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*sighs* I noticed when I went there. No updates since 21st. (Though there was one story that did get updated on the 22nd, but that could be before the 'crash' or whatever it was).

XD The German vice actors have changed a few times now (only the main cast with exception of Ash kept their voices), but I have to say I don't care much about the voices. Maybe you're right, maybe Cynthia should sound more mature, but then again, watch her personality in the anime...the ice cream scene should tell you everything.

5 pages for chapter 3 now and 2 1/2 are with Cynthia&Lucian. 0=)
 
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5 pages for chapter 3 now and 2 1/2 are with Cynthia&Lucian. 0=)
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That's good to hear... that's who I'm looking forward to seeing the most.

Sabrina having a baby isn't as good as it seems... I mean, it's great for her, but not so easy for me because I have to take that into account every time I write about her. Unless of course Will takes care of the baby...
 
XD This is what I expected, so I mentioned it especially for you. I hope you'll like my Cynthia &Lucian, as they're quite different from your two...

*ggg* Well, theoretically, no more adventures for her, eh? Or they always split up, one taking care of the baby, the other doing the work.
Or they get a babysitter all the time *cough Liza cough*.
Or, easiest way...her parents. ^^
 
Oh, yeah, I forgot about Sabrina's parents... somehow they disappeared from the picture after the wedding. She may have missed out on the last fight vs. Cynthia but there's no way she'll miss out on the... oops, don't want to give too much away.

Just wondering, is Cynthia in control of this relationship as well? You know how much I love writing relationships where the girl's in charge (Sabrina, Giselle, Cynthia...)
 
LOL I asked (somewhere in one of my neverending reviews) if her parents know that they'll become grandparents, but since you didn't answer, I supposed you forgot about them as well (I forgot about them until I thought- wait, parents-grandparents!!!).
Not to mention that I asked about Will's family, too, somewhere...

*raises eyebrow* Misses what? Hm...

Hm, I'm really not sure how to tell you without spoilering anything.... In chapter three, it's Cynthia who has control of the relationship, but Lucian is not a man to be ordered around. Sorry, can't say much more. ^^;;;;;
 
What Sabrina misses she probably wish she would, that's as far as I'll go.

And since you can't see the final chapter, I will give this away... it includes this year's Pokemon League tournament. You know how I've had these massive tournaments with 64 trainers, and Giselle always winning? Well, here's this year's...
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So now you can try to guess who ends up winning... and why some certain people aren't even in it!
 
...will wish she missed out? ....argh, now I wish the title of the next part would be The two Towers

Let's see...first surprise there...Will's there!!! --> must have won at least one set of badges--> possible that he beat his own wife! XD!!!!!
Second surprise....Sabrina's not there! Was she p*ssed about always losing against Silver? Or was it Roxy testing out her new teeth on her mother's pokeballs?
Third....well, no surprise there. No Lucian & Cynthia. D'oh. She's still in prison. Is she? PLEASE TELL ME SHE IS!!!!
Another surprise? Hm, well, Tate's there, but that's no surprise. ^^;;;;;
 
I've sort of decided on a timeline to my stories, where all of that occurred somewhere in summer of 2008, and then the tournament and much of the epilogue takes place in 2009. It's not particularly right, because it comes out to Sabrina being pregnant for less than a year, but I screwed up somewhere along the line and either I'd have to retcon something, or I have to accept it the way it is.

So you can probably guess what's going on with Lucian and Cynthia in the epilogue, from their absence from the tournament. That's not to say anything about Return of... I mean, the next story, where the key words are "liberty" and "freedom." And for that matter, "Celadon police stupidity," but that's another matter...
 
Summer 2008= well, let's say, June/July. +nine months= February/March 2009 ^.^ (funny for me, because I randomly decided that her birthday would be March 1st. XD)

Return of the Queen, we know it by now. XD If you don't randomly deicde to change it too Fellowship of the Pokering last second....
*groans* May I scream *NOOOOOOO!!!* now? Or something like *?!)="=!?=")=!?=!!!?"@@ßß POLICE*.....
And liberty and freedom? Freedom from neverending monarchy (paired with Giselle's ideas about it), I guess...
 
Oh, it's nine months that a pregnancy lasts? Oh, okay. See, I don't know these things. I may know all these awesome little things like Erika being in charge of the gym leaders of Kanto, but I don't know anything about pregnancy. So that works out perfectly! After all, the third story (The Elite Eight) finished shortly after Sabrina's birthday in May, and then this story came right after it.

No, the freedom is for two people who may or may not deserve it. The question I have for you is: is there any way Cynthia could ever be redeemed as a character in my story? She's killed quite a few people, plus ordered Cyrus to kill many more... is there anything she could ever do to make up for it?

Not that she's going to turn good anytime soon, of course.
 
LOL Okay, no comment there. 0=) We pokefreaks are our own kind, knowing nothing about real life.
Though, I did write about it, too....

.... I hope I know who you mean, but that doesn't mean that I have to approve it. XD Cynthia redeemed? One part of me that sees her kicking Sabrina screams: Never!!! The other part, the one that likes Cynthia as a character wishes for her to find some way to get a better reputation...she's a champion, after all. And she once helped Sabrina. *nods to herself*

Turning good would probably be way too ooc for her by now. XD
 
Okay, I'm glad to hear your opinion on it. You hold more sway in what happens in my stories than anyone else, you know...

We can only hope that Cynthia doesn't get a second chance to attack Sabrina, right?
 
No problem. ^^ I like to help if I can.
And talking about swaying....my plot likes to change like a Ditto, too....*glares at sequel*

>>;;; Yeah, we have to hope. But only one of us knows, hm?
 
If I talk any more, then both of us will know. So far, I've written 12 pages of the new story, which should sum up a long Chapter 1. Don't worry, there's some time with Sabrina in there, though mainly the one land that I've forgotten about up until now. Too bad you'll have to keep on waiting to see it thanks to these ff.net problems.
 
Aw, come on, we were just talking so nicely....(and really, any other topic we can discuss? XD)
I don't know how long my third chapter will be...probably again five pages...like I said, a week maybe, so maybe next sunday.
Yeah, I was just talking to Zammy about them, too...no logging in, either, he says. ...Zammy? o,o I should convince him to post here, too.
 
Oh no, there's nothing wrong with talking about it, I just give away too much whenever I write. I've already given away the title of the next story and some other stuff, so I don't want to give away too much more before you read it, otherwise it'll all be spoiled. And after all, you're the main one I write for (besides myself).

I did log in for about a second, and I hurried to try to post the final chapter, but I couldn't get there in time before it screwed up again. Looks like I'll be waiting until tomorrow (for you, that is).
 
XD Okay, okay, I understand that. Yet it's just too much of, hm, curiosity there that makes me ask. I know I'm evil.
And I suffer from the same problems, though I managed to spare myself from spoilering you (same here, you're m main reader, too, aside from my German friends [and occasionally Zammy, when he remembers to review]) now that I restrain myself.
Little spoilers are allowed, though. Like the fact that, if I manage to think of at least two new plots (x.x), my story will have four parts, too. ^^ The first part was called (unofficially) Winter's Love, the second one is Spring's Revenge...see the connection? ^^

Hmpf...maybe they are fixing the problem right now? And no problem, my day still has more than three hours and since I have holidays, I will stay up that long. ^^
 
I like to think I have two readers... you and me. That's enough for me to keep on writing. If it gets down to one, meaning only myself, then I'm not going to be as motivated.

And I'll keep trying... I hit the refresh button about 50 times trying to get it to work.
 
Okay, then I have one reader more, too. XD
I think the only way you would get me off your fics would be if you turned Sabrina into a complete, household keeperish, soccer type of mom that is too dull for any taste and doesn't know the word emancipation even from dictionary. Likewise, if Will turns out to be the complete macho-type of father that leaves everything to his wife and feels proud to be the only bread-winner. >>;;;;
That, or if you kill the two. XD
I've already survived having one of my favourite characters turned into a villain, so there's not much else that will drive me off.

If ff. net doesn't manage that soon, I'll sue them for emotional cruelness.
 
Don't worry, the day Will takes charge of the relationship... no, I can't even think of that happening. Sabrina's in charge all the way.

I'm sorry I made one of your favorites a villain, but isn't it more fun this way? Otherwise, everything would be too... happy. And while I love warm and fuzzy and happy endings, there's not much room for a storyline if we don't have a powerful enough villain. Cynthia herself is probably about as strong as 1,000 Team Rocket members combined, as that's what I had to work with before her.

Oh, and speaking of endings, you may want to check out ff.net now... there's a possibility that you can see the epilogue now...
 
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