Rain's Legacy

DragonQueenRachel

Soul of Trinity, Dragon Queen
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    This was very hard to make, so please be kind.

    This story takes place in a distant region known as Rylia. It stars my own carachter Rain Skylark, her companion Steven Stone, the champion on occasion, Rachel Bolt, and of course Rain's Rival, Danielle Simms.

    Okay, gotta get this cleared up quickly.

    Credit for full trainer and Pokemon Sprites go to Pokemon2000, good site.

    Everything else I found on a Serebii.net forum, credit goes to whoever found them.

    I'm still getting the hang of this, so bear with me.

    Chapter 1: The Beginning

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic1.png - page 1.

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic2.png - page 2

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic3.png - page 3

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic4.png - page 4

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic5.png - page 5

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic6.png - page 6

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic7.png - page 7

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic8.png - page 8

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic9.png - page 9

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic10.png - page 10

    Chapter 2: First Pokemon, First Encounter

    https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic11.png - page 11
     
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    Now someone tells me.

    I'll get them resaved as soon as I can.
     
    Oh and...press the post button once...instead of making it 5 times...XD
     
    Okay, let me explain everything.

    1. I was having posting problems, that was an accident.
    2. I didn't know what to save it as, I'm new at this.
    3. I'm a terrible artist, and had to work with what I had.

    Okay, thats finaly taken care of, please be kind, I only have experience in writing.
     
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    Here we go...Get ready to Take this on Board...

    1. Poor Recolours...(and what looks like Paint Defaults)
    2. Poorly Put in Sprites...Use the No Backgound Button on Paint!...
    3. Have a Fixed Panel Size...Making sure the Battle Bsckgrounds Fit and that the Whole Comic is linked Together...
    4. Use Pokemon Backsprites...Pokemon Elite 2000 has them...
    5. I see no Credit. Sprite Theft is dealt with strongly.
    6. In the Battle you used diffent Fonts and sizes and Colours for the Names. Keep them the Same...
    7. Don't use *blahblah* Its a Comic...Not a Roleplay...Show what the Charachters do...
    8. Gather the Correct Tilesets and use them well...Your water in the second comic is different...and don't make the comic if you need smething to make it... I have a lot of Self Ripped Stuff if you would like to borrow them...Just PM me...
     
    Okay, reactions:

    1. I have bad art skills, and they where the closest I could find.
    2. I didn't know there was a no background button.
    3. Working on it.
    4. I looked, couldn't find them, help would be most apreciated.
    5. The Credit issue has been taken care of, I had full intention of giving credit where it is due, it was an honest mistake.
    6. Hey, this is my first Comic, I'm still working out the kinks in it.
    7. Bad artistic skills is my only excuse.
    8. Phew, last one, anyway, I'll be sure to do that, you really gotta keep in mind that all my experience is in writting.
     
    OK...Good Points are that its not really a Journey Comic. It has that twist to the stroy and to keep readers involved you need to get one comic onto all one page...
     
    I'll see what I can do to get that done, but I've been focusing more on the characters recently, for some strange reason I've already done the sprites for the Gym Leaders and Elite 4, I guess I was bored.

    Well, I was intending for it to be centered around a Pokemon journey, and naturaly the whole team trying to take over the world thing, which we got a small tidbit of information on in one of the pages, but so far I'm running low on good ideas.
     
    DragonQueenRachel said:
    I'll see what I can do to get that done, but I've been focusing more on the characters recently, for some strange reason I've already done the sprites for the Gym Leaders and Elite 4, I guess I was bored.

    Well, I was intending for it to be centered around a Pokemon journey, and naturaly the whole team trying to take over the world thing, which we got a small tidbit of information on in one of the pages, but so far I'm running low on good ideas.
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    I Think that Most of the Sprite Comic Makers are Running Flat on Ideas...and as you said you are doing the Elite Four? and Gym Leaders? Do you want me to mkae the Sprites like im doing for 'Rain'?
     
    Well, I do have the sprites I was going to use, how about I send you what I have, and you see what you can do?
     
    Sure...I'll do that for you...Do you want to go on my PC Familly?
     
    Sure, it might be interesting.
     
    Anyway...Here are all the things I know you need for Rain...You Choose whre you want to go on MY PC Familly...(But not Pair)... "image removed" (Click for the larger Image!)

    Credit to Me!
     
    Maneachicken: Remember, all posts (and I mean the whole content of the posts) must be relative to the comic only. You could've had a discusion about PC Families via PM, why on earth did you bring it here? Don't go offtopic.
     
    I must say, you did a good job on this.
     
    DragonQueenRachel said:
    Okay, reactions:

    1. I have bad art skills, and they where the closest I could find.
    2. I didn't know there was a no background button.
    3. Working on it.
    4. I looked, couldn't find them, help would be most apreciated.
    5. The Credit issue has been taken care of, I had full intention of giving credit where it is due, it was an honest mistake.
    6. Hey, this is my first Comic, I'm still working out the kinks in it.
    7. Bad artistic skills is my only excuse.
    8. Phew, last one, anyway, I'll be sure to do that, you really gotta keep in mind that all my experience is in writting.
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    You don't need art skills to make a recolor. Recoloring is the lowest form of spriting and takes no skill at all, aside from knowing how to double click and move an arrow in different places for darker and lighter colors.
     
    I get the point already, I need to work on my recoloring.
     
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