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Sabrina Fanclub

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Crazy Packers Fan said:
Okay, I'll trust you to read it... remember, the more you read, the more I'll post! (Chapter 1 is not fully up yet, just a part of it.)

And was that "surprise" something to do with Yuichiro and Rei? Either that, or Rei using her teleportation powers. I can't figure it out.
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Not specifically them, nope. I'll see if I can make it a little more obvious(yet still hard to find, XD) when I update again.

...which may be tonight, XD. When I finish this assignment, I'm either going to watch anime and/or write. =P
 
>> No excuses, CPF, my computer went indeed down. (And I am p*ssed about that.) Though, I managed to see it now. Just a quick note: Rate it, that's one of the rules here. Or you get in trouble with the mods. ^.~
I'm unsure where to post my review now..probably in the other thread. ^^
 
Maybe I'm just clueless. I couldn't figure it out, then. But I'll be looking forward to seeing your next chapter, whenever it's posted (and most likely not on ff.net!).
 
Whoah, I come back from reviewing and searching for origami hearts and no new posts? Zammy!!! XD
Anyway, finished review. I'll probably check ff. net, to see if it works now, but my hopes aren't high. >>;;;
 
I've hit that refresh button about 50 times already, and still no luck. You'll just have to read the rest of it here today. It'll be put up in 3 parts. I've already posted part 2. This is the part that will amaze you, trust me.
 
It did amaze me, CPF....it surely did. ...omg....I am psychic, aren't I? Okay, Leroy would have sounded a tad bit better than just Roy, but I'll leave it there. I'm already amazed that I managed to guess it that well. Either I know you too well, or...*shrugs*

Though I have to say....I need to rethink my plot ideas now, too. >> While talking about a possible son for Cynthia&Lucian, I got the idea of giving them one in my story, too. Now I need to rethink this, either it looks as if I stole from you (again). ^^;;;;
 
Oh, it's okay if you take that idea, after all, I took it from you in the first place. You said something about them having a child some time ago, and I thought it would be perfect for Cynthia to be pregnant while locked away. Now Sabrina and Cynthia have competing babies. It'll be ever so clear who's the more powerful of the two tomorrow, in Chapter 2. It's a cruel chapter (I warn you once more). And it doesn't get much better immediately, either.
 
^^ Okay then. (I agree that idea is perfect. I mean, it works perfect now with Roxette...really it does.)
XD I don't think the two are competeting right now. They'll more be like "blub?" when they meet. XD!!! Because right now, they're just babies. ^^ Just wait ten, fifteen, twenty years, though...
o,o More powerful of the two? Well...Will got beaten by Lucian, Sabrina got beaten by Cynthia...if you do the math, then Roy *should* be more powerful than Roxy, if he got his mother's dark powers, too...ouch.
*sighs* I know it's going to be cruel, you warned me a few times now. I'll prepare myself, though. Tissues, no sharp things, aspirine, warm milk, coffee...I have everything ready. lol
 
Actually, now that I've written Chapter 3 (with a title in German, no less!), I can't decide which one's crueler. More violence in Chapter 2, more utter sadness in Chapter 3. Here's a hint on one of the words of the chapter: "Tod." Hopefully I know enough German that the word means what it's supposed to mean. It's incredibly sad.

And the only thing I'll be able to say is: don't stop reading. Please.
 
If you want to check your title (and it's no spoiler), then just give it to me, I can check. ^^ Though, I'm surprised by that. Any reason why it's in German? ^^ (Just for me? XD)
Okay. I'll scream at you during Chapter 2 (note to herself: get sharp things back), and cry in Chapter 3 (get tissues ready).
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TOD?!?!?!?! (= death, you're right)....OMG....I hope you kill someone I couldn't care less about. (Remember, kill Sabrina & Will [I'll probably take Roxy to this list, too] and I'll never read any chapter again. no, no blackmailing here XD)

Oh. Just read last sentence. Okay. I'll stop reading. You just made me stop reading with saying that. >> *points to list*
 
I will say this, before you stop reading: what seems to happen in one chapter, may only be just a cliffhanger for the next chapter. So if it looks bad after one chapter, keep in mind that I may just be playing with your mind until the next chapter. What does that have to do with Sabrina? A lot, unfortunately.

You may think I hate Sabrina after this next chapter, actually. Really, I love her. She just has a powerful opponent...
 
CPF, I know you by now (lol), so I'm quite sure you have a lot of cliffhangers. Heck, you almost got me with a few of those....especially those that play around with Sabrina's death....*sighs* I sure hope it's one of the two scenarios I can think of, and not the other one. >< Okay, make that three scenarios. But only one of them should happen...ehm, no telling what I think of. XD

Ah, what a surprise. >< We know Cynthia's strong...she is the 'ouch' kind of strong.
We should make a new rule for this club: Never torture Sabrina in your fanfics. *gets thrown out of the fanclub herself* ...okay, forget about that.
BTW, I have to switch computers now, this one is messing up. >> So I'll be offline for 5-10 minutes.
 
I talk way too much about my fics beforehand, so I'll stop with the hints on the next two chapters until they come along. I will say that I'm upset about ff.net being off, because I really want to upload there... *sighs*

You've tortured poor Sabrina in your fanfics? Not that I would ever do that... oh, wait, I already did.
 
I know, I feel the same way. So now that I'm at another computer, the one I write my fanfics at...hm, might as well give you a little hint at my Chapter three, not? If you don't want to read it, you don't have to.
The chapter is called "Lies& Lures", and the first part is complete. And remember, I told you that Cynthia &Lucian are quite present in the first 2,5 pages. And now it's nine pages, with 6,5 of them with Cynthia and Lucian.^^

Her past in Discovering is quite bad, she cuts herself in Mirrors, and don't let me mention that I almost killed her in Winter's Love (aka the first one I posted here).
 
Good, I hope to see a lot of that awesome couple. They're quickly becoming one of my favorites, although Silver x Jasmine remains my all-time favorite.

I guess you're right, you've had some difficult moments for Sabrina. I don't know if any of them were quite as harsh as what Cynthia did to her, however.
 
I'm not sure if you'll like mydescription of the two. The third chapter implies more hints against the shipping then for it, I fear. XD
Hm, I should update my sig one time. Snazzyshipping is becoming on of my favourite shippings, too. ^^ Next to Psychicshipping and BlackVelvetshipping. ^^

XD Well....your Cynthia hurt Sabrina, but she didn't actually bring her that close to death, did she? That Crunch in my fic did. Not to mention what will happen in this story
 
More hints against it than for it? But I thought they were already established as a couple... well, I hope it works out in the end.

Who says anything's happening to Sabrina in this story? For all you know, it could be Erika who for some reason wanders into Saffron City and ends up as the one being attacked... you never know...
 
It's the fact that they're officially established as a couple. You know all these little stories by the yellow press papers? Do we really know if these people love each other or if someone just thought that up?

Oh, come on, CPF, if you tell me I won't like it...plus, it's Saffron that gets attacked and it's gym leader won't lean back, nursing her baby all the time, will she?
 
Well, either way, it should be interesting to see what happens with Cynthia and Lucian (whose name I've pronounced wrong a lot... I guess it's supposed to be "Lu-sin" not "Lu-see-in").

Must... resist... urge... to post next chapter... sorry, P*A, the next chapter will have to wait, and then you can find out. Just remember the days when I used to post a chapter every few weeks! But I didn't leave Sabrina in a bad position most of those times, of course...
 
You know, I'm currently searching for a video of the German Cynthia...just so you can hear her German voice, too. ^^ If I find one, I'll search for a video with German Lucian, too. Cause his name is pronounced Lu-shi-an here. (no 'c', , but an actual 'sh' like in 'shop'. XD)

Must...resist...urge...to...blackmail...CPF...into...posting...chapter...and/or...posting...my...wait, Chapter 3 is not finished yet. o,o Sorry then. XD
 
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