Sabrina Fanclub

[Crazy Packers Fan]

It seems like we got a couple posts deleted, including the two about the last chapter. That really stinks, we can't get those back.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Yeah, it does. >> I read the announcement and absolutely knew that my review was gone. Yeah, I'm psychic, or it's just bad luck (you know Friday 13th....).
But you got to read it, CPF, didn't you? If not....><;;; I so don't want to have to write down all the stuff again....x.x
(Kinda stupid of me to post it when I knew PC was having trouble, but there you go...)
On the brighter side...I'll post the sequel today. 0=) I will, I have the whole thing saved, so if PC messes up again, it won't bother me.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I got to read it. I also told you in my response that's now gone that my computer is broken and that I won't be able to write the next chapter for a while. I don't know how long yet, I'm thinking two weeks minimum. Bad timing, because I really want to write right now. (The computer I'm using is a different one, my story's saved on the broken one.)

I look forward to seeing your sequel... hopefully it doesn't get deleted too.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Ouch, ouch, ouch. Really ouch. >.< Once for the deleted post, the other for your broken computer. ;.; Especially because I want to read the new chapter, too.
(I remember, when my computer used to be broke and I wanted to write that I used the old handwriting method...ouch, my poor ankle....)
*sighs* At least I have holidays now, so my updates will probaby be more freuqently. The second chapter is going quite smoothly, so it might be ready next week or so. (If I don't let it be beta-read....*coughs and pokes Zammy*).
If, for any chance, you're not able to find it... https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4351317
(Hmpf, inserting links doesn't work for me. >.<)

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I like the new story, I'll look forward to seeing more of it. Your Sabrina is now in love, a little funny to see compared to what she was like at first. When you next see my Sabrina, you'll like what's going on with her, especially as opposed to last time.

I don't know what chapter it was, but one of them really revitalized me into writing again. Perhaps it was with Erika, I'm not sure. But I'm really enjoying writing again, however this story will last exactly 20 chapters. Which means... I'm planning on a 5th story to the series.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Well, I suppose the funny parts were not really consciously intentional, but rather just...happened. They'll continue to be there, though. Can't stay away from my writing style.

^.^ Another reason for me to wait all the two weeks+. I hope you're right, but almost everything is better than a half-dying, wounded Sabrina (okay, almost everything- a dead Sabrina is of course worse).

Yayayayayay!!! Another part makes me really, really happy! (I had a feeling that you wouldn't stop here, but knowing it for sure now is definitely good!) Hm, now I wonder what the plot will then be about! ^^

 

[Starom]

Haha - this is cool ^^ Sabrina was always my favourite - Abra and family & Ghastly and family are my favourite pokemon too, so I guess it goes hand in hand? :D

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

You're welcome to join, Starom, as are all! (Speaking of which, when will Alakazam return? Please come back!)

Two weeks? You don't have to wait more than two minutes... I gave in and copied my story from ff.net to my mom's computer, and thus wrote Chapter 15 there. So, unless this computer goes down too (knock on wood), I'll keep on writing. Sabrina-centric chapter, BTW, and of course I know you'll love this one.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Welcome, Starom! Have fun here, post a lot and stay as insane as possible. 0=)

Well, Zammy is online (not right now, but I talked to him several times over the last days) and I told him he should post here again. Which he didn't. >> Hmpf.

Since that's ontopic...small announcement. Due to problems with the phone company, I might not be able to get online for 2+ days, starting tomorrow. ;.; Sorry about that.

Did you post that chapter already, CPF, because you said 'two minutes'? If that's the case, then I seem not to be able to see it on ff. net. ><

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

That's strange, because I can see it... I wonder why the new chapter isn't showing up for you. I hope it shows up soon.

 

[Psychic*Absol]

Even stranger, when I try to access it through your ff. net profile, it works. It doesn't when I just browse through Pokemon.... Hm....nevermind, I got it now. ^^ Review now or after my possible downtime? XD

Edit: Just started reading....GOD I KNEW IT!!!!!! XD I'M PSYCHIC!!!!!! (ehm, okay, sorta) ^^ Yes, we're going to see little Roxette now!!!! (one day)
Zammy will...ehm...be angry? XD

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

I guess I must give away too much, because you were able to guess it. We won't actually see the baby until story #5, but at least we know it's coming. And yes, apparently Sabrina does not have the power to foresee her own pregnancy.

Edit: Chapters 16 & 17 are up, 18 is written, and I'm thinking about writing #19 right now. Oh, and look at my signature. I'm beginning to like her more and more all the time (so much that I'll let her win???).

 

[Alakazam17]

XD *takes a bow*

Wow, I guess I was missed, eh? Well I guess I didn't really know what to say as of late. I am really bad at reading(and to a lesser extent writing), heh, but I'd like to get caught up on your work, CPF. From what I hear from P*A, it's getting interesting(despite imminent PsychicShippiness =P).

As for Multiverse Chronicles, I am partially through the next chapter, and I hope to finish it up shortly. Thing is...I'm sick at the moment, and I tend to dislike writing while I'm coughing up junk. >_<

And as for the Japanese in your sig, I know the last three katakana letters say "Shirona," but I can't make out the first two. =P

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

The Japanese was a little blurry; I tried changing the color to make it clearer. Maybe now you can take a guess...

I'll be looking forward to seeing where Sabrina ends up next in your fic. I know she was with Naruto recently, and it ought to get even more interesting now that she's met him.

Meanwhile, I went nuts writing today and wrote three chapters, including the penultimate one, where someone's gonna die I won't spoil it yet. I'm going to wait to post each chapter until P*A gives me a review on each, because it's more fun that way. I already got too far ahead of her as it is.

 

[Alakazam17]

The Japanese was a little blurry; I tried changing the color to make it clearer. Maybe now you can take a guess...

I'll be looking forward to seeing where Sabrina ends up next in your fic. I know she was with Naruto recently, and it ought to get even more interesting now that she's met him.

Meanwhile, I went nuts writing today and wrote three chapters, including the penultimate one, where someone's gonna die I won't spoil it yet. I'm going to wait to post each chapter until P*A gives me a review on each, because it's more fun that way. I already got too far ahead of her as it is.

Is it "taki?" XD "ki" looks kind of like that, but I think it has only two horizontal slashes-same with "e." Perhaps it's the kanji symbol for life?

Hm, she hasn't met Naruto yet, but that'll come soon. My next chapter is actually going to stray away from following one character for its entirety, instead focusing on nearly everyone for a short bit. And while I may get on it tonight, I'll probably do it tomorrow(hoping I'll feel better then).

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Well, truth be told, I don't know how to pronounce what I typed in there myself. I just plugged in a certain word (*hint hint*) and I copied what came out.

I hope you feel better; I want to see your story!

 

[Psychic*Absol]

See there, the P*A is back. =D And as soon as I re-appear, the psychicshipping-hater (aka Zammy) is back, too....carnival is getting to me I know.

I guess I must give away too much, because you were able to guess it.

Nah, not your fault, CPF. I'm really, really good a guessing fanfic's plot and I drove some authors crazy with that, I must admit....

We won't actually see the baby until story #5, but at least we know it's coming. And yes, apparently Sabrina does not have the power to foresee her own pregnancy.

We knew that it (she) would be there since the 'epilogue'. 0=) And, like I said, psychics can't foresee everything. I at least think so. (see my fic...Sabrina wouldn't have gone on that trip if she foresaw her own almost death)

Oh, and look at my signature. I'm beginning to like her more and more all the time (so much that I'll let her win???).

O.O NOOOOOO!!!!

I'm going to wait to post each chapter until P*A gives me a review on each, because it's more fun that way.

* a bit angry* I told you I would be offline for a few days (and you can be damn happy that my phone company let me online today because otherwise, you would be stuck for a weekend without ANY review), but I'll be a nice P*A and review ALL THREE chapters today. Yes, I can (commit typing suice that way).

First, the best chapter ever. *lol* I already had suspections when I read the title, btw. ^^

"Just like with Giovanni, it cost Cynthia some of her powers trying to control my mind like that.

Let's hope it stays that way. >> *glares at Cynthia*

"No, I'm serious," Sabrina said. "If I didn't come here, maybe I wouldn't have found out what I know now."

Let's agree on that she would have found out in a few months anyway, if not even just weeks.

"I'm pregnant," she told him.

*celebrates on Zammy's corpse* XD!!!!

Surely he knew exactly when this came from, but he thought there was no chance that Sabrina had gotten pregnant from then.

Let's do the math....Sabrina's birthday was May 15th, we had agreed on. One month later, they married. Now, how much later does part 4 take place? Less than a year....hm....no, sorry, can't find out when (month) they baby's due. ><

He thought he had taken all the necessary measures to prevent it…

LOL Either something broke *ggg* or Sabrina manipulated something or she manipulated Will or...the possibilities are endless *ggg*.

"It's not your fault," she responded. "Oh, okay, maybe it is…

It takes two to tango...*ggg*

Sabrina smiled. "I'll bet against you," she said. "You'll think better than to do something as foolhardy as that."

>.< I agree with her. Very bad idea, Will. You can't do that now that you're going to be a daddy. ;.;

"Come on, now, it's too late to change that," Will replied. "If it's a girl, I get to name her, and I have the perfect name for her."

*g* Well, we know that it's going to be a girl. (And we know her name.)

their first offspring.

The way this is worded makes me think they'll have more than one child.

"Oh, we wish we could visit her ourselves," one of the girls replied.

"It's an honor to be invited by the queen," another one said.

They sound like robots....

"What kind of person would destroy such a lively place?" she wondered.

The one you're going to meet.

Cynthia and Lucian lay in bed together, feeling as happy as ever.

I wonder if they'll ever have a child. The requirements are there, after all. *g* Hm, if they have a son, and then he and Roxette meet and...ehm, no, I won't think of plots. XD

"And what is your purpose?" she questioned.

"To make the queen happy," Lucian added.

Normally, I like relationsships where the girl rules, but this one is twisted.

with no one around to stop them.

I so doubt that.

"We are Team Rocket," Karen announced.

"At least most of them are," Silver added, pointing to Karen.

*gg*

"Just as long as we don't have to wear any of those ridiculous 'R' shirts," Melody added, as Whitney laughed.

These shirts really seem to be not fashionable at all. The new TR should do something about it. *ggg*

"Oh, relax," Giselle replied. "I'm sure none of them will object to my presence here."

Oo, just Oo

"Oh, that's right!" Giselle exclaimed. "You and that ridiculous mask! I can't believe such a top-quality trainer would marry a man like you!"

*glares at Giselle* He was an Elite trainer, too, ya know? >>

"Aren't you, uh, sort of wanted by the police?" Will asked. "You know, by Cynthia's orders?"

"Oh, that?" Giselle replied. "Why, I'm not worried! Are you, Joe?"

Joe looked around in fear, hoping no one would see his girlfriend.

*rolls her eyes* Obviously he is.

"Reward? Making me happy is your reward, you fools!"

*giggles sarcastically* Oh, what a reward that is!

"Oh, Lucian," Cynthia said. "When will those fools ever learn? They shall never be able to make me happy."

"There is someone who can do that, though, isn't there?" Lucian asked with a smile.

"Only one," Cynthia responded.

*sarcastic giggle continues* Yeah, only one. >> Thank God.

(second chapter title surprised me... I used that word, too, but in a different connection XD)

"What kind of meal is this?" she snapped at Will. "Do you Saffron citizens eat this strange stuff all the time?"

"They're called vegetables, Giselle," Joe said.

lols at Giselle not knowing what vegetables are...omg....my Sabrina is a vegetarian, btw. ^^;;; I thought I should mention that. XD

"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't realize you were one of those poor households," she continued. "It must be an honor for a low-class family like yours to welcome in the Pokémon League champion into your house, isn't it? Ha ha ha ha ha!"

I don't think Will& Sabrina are that poor, they have a mansion after all. And no. Just no. >> No honour there.

and Joe slapped his hand over his forehead, Liza was thinking about more pressing issues.

I do the same here, Joe. And wtf, Liza thinking about pressing issues first? Man, without Sabrina, the household goes nuts.

"Then maybe a couple of us should keep Lucian busy with an old-fashioned Pokémon battle," Liza replied. "That would be you and me, Will."

Psychic vs psychic, the classical, always good battle. ^^

"Well, one thing's for sure: I'm not allowing Sabrina to face her ever again," Will commented. "No way do I ever want to see what I saw the last time."

Agreed. Completely. >> Never again.

"Well, what if I were to… spill the beans?" Cyrus asked.

Even though I do not know what that means, I have an idea about what it does and that surprises me. o,o A lot.

"I'm off to the Celadon police station," Will replied. "I've got to stop the police before they get themselves stopped by Cynthia."

>.< And then Cynthia's going to stop you!

They then noticed there were two mansions; one belonged to Sabrina's parents, and the other of course to Sabrina.

Hm, leads me to a question...do her parents know that they'll become grandparents? ^-^

"Okay, let me make this clear, we are Team Rocket - but we are not evil,"

*cough* As if.

"That's fine with me," Giselle replied. "After all, pawns become queens."

Haven't we already agreed that monarchy= bad?

"And aren't you the same guy I had to throw out of the hospital?"

"Wait, I thought that was another Jenny," Will said.

Oo So she did not lose her memory of that?

"What the heck is going on here?"

"Oh, so the man of the house chooses to join the party," Liza said. "Have some fun, too, Will."

"Liza, would you please tell me why she is here?" Will asked, pointing to Karen.

Several lol worthy things here. First, Will's quote, then Liza calling him the man of the house (funny thing is, he's going to stay the man of the house for some time...omg, poor Will, cornered by three women), and then, of course, Karen and Will. If Sabrina were here...ehm, heads might have rollen. XD

"There's no way to beat a Magnet Train," Liza replied.

Teleport! ^.^

Everyone turned their attention to Will save for Giselle.

How *surprising*.

while Liza and I teleport,

Knew it.

She smiled sweetly at Erika, who returned the favor.

I would interpret these smiles quite differently.

"I just love flowers… they are really such an integral part of my life."

*cough* And dark powers *cough*

"What is with you two?" she asked. "Get up!"

Lol Agatha....*shakes head*

"Well, you don't expect the old woman to carry you, do you?" Agatha asked.

'Of course we do. >> Your bones aren't broken, are they?'

"That's the way it is when you're facing the league champion," Giselle replied

The sad thing is...she *is* strong.

Continuation in next post, as this one might seriously get too long. ><

 

[Alakazam17]

Haha, quite a review you have there, P*A. *is danced upon*

And I'm writing Chapter 16 now myself, and I'll hopefully have it finished this afternoon. =D

And I assume it means "Queen Shirona" then CPF. =P

 

[Psychic*Absol]

^ afternoon? It's almost night for me. *ggg*

Yeah, continuation now...x.xGod I feel tired, but I want to finish this so I can read new chapters so CPF feels happy. ^^
BTW, I overread this first...SOMEONE'S GONNA DIE???!?!?!?! OH NOES!!!!!! O.O *faints*

For all they knew, it was possible that Cynthia was innocent.

No chance. Absolutely no chance.

The officer looked around, feeling awful about what she thought was about to occur. Then she fired the gun, closing her eyes, trying to avert herself from seeing Cynthia killed.

The bullet simply stopped in mid-air and dropped harmlessly to the ground.

"Unbelievable!" an officer yelled.

I've seen this happening quite often both in fanfics and (fictional) films about psychics.

"How can you just call yourself queen? You weren't born into royalty, you weren't elected - you just made yourself queen!" another officer yelled.

That's how they always did it in former centuries.

"My, my," he said. "You're so compassionate."

"I know," she replied with a sweet smile. "I spared their dogs."

*nods weakly* She loves animals Pokemon.

"You don't know what happened to Sabrina, and I won't let you know.

*lols* That can be interpreted in many ways...

"By whom, may I ask, Queen Cynthia?" Erika questioned.

Cynthia looked at Erika innocently.

"It isn't important," Cynthia answered.

It is. But keep your underlings dumb, yeah, right, that's Cynthia's way.

Sabrina lay in her hospital bed, feeling a sudden feeling of panic.

No, Will, no! she thought.

Images began flashing through her mind… she saw Will going through similar things to what she suffered when she last met Cynthia.

Will, hear me, she said telepathically. Whatever you do, do not attack Cynthia… please…

;.; Reason why I was scared for a moment that Will would die....

Will felt a sudden panic feeling. "You know what," he offered, "I think that we would be best off if Liza and I took Lucian out of the picture."

^.^ Way better. I like Psychic vs psychic much better. (And no chance that Will might get in trouble).

"In another dimension," Lucian replied.

Will's eyes sunk as he realized that they had been killed. "You and me, one-on-one," he demanded to Lucian. "Come on, let's go."

"No, make that two-on-one!" Liza shouted. "I'm fighting him too!"

I like the way Will reacts to the killings and how he suggests the battle, but I hope it will end in a good way. ><

Karen then looked over at all the other trainers, who were absolutely petrified - they had been frozen in place by Cynthia's psychic powers.

>.< Ouch.

"It's a shame the teacher must kill her own pupil,"

Hm, will it be Karen that's going to be killed?

Out came Cynthia's most trusted Pokémon, Lucario.

"That isn't fair!" Will complained. "A dark type in a battle between psychics?"

Lucario is Fighting/Steel. ^^;;;;;

"Okay…" Lucian replied. "And how about… if I defeat you, then you die?"

Will was about to say something, but Liza interrupted him. "That sounds fair!" she shouted.

o,o No, it doesn't. It sounds bad. Will & Liza shouldn't die!!!

Frowning, Will sent out his Xatu, suddenly much more worried about the outcome of the battle.

I'm too, now.

While she wasn't paying attention, I built up a dark barrier all around the room, stopping her from escaping."

"I was paying attention,"

I'm not sure if that makes sense....

Will lay on his back, completely wiped out. Lucario had danced right past his Xatu and Liza's Medicham and began punching and scraping at the masked trainer.

Ouch. So Sabrina's vision almost comes true.

"Who said this was a battle between Pokémon?" Lucian laughed. "Kill her!"

Lucario then made its move, perhaps to crush the 15-year-old girl.

O.O NO, NOT LIZA!!! ;.; Please not, I like the little twerp. Without her, it wouldn't be the same.


*sighs and faints* Finished. Seven pages in word. Next chapters please.

 

[Crazy Packers Fan]

Yeah, continuation now...x.xGod I feel tired, but I want to finish this so I can read new chapters so CPF feels happy. ^^

Okay, then, up goes another chapter... part 2 of the epic battle.

BTW, I overread this first...SOMEONE'S GONNA DIE???!?!?!?! OH NOES!!!!!!

Maybe. Just maybe.

Lucario is Fighting/Steel. ^^;;;;;

HUGE mistake there, and I'm glad you caught it before I posted Chapter 18. Why? You'll see. Fortunately I was able to manipulate things a little bit thanks to Cynthia's awesomeness.

On other matters, yes, it does say "Queen Shirona," as she would love to be called. Have you noticed that Erika always calls Cynthia "Queen Cynthia"? If you haven't, it's a good time to point that out right now.

The epilogue has been written, so this one is as good as done. I've got to keep on this writing kick and start the fifth one as soon as possible. It'll be really clear from the epilogue where the series is going.