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Hm, I don't know about my favourite moments...there are quite a few. But the proposal is one...and their first meeting was cute, too. XD Sabrina knowing that he liked her...and telling him that straight away. *shakes head* So funny and cute.

Hm, okay, maybe I'm sometime a bit too cruel to Sabrina *hides her chapters*...but it would have been a good plot idea nonetheless!

XD! Nm.

...we always knew that, didn't we? He couldn't hide it forever....maybe we influenced him too much. I printed it out. ^.~ So even if PC wents down and/or your computer does so, I still have it saved.
Well...how else should she bath, naked? XD No, Sabrina in a bikini is really sexy. *_* And these boots...I guess she has a domina fetish they are for looking more sinister and cooler and so. ^^
I did notice the new chapter, will read asap.
 
XD But you changed it nevertheless. And Bill is just another form of William, ya know? 0=)

You have? Picture plz. ^^ I wish I had one, too, I would cosplay as Will. XD
 
>>;;; Hmpf, fell for that joke. I really thought you had one. Since, I think, it's not so hard to get a mask that similar to Will's one. Cosplayers found ways to get their hands on more different kind of clothes before.

Not? I think you would suit him very well. Better than me, anyways. Girls cosplaying as boys are not that good, regardless of how short their hair may be. XD
 
Any comment on the new chapter, P*A?

And if I were to cosplay a Pokemon character, I'd be... uh... Max? No, I'm too old, even though I have glasses... I think I'd go the same route I went with choosing my first cosplay and choose a character who is paired with an attractive woman (I ♥ Sango, so I was Miroku)... except no pairings in Pokemon are canon. Maybe I'd be Lance (since I ♥ Lorelei, even if that pairing's not canon). I really couldn't be Will because wearing a mask over glasses would be too uncomfortable.
 
Sorry, I just had a lot of trouble during the last days, I did not find the time to review. >< I really wished I could, but I fear if I try to review now, I'll be stuck in the middle of it when something more or less important calls out to me again and I have to stop. >>;;;

Boys cosplaying as girls is not that bad...it's funny. And I would still cosplay as Will, there are fics where he's depicted with glasses. XD
 
Okay, I'll wait patiently... or not! The other night I pretty much got the whole idea of how everything's going to go down, now it's just a matter of getting there over the course of the next 9 or so chapters. That's much better than continuing to write without a clue as to what will happen in the end, although everything is of course subject to change.
 
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Any comment on the new chapter, P*A?

And if I were to cosplay a Pokemon character, I'd be... uh... Max? No, I'm too old, even though I have glasses... I think I'd go the same route I went with choosing my first cosplay and choose a character who is paired with an attractive woman (I ♥ Sango, so I was Miroku)... except no pairings in Pokemon are canon. Maybe I'd be Lance (since I ♥ Lorelei, even if that pairing's not canon). I really couldn't be Will because wearing a mask over glasses would be too uncomfortable.
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I was actually Lance for Halloween one year, like ten years ago, XD. My brother(who still liked Pokemon at the time) was Blaine. Nobody recognized us, however. Heh.
 
I think you already told me, Zammy. Though I wonder what Blaine&Lance have to do with Halloween...
Well, bad news up, guys. >> I got a cold and don't feel that well, so my time spent on computer is more limited. Good news....ehm, any? XD Well, I might be able to pretty up the sequel's plot while lying in bed for hours. >>;;; I've already started it, but don't feel like writing now...
 
We'll wait, there really isn't much else we can do anyway.

On another note, I began writing Chapter 11, only to find out that I had accidentally written a bunch of it in present tense, while the story is in past tense. Not that big of a problem since I caught it when I did, but it could have completely thrown you off had I not caught it. (I wrote my Survivor story in present tense, probably the reason for the mix-up.)
 
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Good luck to both of you! I'll be waiting to see the results. ^^

I tend to write Pokemon battles in present-tense myself, regardless of what tense the rest of the story is. I've been asked about this countless times, XD. I even did it for that little matchup with Jackson in Chapter One of Multiverse Chronciles. I guess I just prefer descibing Pokemon battles in real time. *sweatdrop*

And by the way, I got Chapter 14 up. I may add a few extra things to it in the near future, depending on how my plans for Chapter 15 work out.
 
I wish I could write right now...but I'm tired and kinda writers-blocked. ><
And yeah, I am back. Hopefully, this cold stays away. >>
I usually write in past tense, unless I have a reason not to do so. *epilogue hint hint*.
Anyway...I promised you to write about your chapter and here I am, CPF. ^^

Okay, honestly, I think Cynthia has lost her mind. Picking up flowers? WTF?! >>

"Apparently the citizens there love me so much they are offering me a gift," Cynthia answered. "So hurry up and get them for me."
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Why am I reminded of the Troian (sp?) horse?
"You… you can teleport?" Lance asked in shock.
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And read minds.
"And I am most displeased with your lack of faith in my leadership."
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Star Wars quotes FTW.
"Good luck?" Janine asked. "I'm going to be the one who captures her – and kills her. They showed her picture – she looks pretty distinct. I will take revenge on one of those who caused you that trouble."
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Very in-character for Janine. ^^
Will sighed. "Sabrina, this isn't like you," he muttered.
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Agreed.
Loreley and Lance are seriously picking up flowers now?! OMG...they're more stupid that I thought
"Isn't it obvious?" Erika replied. "She deserves to have a warm welcome as the new queen, and as the one who is in charge of all the gyms in Kanto, I want to be the first to congratulate her on her new position. So please, tell her to put these flowers all around the Pokémon League building, it ought to make the place look really nice."

Lorelei looked at Erika suspiciously. Clearly there had to be more than that to it; could Erika perhaps be working with the dark Cynthia?
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Either Erika is dense, too kind of naive. Or all of that. Or nothing. I'm confused now. But I doubt she works with Cynthia...

BTW, I'll post the epilogue now. Please...don't take it too seriously. XD
 
There must be more to Erika's gift than just as a welcome, right, right? Or else she wouldn't be in my signature... but of course I'm saving that all for later. In the meantime Cynthia's hatred for one person in particular will flare up, while two teams emerge. And Sabrina will find out "a dark secret," as the title implies. What could that mean? You may know before you read this post.

BTW, (Un)happy Super Bowl Sunday. Unhappy for me because a team I don't like is in it (I cheer against my hometown team in this case), insignificant to both of you since it's American football, but it is seriously one of the most important dates on the American calendar.
 
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OMG , OMG, OMG, OMG, there was so much happening in this chapter, I feel like bombed. x.x I don't even want to know how long this review will get...

"All we need is a television," Karen said.
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For some reason, this makes me rofl...all we need is a TV...lol
"Perhaps you know a psychic named Sabrina?"

"Yes…" Gold responded.

"She is utterly powerless against Cynthia,"
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>.< Do you have to remind me?!?
"The new Team Rocket isn't concerned with good or evil, we're just concerned with getting rid of Cynthia,"
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Which is good.
"I'm not wearing one of those ridiculous 'R' shirts."
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LOL I wouldn't, either.
They were surprised not to see Cynthia around, but they just went along with putting the flowers all over the building.
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Hopefully, she's allergic to them.
"We're putting this blame all on Sabrina," Lucian answered.
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IHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOUIHATEYOU!!!!! ><;;;;;;;;...with you I mean Cynthia&Lucian, of course. XD
An innocent-looking smile appeared on Cynthia's face.
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Innocent= very bad
"So, you miss the little bugger after all?" Will asked.
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LOL I'll sorta miss her, too. ^^
Sabrina paused for a minute, completely frozen in thought. She was totally stunned, both motionless and emotionless. Will feared at first that he had pushed his wife into a fit of rage, but then suddenly figured out there was something more to it.

"What is it?" he asked with concern.

"I – I didn't read Erika's mind," Sabrina said nervously.

Will looked at her in confusion.

"I – I – I couldn't," she finished her statement.
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First, you had me frozen here, too. Literally frozen. And no, it wasn't the temperature. >> I was exactly like Sabrina. And then...OMGOMGOMGOMG...Erica's a darkling? o,o WTF??!?! You really bombed me here...surprise, surprise, only thing I can say.
Tears began to run down Sabrina's face as she thought of her best friend (besides Will) as a potential enemy.
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;.;
"I am warning you out of my own compassion for you."
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Compassion? Cynthia? Never. >>
"You have ten seconds."
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I hope nobody is doubting her insanity anymore.
"You're amazing," he told her.

"I know," she replied.
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We all know. >> Man, you've managed to want me make her suffer in my fic too, but she won't. For the moment. >>
"She wouldn't have killed me anyway, I'm the only one of us with the dark powers, you know," Cyrus said.
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That's what you think.
"See that mansion? You have to find a way to swallow up its insides in a black hole," he tells him.
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I have a bad feeling, a very bad one. BTW: tells!!! XD You've accidently switched to present tense again. XD
The four Team Galactic members begin walking the short distance to Saffron City, preparing to black out Sabrina's mansion once and for all.
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;.; Noooooooooooo....

Okay, not as long as I thought it would be. >> Please, please hurry with next chapter. And don't black out Sabrina. ;.; (And Will of course, too.)
 
All right, I'm glad you liked it. It turned out to be a lot better than I thought... and believe it or not, Erika's supposed dark powers are not the "potential plot point" about her I promised! That was something I thought of as I was halfway through the chapter, and now I think it works great.

Still not sure how next chapter's gonna go, but probably going to have Galactic vs. Saffrons. I'm starting to like my own story again, that's always a good thing.

Edit: okay, Chapter 12 should be up. The rating had to go up to "T" because of one Lucian x Cynthia scene.
 
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*gasp* We're on the second page?!?!? NO!!! TEAM TWILIGHT (my PMD team) TO THE RESCUE!!! *turns into Eevee*...okay, worked not as planned...

Ehm, well, sorry for absence, lack of updates on my own fic (I'm working on it, >.<;;; Just can't decide if first chapter's long enough or not), and lack of review. I had not much sleep and too many exams. Okay, one exam. But that's enough. x.x

...not Erica's dark powers?!? Lol, I thought that had been long-planned. XD Usually, only things the writers did with much thought and planning behind can throw me off the loop, but that really did. I'm still wondering how it will fit in (and guessing from what you said, you do, too. XD!!!)
But if our grass lady has more 'dark' secrets...well, I'm ready to face them. ^.^
About new chapter: no real review, but just let me say a few things. First, that Cynthia x Lucian scene...well, somebody who's older (and/or has a dirty mind) can surely see what's going on, but I doubt it's T-worthy. But I'm not so used to the American-rating system, so don't focus on my advise.
Secondly...I LOVE YOU JANINE!!!! SO MUCH!!!! ^.^
(CPF will know why, Zammy will think me crazy. Like always.)
 
I'm glad you seem to like the chapter... and yes, Janine always seems to be at the right place at the right time. Not often has Sabrina been described as "clueless," but in this case it worked out. Oh, and I don't know whether you are going to review that chapter or not, but the following chapter is almost ready. So if you're going to, please do so now! Next chapter includes stuff like Cynthia's cruelty and power, while Liza returns to Saffron.
 
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