadow Claw
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Gengar lvl 52
Shadow Ball
Dark Pulse
Hypnosis
Shadow Punch

Closing Speech: I guess you won, heres the Fright badge.

Final Words: You might of won this time but next time i will win.


TM: 65 Shadow Claw

Badge: Fright Badge(shape of Gengar)
ROUND 2


Gym Name: Phantom City Gym
Gym Type: Ghost
Gym Number: 6




Leader: Tyler



Opening Speech: Welcome back to the gym, so you want a rematch very well, but i will not go easy on you this time, lets go.


Team:
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Mismagius lvl 78
Magical Leaf
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt
Psychic
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Froslass lvl 78
Blizzard
Hail
Ominous Wind
Destiny Bond
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Rotom lvl 79
Thunder
Thunder Wave
Ominous Wind
Discharge
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Drifblim lvl 79
Explosion
Shadow Ball
Will-O-Wisp
Baton Pass
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Gengar lvl 81
Nightmare
Shadow Ball
Hypnosis
Destiny Bond

Closing Speech: I see you won again, well done, but just remember this I will beat you next battle.

Final Words: Next time we vs I will win.
 
PPR, it means that only your Gym Leader is required to have pre-made movesets.

Also, you didn't have to post your entire gym again. All you need to do is fix it in your original post. :)
 
Working on the gym - but I won't be finished untill quite a while. Man, the competition is stiff this round!
 
Yah. You do only have to make up moves for the leader - Maci can only put in spesific movesets for the leader. (Not to mention that it would be hell actually having to fix every single trainer individually D: )
 
Gym Name-Aphotic Compass Gym

Gym Type-Dark

Gym Number-6

Gym Sign: Aphotic Compass Gym

Leader: Anther the Dark-Type Mistress.

Gym Nerd Speech: Is it just me or does this place give you the creeps champ? Anther uses Dark-type Pokémon so Fighting and Bug type would fare well against her.

Puzzle: Each trainer you beat the room gets darker, and the concept is to avoid battling anyone. The first couple trainers will hide in hard-to-see areas, and the last ones will be in plain view, but it is difficult to see them if you have already battled 4 trainers.

Gym Trainers


Cooltrainer Hayley



Opening Speech: Hello challenger, what makes you think you can compete against Anther huh?

Murkrow- Level 44

Faint Attack
Wing Attack
Confuse Ray
Taunt

Cacnea- Level 44

Faint Attack
Leech Seed
Bullet Seed
Seed Bomb


Closing Speech: Well I guess you are good enough.


Young Mystic Dodge


Opening Speech: I foresaw your visit! Prepare for unbeatable Pokémon!

Sableye- Level 45

Shadow Claw
Faint Attack
Aerial Ace
Will-o-Wisp

Spiritomb- Level 45

Sucker Punch
Dark Pulse
Shadow Ball
Toxic

Closing Speech: But my Pokémon have no weaknesses! I don't understand!


Cooltrainer Le-Anne

Opening Speech: Fear my pulsing Pokémon!

Carvanha- Level 47

Water Pulse
Dark Pulse
Double Team
Protect


Closing Speech: I guess I couldn't pulse on…


Pyromainiac George



Opening Speech: Feel the burn of darkness!

Arcainine- Level 46

Fire Blast
Hyper Beam
Take Down
Fire Spin



Houndour- Level 46

Smog
Fire Blast
Will-o-Wisp
Swagger

Closing Speech: I guess power doesn't outweigh accuracy…


Sneasel Fan Jerome

Opening Speech: I think all Pokémon should be like Sneasel!

Sneasel- Level 46

Ice Shard
Night Slash
Double Hit
Dig

Sneasel- Level 47

Quick Attack
Faint Attack
Slash
Brick Break

Sneasel- Level 48

Pursuit
Payback
Metal Claw
Aerial Ace



Closing Speech: But how could you defeat my Sneasels?

Your Mom

Opening Speech: Hi honey, like this illusion they have put up here?

Mightyena- Level 49

Ice Fang
Fire Fang
Thunder Fang
Crunch

Skuntank- Level 49

Night Slash
Poison Jab
Feint
Toxic

Closing Speech: Wow, you beat me Hun, great job!













Anther

Appearance- She has long, black hair, pale skin, and purple eyes. She is wearing a Weavile themed jacket and under the jacket is a plain white t-shirt. She is also wearing blue jeans and a grey and red scarf is around her neck. On her right arm is a poke-ball bracelet.

Opening Speech: Hello challenger. I know why you have come. Dark-type Pokémon are a quite misunderstood type, but I find them relatively peaceful types. If you wish to take battle then stand your ground!

Weavile- Level 51

Night Slash
Ice Shard
Aerial Ace
X-Scissor

Cacturne- Level 50

Needle Arm
Sucker Punch
Sandstorm
Pin Missile

Houndoom- Level 51

Dark Pulse
Flamethrower
Nasty Plot
Sludge Bomb

Umbreon- Level 52

Baton Pass
Double Team
Dark Pulse
Confuse Ray


Closing Speech: What an excellent battle. In all my years of training this has been one of the many highlights.

Final Words: As it is you have beaten me, allow me to reward you your very own Stygian Badge.

(Player obtains Stygian Badge)

I also want you to have this…

(Player obtains TM 79)

That TM is Dark Pulse. It is a wondrous move that deals damage and provides a possibility of causing your opponent to flinch.

TM: TM 79

Badge: Stygian Badge- Its shape is similar to an octagon, and its background color is pitch-black, and in the center are 3 smoke-colored balls that form a triangle.



ROUND 2

Gym Name-Aphotic Compass Gym

Gym Type- Dark

Gym Number- 6


Anther

Opening Speech: Welcome back (name). I really do hope you provide me with a superior battle again. I have been training since last we battled. Prepare to fight!

Weavile- Level 79 @ Lum Berry

Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break
Aerial Ace

Shiftry- Level 80 (Ability is Chlorophyll) @Heat Rock (Modest nature)

Dark Pulse
Solar Beam
Extrasensory
Silver Wind

Sharpedo- Level 79 @ Expert Belt

Crunch
Waterfall
Ice Fang
Earthquake

Houndoom- Level 80 @ Heat Rock

Flamethrower
Sunny Day
Solar Beam
Dark Pulse


Sableye- Level 81 @ Life Orb

Shadow Claw
Zen Headbutt
Payback
Fire Punch



Closing Speech: Wow, never in all my years would I have foreseen this. You really are an excellent trainer. Thank you for the splendorous battle.

Final Words: Great Battle. You have shown me there is still much more training I need to accomplish before reaching your level.


I tried editing my previous post but It was being complicated Im sorry. I downloaded sprites on my computer instead of just copying and pasting from the internet so if the sprites don't show up this time I dont know what else to do

EDIT: Okay I dont know WTF is going on with this thing but I guess I will just have to lose because I just downloaded all the sprites and they will not show up. Am I posting wrong or something??? Seriously!!!?? I am doing it on Microsoft Word, am I supposed to make the gym in the Quick Reply? I don't get it Im sorry
 
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It's okay SethMetal, there must be some incompatability between the sprites and your comp. I'll take the gym into account when forming the poll options, thank you for reformating it; it is much better.
 
Alright thanks. I actually had the entire post really well laid out but when I posted it here it stripped off all of the underlining, italisizing, coloring, and bolding. I also changed the levels to be more compatible with the other gyms.
 
you know, compared to most of the other gyms, mine stands no chance. XD oh well, i still have more ideas for the next one. ^_^
 
Hmm. I'm not familiar with what the levels would be... For Gym 7 and 8, do you have rough estimates? I have upper 50s and mid-60s right now, but I don't want it TOO high, ya know? And, would Jirachi be too much for round 2?

Finished Leader data, need Round 2 and refining.

Edit: Oh, well that was smart of me. xD Note to self, read first post!
 
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Hmm. I'm not familiar with what the levels would be... For Gym 7 and 8, do you have rough estimates? I have upper 50s and mid-60s right now, but I don't want it TOO high, ya know? And, would Jirachi be too much for round 2?

Finished Leader data, need Round 2 and refining.

Originally Posted by First Post

Gym 7 - 48 - 56 [Round 2 = 80-83]
Gym 8 - 56 - 61 [Round 2 = 85-90]
And legendaries are ok in Round 2, but not in Round 1 iirc.

I've been coming up with some great ideas... but not for gyms. Get ready for some competition when the Elite 4 and rivals come around!! >=)
 
Poll is open great everyone, there was a lot of participation and some fantastic gyms. In the end, however, I must narrow it down for the poll. Congradulations to:

SkipShot - 1
Syrynn -
Poison Pokemon Rule -
Zeta Dimentio -

These are your choices for the poll. To everyone who didn't make it, it doesn't mean your gyms weren't great, I just needed to narrow it down by being hyper picky.

Remember, this is a Bold Vote poll; put who you vote for in any one of your messages in Bold and it will be counted. If the name is not in Bold it won't be counted (except for SethMetal who has the formatting issue). To those in the poll, you may vote for yourself or anyone else. Voters do not need to justify themselves.

My personal vote goes to SkipShot. I loved his gym: it was absolutetly flawless, and the one nitpick I had about it was fixed. Everyone else made fantastic gyms of course!
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Round 7 is Open!!

Remember these important details:

Big Themes
  • Gym Round 2 must have 5 Pokemon, no more or less.
  • Gym Trainers do not need movesets, as I can't implement them into the hack.
  • FORMATTING AND GRAMMAR ARE CRUCIAL
Originally Posted by First Post

Gym 7 - 48 - 56 [Round 2 = 80-83]


Keeping these things in mind, I look forward ot an awesome round. Poll closes at 12:00 a.m. EST, or 4:00 a.m. server time.
 
Arrrgh, drat. Well, it'll come for the 7th round then!
My personal vote goes to Syrynn, for having the most unique concept, as well as having a good visual representation, not to mention a challenging gym leader.

I'm torn in two between Syrynn and Skip Shot actually... drat.. but Syrynn still gets my vote.

EDIT: Erm.. Maci? Would a trainer be allowed to say "hell"? :P
 
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I'm going to go ahead and vote for Zeta.
 
Im gonna vote for Syrynn because that entire concept was really cool.
 
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