@Gawain
Hurrmm... If that's meant to be fire or something coming out of the dragon then it's mouth is going to need to be open. xD
The font doesn't really suit the mythological theme of it, it's more of a futuristic font.
Also, the fact that the I and and the N are in the glare makes it a little hard to read.
And another thing, try and work with better quality images.
4/10
@Capi
It's very good! The text is very nicely aligned and everything looks very neat.
I can only say that it would look better with different pictures of the girl in those three side panels, instead of her eye.
8/10