Because I notice you've had a string of rather un-indepth comments about your set, I'm going to be giving this a nice long rating. As much as I can, anyway, with just a picture.
Well, the banner is a stock, that hasn't had anything done to it. -1
All I can say about it is "holy-bejezuz-how-do-you-get-your-screenshots-so-frickin-high-quality"?!
The text, though most of it is sort of uneeded clutter, is well organized, which takes away the clutter aspect. However, I personally hate it when the text is longer then the banner, so your 'Family' line is a tad too long for my tastes. -.5
The quote sort of throws everything off. Everything is centered but the quote is left aligned. :/ -1
And lastly about the signature, ".....~Kimi~sae... i~re~ba~~....." <--- The blue text isn't quite the same color as the girl in the picture's clothes and eyes. I'm sure it'd be easy to find the HTML code to get the perfect shade.
The avatar, however, seems a little too dark for the banner. It's obvious that one screenshot is of her in light, and one is of her in darkness, which makes them sort of not feel like a set. But that could very well be an effect worth reaching for, so I won't count that off.
A border would help the stock too. Even just a one pixel square done in Paint. -.5
8/10
[Shiro-chan did? I remember that it wasn't a vector styled banner though. Well, whatever, so long as he's not using it now... *goes to check*]