Konekodemon
The Master of Pokemon Breeding
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- Seen Nov 20, 2023
Ok, I decided on trying to write stories here again. From now on to avoid any hard feelings if I think people are being rude I just won't answer you at all. There's a difference between giving advice and being rude. If your going to give advice you should do it nicely, like saying,"But your fic does sound nice though." at the end of your comment. But that's just my opinion.
Chapter 1
Jamie, was sitting in class listening to another boring lector her teacher was giving. She yawned and laid her head on her desk,"Ms. Samus! No sleeping in class!" The teacher said banging her fist on Jamie's desk startling the poor girl awake.
All the students bust out laughing at her. Jamie sighed. Sometimes she wished she had never been born in Tokyo. Sure they had great, cartoons and all. But at what price? Parents hated there children and school was always too tough. Thankfully the bell rang just then.
Jamie's teacher assigned them loads of homework that night. 'Oh well,' she sighed. It wasn't as if she had any friends to hang out with anyway. Being very short at 4" 5" she was easily picked on and bullied a lot in school. Just last week, some kids had locked her inside her locket. She banged on it for two hours before janitor had let her out.
Jamie's stomach growled very loudly as she walked home. She hadn't had any lunch that day either, as some kids had stolen her lunch money. And now here she was loaded with homework. "I don't know how much more of this I can take!" she screamed. Even her parents and older sister beat on her. She had scares and bruises all over her body.
But as Jamie lived in Japan, no one really cared what parents did to there children. She cried as she walked home. Unknown to her a white barn owl was sitting on a tree watching her. It was like it was staring at her cuts a bruises wondering how she got them. It started to rain on the way home. Jamie cursed her luck.
By the time she got home, Jamie was soking wet, from the rain. But there was no time to rest as soon as she got inside, her parents screamed at her to clean her room. She cursed her luck again as she ran upstairs and to her room. Her older sister, Angel tripped her up. She laughed as Jamie fell flat onto her face.
"Hey! That isn't funny!" Jamie screamed at her. Her mother heard her and thought she was bad mouthing her sister and came upstairs with a whip and whipped her until she was all bloodly. Jamie cried, as she went into her room, and sobbed. It had always been like this since she was born. Her parents loved and fused over Angel but hated her.
Sometimes Jamie felt like Cindarella in this house,'I bet she never got whipped though,' she thought. She got to work cleaning her room before her parents could whip her somemore. Just for that she didn't get any supper. Jamie was forced to stay up in her room. She sit at her desk and laid her head down on her desk, and sobbed,"I don't get it. Why!? Why don't my parents love me?" She sobbed.
Right outside her window sit the same white colored barn owl. It was perched on a tree next to her window. Jamie decided to watch a movie to make herself feel better. She got the movie,'Labyrinth' down from her self. She popped it into her Blu-Ray player. She sit though and watched the whole movie. And just when she was about to watch the special features, her sister knocked on her door,"What do you want?" Jamie called.
"Mother wants, you to clean the bathroom," Angel told her. Jamie growled at that. That was it! She couldn't take it anymore. She remembered the movie, at the beginning where Sarah had made a wish and the Goblin King Jareth had granted it. So she screamed just as a thunderstorm started, it was already dark out too,"I can't take it anymore! I wish, the Goblin King would take me away from here! Right now!"
Just then everything around Jamie froze. It was like time stopped. She looked out her window. It was like the rain drops were frozen in mid air. Everything then went dark. There was another flash of thunder. It lit up the room, as Jamie saw the white barn owl trying to get into her room. Just then a lot of strange little creatures started running about in her room. Jamie screamed in terror.
She looked back at her window as it felt open and the owl flew at her. She grabbed the nearest thing, getting ready to defend herself. Just then though the owl changed into a man,'It...it can't be!" Jamie grasped as she reconized the man before her as Jareth, the Goblin King, from the movie. Jareth grinned at Jamie's shocked face.
"I suppose you know who I am already, don't you Jamie?" Jareth grinned again. "Yea, but how do you know my name?" Jamie asked him. "Jamie, Jamie," Jareth sighed,"I know everything about you. I've watched you for a long time now. For five years, since you were 10. So, you wish to be taken away from here, huh?" Jamie looked down at the floor and sobbed,"Yes," she cried showing a few tears, that fell onto the floor.
Jareth laughed as he snapped his fingers and they both disappeared. They reappeared in the underworld, in front of a large, Labyrinth, which was the Labyrinth that surrounded, Jareth's huge castle, in the Goblin City. Jamie was still crying though. So, Jareth made a crystal ball appear and threw it to Jamie. She caught it,"Keep this, Jamie. And all your wishes will come true," he told her.
Jamie stopped crying at once and rubbed the tears from her face,"Thank you," she told him. "It, seems as if you wished yourself away Jamie. If you wish to free yourself, you must make it though my Labyrinth within 48 hours, otherwise you'll have to remain here with me," Jareth told her. Jamie kinda grinned at that,'That might not be so bad,' she thought. But before she could tell him that, Jareth was gone. "Guess it's the Labyrinth then," Jamie sighed. With a big sigh, she walked towards the Labyrinth to begin her long journey, not even caring if she made it there within 48 hours or not.
Chapter 1
Jamie, was sitting in class listening to another boring lector her teacher was giving. She yawned and laid her head on her desk,"Ms. Samus! No sleeping in class!" The teacher said banging her fist on Jamie's desk startling the poor girl awake.
All the students bust out laughing at her. Jamie sighed. Sometimes she wished she had never been born in Tokyo. Sure they had great, cartoons and all. But at what price? Parents hated there children and school was always too tough. Thankfully the bell rang just then.
Jamie's teacher assigned them loads of homework that night. 'Oh well,' she sighed. It wasn't as if she had any friends to hang out with anyway. Being very short at 4" 5" she was easily picked on and bullied a lot in school. Just last week, some kids had locked her inside her locket. She banged on it for two hours before janitor had let her out.
Jamie's stomach growled very loudly as she walked home. She hadn't had any lunch that day either, as some kids had stolen her lunch money. And now here she was loaded with homework. "I don't know how much more of this I can take!" she screamed. Even her parents and older sister beat on her. She had scares and bruises all over her body.
But as Jamie lived in Japan, no one really cared what parents did to there children. She cried as she walked home. Unknown to her a white barn owl was sitting on a tree watching her. It was like it was staring at her cuts a bruises wondering how she got them. It started to rain on the way home. Jamie cursed her luck.
By the time she got home, Jamie was soking wet, from the rain. But there was no time to rest as soon as she got inside, her parents screamed at her to clean her room. She cursed her luck again as she ran upstairs and to her room. Her older sister, Angel tripped her up. She laughed as Jamie fell flat onto her face.
"Hey! That isn't funny!" Jamie screamed at her. Her mother heard her and thought she was bad mouthing her sister and came upstairs with a whip and whipped her until she was all bloodly. Jamie cried, as she went into her room, and sobbed. It had always been like this since she was born. Her parents loved and fused over Angel but hated her.
Sometimes Jamie felt like Cindarella in this house,'I bet she never got whipped though,' she thought. She got to work cleaning her room before her parents could whip her somemore. Just for that she didn't get any supper. Jamie was forced to stay up in her room. She sit at her desk and laid her head down on her desk, and sobbed,"I don't get it. Why!? Why don't my parents love me?" She sobbed.
Right outside her window sit the same white colored barn owl. It was perched on a tree next to her window. Jamie decided to watch a movie to make herself feel better. She got the movie,'Labyrinth' down from her self. She popped it into her Blu-Ray player. She sit though and watched the whole movie. And just when she was about to watch the special features, her sister knocked on her door,"What do you want?" Jamie called.
"Mother wants, you to clean the bathroom," Angel told her. Jamie growled at that. That was it! She couldn't take it anymore. She remembered the movie, at the beginning where Sarah had made a wish and the Goblin King Jareth had granted it. So she screamed just as a thunderstorm started, it was already dark out too,"I can't take it anymore! I wish, the Goblin King would take me away from here! Right now!"
Just then everything around Jamie froze. It was like time stopped. She looked out her window. It was like the rain drops were frozen in mid air. Everything then went dark. There was another flash of thunder. It lit up the room, as Jamie saw the white barn owl trying to get into her room. Just then a lot of strange little creatures started running about in her room. Jamie screamed in terror.
She looked back at her window as it felt open and the owl flew at her. She grabbed the nearest thing, getting ready to defend herself. Just then though the owl changed into a man,'It...it can't be!" Jamie grasped as she reconized the man before her as Jareth, the Goblin King, from the movie. Jareth grinned at Jamie's shocked face.
"I suppose you know who I am already, don't you Jamie?" Jareth grinned again. "Yea, but how do you know my name?" Jamie asked him. "Jamie, Jamie," Jareth sighed,"I know everything about you. I've watched you for a long time now. For five years, since you were 10. So, you wish to be taken away from here, huh?" Jamie looked down at the floor and sobbed,"Yes," she cried showing a few tears, that fell onto the floor.
Jareth laughed as he snapped his fingers and they both disappeared. They reappeared in the underworld, in front of a large, Labyrinth, which was the Labyrinth that surrounded, Jareth's huge castle, in the Goblin City. Jamie was still crying though. So, Jareth made a crystal ball appear and threw it to Jamie. She caught it,"Keep this, Jamie. And all your wishes will come true," he told her.
Jamie stopped crying at once and rubbed the tears from her face,"Thank you," she told him. "It, seems as if you wished yourself away Jamie. If you wish to free yourself, you must make it though my Labyrinth within 48 hours, otherwise you'll have to remain here with me," Jareth told her. Jamie kinda grinned at that,'That might not be so bad,' she thought. But before she could tell him that, Jareth was gone. "Guess it's the Labyrinth then," Jamie sighed. With a big sigh, she walked towards the Labyrinth to begin her long journey, not even caring if she made it there within 48 hours or not.