rate my messed up team please :)

[I SHAYMIN I]

PORYGON-Z @ Focus Sash
Trait Download
EVs
Lonely
- Magic Coat
- Discharge
- Lock-On
- Zap Cannon

Magnezone @ Wise Glasses/Choice Specs
Trait Sturdy
EVs
Nature Rash
- Zap Cannon
- Thunder
- Mirror Shot
- Discharge

Rhyperior @ Leftovers
Trait Solid Rock
EVs
Nature Quiet
- Stone Edge
- Poison Jab
- Megahorn
- Earthquake

Weezing (Boom Baby) @ Choice Band
Trait Levitate
EVs
Nature Naive
- Memento
- Destiny Bond
- Explosion
- Sludge Bomb (I want to make more use of the item)

Breeoom @ Choice/Muscle Band (Shiny so I'd like to use him)
Trait Effect Spore
EVs
Nature Mild (FAIL)
- Mach Punch
- Sky Uppercut
- Seed Bomb
- Force palm (can paralyze)

Jumpluff (my annoying one) @ Wide Lense
Trait Chlorophyll
EVs
Nature Docile
- Memento
- Stun Spore
- Leech Seed
- U-turn


I am willing to change anything with the following pokemon (and any items you think would be better)

Blastoise @ Damp Rock
Trait Torrent
EVs
Nature Calm
- Ice Beam
- Water Pulse
- Rain Dance
- Hydro Pump

Tangrowth @ Heat Rock
Trait Chlorophyll
EVs
Nature Lax
- Sunny Day
- Ingrain
- Power Whip
- Mega Drain

Rate please, and tell me if i should switch anything.

NOTE: nothing is natured or ev trained BECAUSE I DONT CARE!!! but i have used vitamins on the stats that they needed :) (i.e magnazone got calcium and carbos)

 

[HunterX101]

Yah you should include the EV's....Need those.

 

[I SHAYMIN I]

Yah you should include the EV's....Need those.

read the entire thing please.

 

[.Gamer]

All these natures are terrible. I suggest re-breeding for better natures.

 

[I SHAYMIN I]

All these natures are terrible. I suggest re-breeding for better natures.

Please read the entirething.


EVERYONE READ THE BOTTOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[shookie]

Having Vitamins in the important stats will only do so much. You really need better natures and correct EV spreads to lessen the risk of being roflstomped by your opponent.

 

[NickofTime]

also your magnezone should have hp fire at least to deal with the scizor threat, also a choice scarf ( scarf zone is awesome) also put explosion on magnezone
btw two inaccurate thundermoves on a magnezone is defeating its purpose as a revenge killer
mirror shot is a horrible move btw

 

[myrrh25]

Well, just because you DONT CARE (anyone want to buy some caps lock?), there is no point even making a RateMyTeam. The bottom line is, teams go nowhere online unless they have the right natures and EV's, and if you dont care there is no point having an RMT at all. My suggestion to you kind sir, is stick to battling the Pokemon League & Red, and possibly the battle frontier.

Team Rating: 2/10 (2 because I respect anyone that even attempts to use a Jumpluff online.)

 

[I SHAYMIN I]

Well, just because you DONT CARE (anyone want to buy some caps lock?), there is no point even making a RateMyTeam. The bottom line is, teams go nowhere online unless they have the right natures and EV's, and if you dont care there is no point having an RMT at all. My suggestion to you kind sir, is stick to battling the Pokemon League & Red, and possibly the battle frontier.

Team Rating: 2/10 (2 because I respect anyone that even attempts to use a Jumpluff online.)

lol not only is what u said untrue and ttly stupid id ask if u stop flameing me like a 10 year old. next ty for the jumpluff thing but u dont c Y i use this team -.- even tho my magnazone has a 353 spatk and my rhyperior has a 333 atk it would b decent of you to atleast rate it on its best -.- and ever heard of a sweeping spatking tyranitar? yeah possible now STOP posting on this website if you are going to be totaly ignorant to anything out of the ordinary

kthnxbai.

 

[.Gamer]

protip: if you aren't going to take advice, don't post.

lol not only is what u said untrue and ttly stupid id ask if u stop flameing me like a 10 year old. next ty for the jumpluff thing but u dont c Y i use this team -.- even tho my magnazone has a 353 spatk and my rhyperior has a 333 atk it would b decent of you to atleast rate it on its best -.- and ever heard of a sweeping spatking tyranitar? yeah possible now STOP posting on this website if you are going to be totaly ignorant to anything out of the ordinary

kthnxbai.

The bolded part isn't making you sound much smarter.

 

[I SHAYMIN I]

also your magnezone should have hp fire at least to deal with the scizor threat, also a choice scarf ( scarf zone is awesome) also put explosion on magnezone
btw two inaccurate thundermoves on a magnezone is defeating its purpose as a revenge killer
mirror shot is a horrible move btw

not ment as a revenge killer it(and jumpluff) are my starting im just haveing a hard time on picking between the 2

and im fairly accurate w/ zap cannon :p

and ty for the comment

Having Vitamins in the important stats will only do so much. You really need better natures and correct EV spreads to lessen the risk of being roflstomped by your opponent.

yeah ik but i can rape my friend who hacks :l (and he has used max iv legys and ive owned them with this team) and yes vit only add about 50 to a stat but its well worth it :P and im 2 lazy 2 ev train lol

but thank you for the comment

protip: if you aren't going to take advice, don't post.




The bolded part isn't making you sound much smarter.

heres the thing: i am takeing advice

likewise

 

[Dark Azelf]

This forum is a competitive forum, we need evs or its pointless. That and i mean your natures are horrible, if you don't re-breed you WILL lose to anyone competent. 333 Att on Rhyperior is horrible for example lol, its max is 416. :/

lol not only is what u said untrue and ttly stupid id ask if u stop flameing me like a 10 year old. next ty for the jumpluff thing but u dont c Y i use this team -.- even tho my magnazone has a 353 spatk and my rhyperior has a 333 atk it would b decent of you to atleast rate it on its best -.- and ever heard of a sweeping spatking tyranitar? yeah possible now STOP posting on this website if you are going to be totaly ignorant to anything out of the ordinary

kthnxbai.

Umm, i think you should "ttly" get better grammar, or "u" will get a warning not only for that but for disrespect to members. myrrh25 was correct, you are the one who is in the wrong here.

Anyway by your move choices and general misuse of items and moves (i.e saying CB powers up Sludge Bomb, 2 stab moves with the same purpose on pokes etc) ill refer you to these.

https://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/intro_comp_pokemon

https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=217192

~Locked~