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Sabrina Fanclub

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Well, I'm back, folks. And look at all this Psychic-Shippiness that's been thrown around while I was away....XD

I didn't white write as much as I thought I would, heh. Ironically enough, I haven't been worked on a Sabrina-centric chapter....because I'm writing a Will-centric chapter! =O But of course, I shall be working on his evil side, making a certain someone want to poke his eye out. XD

And you can email me the new chapter, P*A. I promise not to collapse if you promise not to collapse from reading my Will-centric stuff. =D
 
Maybe it is shafting Tate a bit, CPF, but hehe, his sister is fun enough to watch. 0=) She really has become a member of this (weird) family.

@Zammy Well, if you're not around to restrain us...0=)
O,O You, writing a Will-centric chapter? *collapses* *g*
Certain someone? You mean yourself? 0=)

^.~ Already did. And no, I won't collapse (again). How could I, if you write about such a cutie as Will? ^.^

Happy New Year to everyone! (Probably will be my last post this year, if Zammy doesn't beta-read with the speed of light. 0=)
 
Nice to see you back, Alakazam. We've made things all nice and PsychicShippy while you've been gone, please feel free to join in the fun!
 
Happy New Year everyone again...*yawns*....stayed up till three am....*dozes off*...
Meanwhile, here's the review for Chapter 7, CPF.

Lucian gulped. "Cynthia, you aren't the same woman I knew when I first fell in love with you," he remarked.

Then he smiled evilly. "You're so, so much better," he added, kissing her again.
Hehe, almost caught me there. For a second, I thought Lucian was going to break with her, but, of course not. 0=)
"How will we know if there's an emergency?" Will asked her.

"You'll be able to feel it," she replied.
Of course. ^.^ Teh cuteness!!!
"This could be very dangerous," she said. "It's very possible… I could have something very bad happen to me."

"Sabrina, don't say that," Will responded.

"I'm serious," Sabrina continued. "Now listen to me… if anything happens to me you've got to take over the gym in my absence."

"That's crazy talk," Will replied. "I'm not even thinking about it."

Sabrina then kissed him on the lips.
OMG, omg, omg...so romantic! *dies*...but Sabrina didn't dare to say 'die', too...just that something may happen to her. And of course, nothing too emotional, just 'take care of the gym'. Typical Sabrina. But at the time, so unbelievably cute. ^^
Of course, Will's reaction is cute, too. He doesn't want to think of it...awww...
"Why is she talking like that?" Will asked Liza.

"I think she's just trying to scare you, that's all," Liza replied.
I, for one, don't think she is. o,o
She had been blocking Cynthia from reading her thoughts; had Cynthia somehow read right through her?
*If* Cynthia's Dark/Psychic, then that's useless.
He knew that Cynthia's expressions were always the opposite of her moods;
Hm, interesting idea...I might use that aspect for my version of Cynthia, too.
Cynthia gave a warm laugh, then smiled innocently at Sabrina.
Prove that she's ready to explode.
"Why yes, Sabrina, it is me," she told her.
When someone tells you that so freely, it's obvious they feel superior to you. And if you are Sabrina, or another damn strong psychic, then it's obvious they ARE superior to you...
"They couldn't," Cynthia responded. "I allowed them to escape, because I still have hope for Sabrina, that she will turn to become my accomplice. She knows exactly how powerful I am now. She will not have any choice but to join me."
Team Rocket tried the same several times and failed. That's one thing Cynthia is dumb about. Sabrina would rather die then let herself be used. *nods*
"I saved you, Sabrina!" Liza exclaimed. "Aren't I special?"
Remember that I told you there are scenes in this chapter I want to hit Liza with a big, big mallet? This is one of them.
"If you can't beat her, join her!" Liza joked.
This is another.
Will groaned. "You just think everyone's out to use you for your powers, don't you?" he asked his wife.
I think she's right about that. >> Power corrupts.
"You don't know anything about Pokémon!" Giselle snapped. "Lugia's a Psychic-type, utterly weak against Dark-types and Dark powers! Even the most powerful Psychic Pokémon is hopeless against a powerful Dark barrier!"
Ah, the good old brat Giselle with the ego the size of a Whailmer is back.
"But what can stop her, then?" Joe inquired. "If Psychics can't, and Fighting-types can't, what can?"
Bug? 0=) Both psychic and dark are weak to it. I should know. >>;;;;; (arachnophobia...>.<;;;)
It was a pretty bizarre scene in Sabrina's house: Sabrina staring blankly into the distance, without an emotion on her face; Liza chattering non-stop into Will's ear; and Will looking like he would rather be anywhere but here at the moment.
Very bizarre, indeed. o,o
"You know, I'm starting to become powerful, I'll soon be more powerful than Sabrina," Liza said. "This Cynthia thinks she's something, let me at her! I'll show her who's boss around here. There's no way I'm letting her get away with this!"
Misty, your mallet please.
"I know," Sabrina replied in a monotone voice.

"Well, what are we going to do?" Will asked.

"I don't know," Sabrina responded, in the same voice.
o,o Scares me somehow.
"Come on, show a little emotion," Will said.
Well, it's Sabrina we talk about, and we know how she emotional she gets...on the other hand...
He tried reading her mind, but she blocked him.

"Oh, what is it now?" he asked. "Why do this to me?"
Ah, just like the old times now. Will should be used to this by now, he's freaking married to this woman! XD
"Karen!" Will exclaimed.

The very mention of the name was enough to snap Sabrina out of her emotionless spell.

"What's the meaning of saying that name?" she snapped. "You still like her?"
*ggg* Sometimes, Will just has the perfect ability to say exactly the wrong thing.
"How? By rebuilding Team Rocket?" Sabrina asked angrily.

Will thought about it for a moment. "Exactly!" he cried.
o,o Big, fat WTF?!?!? here.
"Wait a minute, I make the decisions around here, right?" Sabrina asked.
lolrofletc. So quoteworthy. ^^
"Liza, you'd better come," Sabrina said. "Just in case Will gets us trapped in balls of dark energy again."
...*after Will's plan failed and Liza got trapped in a dark ball too* Sabrina: *...*ready to rip his head off* Who's gonna save us now, hm? >>;;;; Will: *meep* XD!!!!!
"Don't become power-hungry, Liza," Sabrina commanded.

"Why not, Sabrina?" Liza questioned. "I just want to be like you."

"You don't want to be like me," Sabrina replied.
*nods* Not again, Liza. You had to be saved last time...(but if no one should want to be like Sabrina...me is not sure...)


Well, and now, just a small request...Zammy, if you have read the chapter and NOT died because of an overdose of psychicshipping, then send it, I know you're online (at least were when I started this post).
If you HAVE died, then...um...RIP. 0=)
 
I hope you use that for your version of Cynthia... bonus points if you make Cynthia a villain!

Yet another case of Liza being annoying and energetic, while Sabrina remains emotionless (until a certain someone is brought up). I haven't worked on the next chapter, though, but I'll make sure I go to work on it soon.
 
XD I'm afraid I won't try to get these bonus points...ehm, do I get any if I make her bad but not a villain? You'll see in which way (once I write that sequel and IF I already include Cynthia in there)....

XD Definitely. As if she's high on something... I guess Sabrina is quite jealous. Of course, if Will is stupid enough to WANT to go back to Karen (not in that emotional way, though)...
Chapter 3 b is also still on its way...>>;;;
 
Okay, BIG BIG bonus points if you make Cynthia what she's made herself in Chapter 8. Now I'm absolutely serious about Cynthia being power-hungry, and at the same time, the type of woman I'd love to date (minus the dark powers). Of course, there's no doubt that Sabrina hates this whole idea, which makes a Sabrina vs. Cynthia rivalry a reality at last.
 
You know where I read your new chapter today? At university! During a lecture! Hooray for mobile phones with internet connections and the uni's W-LAN. XD!!!
Ehm, yeah...I hope Sabrina doesn't kill Will when she wakes up again. Because I fear that she will. *ggg*
o,o I'm not so sure if I want my precious Cynthia (mind you, she's my second favourite girl!) that...immoral. I don't know, the way I describe her is already very dark (I can't tell you any examples or you would get spoilered, but let's say she doesn't care at all about the emotions of others) and I'm not sure if I can make her any darker without starting to turn her into a hateful character, which is something I don't want. >>;;; Let's just see how she turns out in the end...of course, I could make up a little rivalry between her and Sabrina, I have my ways...0=)
But...Queen Cynthia...anyone told you that this sounds quite sexy? XD
BTW, chapter 3 part 2 is (FINALLY) up. 0=)
 
This Cynthia you're describing seems like she'll be an awesome character in your upcoming story... of course mine is already villainous enough. I can't wait to see your review of this chapter... obviously Sabrina's about to kill Will because she's so angry, but before that, they found out how powerful Cynthia truly is.
 
Third rough day in a row...never before in my life I hated snow so much...x.x Well, I'm quite tired, so my review will be a bit shorter than usual. Sorry. x.x

Silver and Jasmine sat in the living room of their house in Olivine City, enjoying a peaceful afternoon.
Whoa, had almost forgotten these two. ^^Nice you included them again.
"Hello, you may know me as the new champion of the Pokémon League, Cynthia," she announced. "But as of now I have a new title: queen."

Lucian then walked into the room, placing a crown upon Cynthia's head.
Wasn't there some guy in history who did the same? Napoleon? Sorry, my last history lesson was months ago...XD But cool. And have I mentioned that this title is quite sexy? Have I? XD
How does someone just go and make themselves a queen? That doesn't seem right," Silver said.
The pokemon world's government is a joke, so...I would call myself lady or something, too...(btw, just noticed...in my story, I call Karen a 'queen'...whoa. double title once Cynthia appear! XD)
"Maybe the time is right," Jasmine remarked.

"It's never right," Silver mumbled.
Agreed. >>
"If anyone should be queen, it should be me!" she exclaimed
*sighs* Same old Giselle.
"I'll gain back my position, and just for the sake of fairness, I'll become the new queen of this land!"
>>;;; Not exactly a thing this land needs right now.
"Yes, and we intend to join her!" Will yelled.
Right time for me to scream: WTF?!? again?
Sabrina gulped as she looked down at the "R" on the shirt Karen handed her. What the heck is Will thinking? she thought. Doesn't he know how much this hurts me?
>>;;; Have to agree, very unscrupulous from him. >> But sympathy is not a threat many men posses...

Not quoting the whole quarrel between Sabrina and Will, but...whoa. o,o This is serious. She's going to rip his head off. Or get divorced. Or both. Can't say that Will's plan was that smart, but I hoped myself that it would work some way (for Will's sake, as he's the one always getting overpowered by his girls[yes, I say girls, for Liza's as good as a member of this family ^^]). Now I can only say...omg, she's going to be pi angry when she wakes up. Very angry. Very, very angry.
Where are the atomic-proof holes, again? *gg*
She pulled out a camera, snapping a picture of the five trainers.

"Well, isn't that a shame, Team Rocket has been caught on camera, trying to invade the Pokémon League," she said. "Now all the television networks will have something interesting to put on the air, a bunch of Pokémon trainers who tried to take down the queen."
Ouch, ouch. Me not like this at all. ><;;;; Karen&Bruno deserves this, but not the three sweeties! ><
 
Hopefully I haven't made Cynthia *too* powerful, but I'm certainly making her stronger than Giovanni was last story. Obviously Sabrina will escape (right?), the question will be whether Will escapes after Sabrina's finished yelling at him.
 
No, no, not too powerful, just..uhm...power-addicted? Too power-addicted? But well, that's okay, I think. ^^
Sabrina *will* escape and Will will escape Cynthia too...it's rather the question if he escapes Sabrina! XD
 
So, do you like my new sig? I figured with a new story, a new sig was necessary... at least while she's in her current position. I don't think Cynthia is viewed as a villain in any other fanfics out there, so if someone were to see that sig out of context they may have no idea what it means.
 
^^ I noticed it (but forgot to mention it in my last post lol). Yeah, it's cool. Maybe you might include some song made by "Queen", *g*.
Hm, now, haven't seen such a fic yet, but then again, I only know a few other fics with Cynthia.
BTW, new question for the club (came up with this randomly): If you could be any one of Sabrina's pokemon, which would you be?
Which reminds me...have we scared Zammy off or why doesn't he use his high post count here? XD
 
^^ I noticed it (but forgot to mention it in my last post lol). Yeah, it's cool. Maybe you might include some song made by "Queen", *g*.
Hm, now, haven't seen such a fic yet, but then again, I only know a few other fics with Cynthia.
BTW, new question for the club (came up with this randomly): If you could be any one of Sabrina's pokemon, which would you be?
Which reminds me...have we scared Zammy off or why doesn't he use his high post count here? XD

I'd be an Alakazam, of course! :P

And no, you aren't scaring me, XD. I just haven't been finding any good ways to jump into the conversation. That is, until just now. ^^
 
Hehe, I finally have a new chapter up. Will has a bigger part in it than Sabrina though! ;_;

As for your chapter, P*A, that's very high on my priority list(even higher than English homework :D). Will try to finish it tomorrow afternoon before I even start Chapter Twelve. ^_^
 
New chapter? With Will? Squeeewww...^.^ Will read asap. Will see if I can review it today (otherwise, tomorrow...or sometime).
XD!! Higher than English homework? I wonder if I should feel flattered or scolding you for that. Not my fault if you get in trouble, right? 0=)
 
Hehe, it won't get my in trouble. I'm lax with English stuff anyways...and so is the prof! Considering what little homework I did(reading 3/12 chapters from the book), I still managed to be ahead of the majority of the class-professor included. 0=)

And hehe, the next chapter will have more Willies-and of course, some more Sabrina-esque stuff. But first, on to your chapter! I'll email it to you once it's complete, and then get cracking. :D
 
Hehe, it won't get my in trouble. I'm lax with English stuff anyways...and so is the prof! Considering what little homework I did(reading 3/12 chapters from the book), I still managed to be ahead of the majority of the class-professor included. 0=)
lol Similar to my English teacher, I guess. XD We talked about Japanese culture during course when we were supposed to talk about mental disorders....0=)
Not to mention my social psychology teacher...scripts =/= blank pages, Madam. >>;;;;;

And hehe, the next chapter will have more Willies-and of course, some more Sabrina-esque stuff. But first, on to your chapter! I'll email it to you once it's complete, and then get cracking. :D
*cracks up with laughter* Thank God you do not know what "Willies" means here in Germany...ahem....*gggg...*
Yeah, why is it called Sabrina's story again if there's like a dozens other characters? The only ones that are needed are Sabrina and Will.
Why get cracking? o,o *does not get*
 
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