Sacred Fire, Divine Water [OOC-SU] [T]

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May I reserve a spot in the Sacred Fire family?
 
Full Name: Ezekiel Mercutio Zanzintu

Nicknames: Ezekiel

Sex: Male

Age: 26

Family: Divine Water

Career: Ezekiel is a military man, specialising in the trade of death, killing those who threaten his family. He is a general in the Army, and terror on the battlefield. He has been in the service since the age of 12, learning how to wield most types of weapon so as he would not be hindered when he joined the coming wars against the Sacred Fire family.

Appearance: Ezekiel is a tall, very muscled man, at least 6'4, with frosty white hair running all the way across his scalp. His hair is long but does not get in his eyes, only trailing down his back. His cheekbones are high up and his lips are moulded together. His face is unblemished other than a battle scar running across his left cheek. He is oddly good looking, and many of the women in the kingdom have tried to win over his affections, to no avail.

Ezekiel's eyes are big and brown, like a baby cows, however don't let them betray you, he is a bloodthirsty warrior and would kill you if you were to get in his way. Ezekiel's chin and upper lip are free from any facial hair, which sometimes makes him look much younger. A lot of men scoff at this behind his back, but those that Ezekiel finds out doing so are usually dealt with in the swiftest and most horrific ways possible, Ezekiel doesn't like people laughing at him.

Ezekiel's clothes are mainly coloured in light blues to blacks, the colours of water. However, in battle he equips a heavy duty set of plate armour minus a helmet, which he wears a shroud of chain-mail so as his vision is not restricted. Although the Plate armour is extremely heavy, it does not seem to hinder Ezekiel as he has had many years training in it.

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Personality: Ezekiel behaves as expected of a high ranking officer in the military. His peers and the more important, higher ranking members of the kingdom gain his utmost respect, however, the underlings and the lesser people of the kingdom are usually greeted with a certain arrogance, tinted with rudeness or anger, depending on his mood.

Ezekiel is quick witted and usually when getting into an argument with him, he could shut you up easily with a few simple comments. However, when annoyed, he can usually resort to using his fists to knock someone senseless. Ezekiel also lacks patience, which a lot of people say will be the downfall of him.

History: It was a dark stormy night when Ezekiel was born, and the mysterious Egg given to them by an old man in Ho-oh city had hatched, revealing a baby Elekid. His mother, a lower class woman, and his father a high ranking military officer. They lived on a farm outside of Ho-oh City. It was peaceful for them, as they lived away from the politics, and his father was only called to army duty when something serious happened, which was quite rare. They lived a good life, farming for money. They were never very rich, but they had enough to have a nice lifestyle. When Ezekiel turned 12, his father began teaching him how to use the many blades that existed in the Region of Johto. Ezekiel took to them with extreme prowess, being able to sometimes best his father with certain blades. When the War came, the legions of Ho-oh had trampled over his farm, and his father had been killed for treason, siding with the Lugia clan. Ezekiel instantly enlisted, and as he fought, he rose higher in rank, until he controlled his own group of men, known as the storm-runners, one of the most elite forces in all of Lugia's army, and one of the most powerful in Johto.

Skills: Ezekiel is extremely skilled with both sword and blade, and in any type of fighting style. He could easily fend off a large group of men on his own if it came down to melee fighting.
Ezekiel also has a strong fist, so if he runs out of weapons to use, he could use his hands to knock down his enemies, although even he knows that he wouldn't get very far with this type of combat in an actual battle. Ezekiel is also a skilled leader, capable of leading his 50 soldier group with an iron fist, and capable of leading them into battle, and winning.

Flaws: Ezekiel's most identifiable flaw is his anger and frustration towards the Ho-oh nation coupled with his Arrogance and impatience. Often in battle he will charge forward with Electivire and cause havoc, but he never seems to come out with a scratch, but it only takes one well aimed arrow, or a deadly swoop from a blades edge to end him.

Weapon: Ezekiel uses a scythe in battle, as he finds that he can use the hilt to block swords and the blade can be used to sweep around him to kill as many enemies as he can. The blade is very ornamental, with etchings of legendary Pokemon all over it, a small mouse like one flying at the top, and at the bottom several other creatures, one looking like a whale, another looking like a serpent with a head-guard.
Many of the Pokemon adorning the hilt don't exist, but for some reason the craftsmen saw them in a dream of his and had to put them down on the blade, for artistic purposes.


Pokemon: Electivire


Pokemon Name:  Eleking


Pokemon Personality:  Eleking is exactly like Ezekiel, they both charge into battle and eliminate the opponents, Ezekiel's Scythe swinging malevolently and the electric shots coming from Eleking. They are both a worthy team to face, and a very difficult team to beat, as they have not been defeated yet.


Pokemon History: (Basically the same as Ezekiel's.


Pokemon Specialty: Shooting lightning bolts at enemies and using different types of punch, Ice punch, Fire punch and Focus punch. Eleking can also charge Ezekiel's blade with Electricity, to make it more deadly.


Pokemon Flaws: It's flaw would be it's pride, as it believes it is one of the greatest battle Pokemon that have ever lived.


Proof of Reading: Defeating a Team Rocket grunt in Ecruteak city, the boy's name is Ethan and his pokemon is a Quilava.


Anything Else: (Anything other than this that you'd like to add?)
 
wow... This looks brilliant! could you please reserve me for Sacred Fire, and just to confirm in case i missed it, are we allowed to have ANY pokemon as our link?
 
Handing in my reservation (if you do reservations) for a Divine Water family member! This looks absolutely amazing. Kudos to you, GM. :)

I should get my SU in by tomorrow since I'm going to be busy today. Promise I won't take very long!
 
Mr. Mammoth said:
May I reserve a spot in the Sacred Fire family?
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Yes you may!

Thaddius said:
Full Name: Ezekiel Mercutio Zanzintu

Nicknames: Ezekiel

Sex: Male

Age: 26

Family: Divine Water

Career: Ezekiel is a military man, specialising in the trade of death, killing those who threaten his family. He is a general in the Army, and terror on the battlefield. He has been in the service since the age of 12, learning how to wield most types of weapon so as he would not be hindered when he joined the coming wars against the Sacred Fire family.

Appearance: Ezekiel is a tall, very muscled man, at least 6'4, with frosty white hair running all the way across his scalp. His hair is long but does not get in his eyes, only trailing down his back. His cheekbones are high up and his lips are moulded together. His face is unblemished other than a battle scar running across his left cheek. He is oddly good looking, and many of the women in the kingdom have tried to win over his affections, to no avail.

Ezekiel's eyes are big and brown, like a baby cows, however don't let them betray you, he is a bloodthirsty warrior and would kill you if you were to get in his way. Ezekiel's chin and upper lip are free from any facial hair, which sometimes makes him look much younger. A lot of men scoff at this behind his back, but those that Ezekiel finds out doing so are usually dealt with in the swiftest and most horrific ways possible, Ezekiel doesn't like people laughing at him.

Ezekiel's clothes are mainly coloured in light blues to blacks, the colours of water. However, in battle he equips a heavy duty set of plate armour minus a helmet, which he wears a shroud of chain-mail so as his vision is not restricted. Although the Plate armour is extremely heavy, it does not seem to hinder Ezekiel as he has had many years training in it.

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Personality: Ezekiel behaves as expected of a high ranking officer in the military. His peers and the more important, higher ranking members of the kingdom gain his utmost respect, however, the underlings and the lesser people of the kingdom are usually greeted with a certain arrogance, tinted with rudeness or anger, depending on his mood.

Ezekiel is quick witted and usually when getting into an argument with him, he could shut you up easily with a few simple comments. However, when annoyed, he can usually resort to using his fists to knock someone senseless. Ezekiel also lacks patience, which a lot of people say will be the downfall of him.

History: It was a dark stormy night when Ezekiel was born, and the mysterious Egg given to them by an old man in Ho-oh city had hatched, revealing a baby Elekid. His mother, a lower class woman, and his father a high ranking military officer. They lived on a farm outside of Ho-oh City. It was peaceful for them, as they lived away from the politics, and his father was only called to army duty when something serious happened, which was quite rare. They lived a good life, farming for money. They were never very rich, but they had enough to have a nice lifestyle. When Ezekiel turned 12, his father began teaching him how to use the many blades that existed in the Region of Johto. Ezekiel took to them with extreme prowess, being able to sometimes best his father with certain blades. When the War came, the legions of Ho-oh had trampled over his farm, and his father had been killed for treason, siding with the Lugia clan. Ezekiel instantly enlisted, and as he fought, he rose higher in rank, until he controlled his own group of men, known as the storm-runners, one of the most elite forces in all of Lugia's army, and one of the most powerful in Johto.

Skills: Ezekiel is extremely skilled with both sword and blade, and in any type of fighting style. He could easily fend off a large group of men on his own if it came down to melee fighting.
Ezekiel also has a strong fist, so if he runs out of weapons to use, he could use his hands to knock down his enemies, although even he knows that he wouldn't get very far with this type of combat in an actual battle. Ezekiel is also a skilled leader, capable of leading his 50 soldier group with an iron fist, and capable of leading them into battle, and winning.

Flaws: Ezekiel's most identifiable flaw is his anger and frustration towards the Ho-oh nation coupled with his Arrogance and impatience. Often in battle he will charge forward with Electivire and cause havoc, but he never seems to come out with a scratch, but it only takes one well aimed arrow, or a deadly swoop from a blades edge to end him.

Weapon: Ezekiel uses a scythe in battle, as he finds that he can use the hilt to block swords and the blade can be used to sweep around him to kill as many enemies as he can. The blade is very ornamental, with etchings of legendary Pokemon all over it, a small mouse like one flying at the top, and at the bottom several other creatures, one looking like a whale, another looking like a serpent with a head-guard.
Many of the Pokemon adorning the hilt don't exist, but for some reason the craftsmen saw them in a dream of his and had to put them down on the blade, for artistic purposes.


Pokemon: Electivire


Pokemon Name:  Eleking


Pokemon Personality:  Eleking is exactly like Ezekiel, they both charge into battle and eliminate the opponents, Ezekiel's Scythe swinging malevolently and the electric shots coming from Eleking. They are both a worthy team to face, and a very difficult team to beat, as they have not been defeated yet.


Pokemon History: (Basically the same as Ezekiel's.


Pokemon Specialty: Shooting lightning bolts at enemies and using different types of punch, Ice punch, Fire punch and Focus punch. Eleking can also charge Ezekiel's blade with Electricity, to make it more deadly.


Pokemon Flaws: It's flaw would be it's pride, as it believes it is one of the greatest battle Pokemon that have ever lived.


Proof of Reading: Defeating a Team Rocket grunt in Ecruteak city, the boy's name is Ethan and his pokemon is a Quilava.


Anything Else: (Anything other than this that you'd like to add?)
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Um, only two things: One, you might want to display a bit more weakness on a character like this. When i read it, I see Mr. Beautiful Kills Everyone And Is A Perfect Soldier, excluding the lack of planning before battle. It does seem like his ultimate downfall will be magic. Secondly... Warriors aren't really necessary in this RP, since the leaders aren't out trying to kill each other, only trying to avoid each other in peace. However, some members of each family do try to attack the opposing family on their own (usually in a small group). Anyways, your character's career might be more like defenders, guarding your family from anything harmful.

pokeman10000 said:
wow... This looks brilliant! could you please reserve me for Sacred Fire, and just to confirm in case i missed it, are we allowed to have ANY pokemon as our link?
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Thank you, and you're reserved! You may have any non-legendary Pokemon as your link, though their evolution should be similar to the human's age and past experiences.




Maganium 90, thank you, and you are also reserved!

Otherworld9) said:
Note that...well, I'm having a rather hard time trying to describe the clothing style, since right now, so correct me if my description of the clothing is off, wrong, a bit bad, or somehow incorrect.

Update: However, I am finally finished.

Full Name: Tulio Inza
Nicknames: Tuto
Sex: Male
Age: 19

Family: Divine Water
Career: Farm Crops

Appearance: Tulio is a tanned male, although darker in his face and exposed body parts due to being exposed to the sun. You could say his chest and covered parts are lighter. Standing at exactly 6 feet, his overall appearance is quite charming. His hair color is dirty blonde with a hint of black at the ends. Tulio's hair is also wavy, but short and barely going past the bottom of his ears. Forest green is his eye color, which is one feature he is proud of. His face is rather "heart-shaped," and he has a star shaped birth mark on his right shoulder. Despite his working habits, he's quite built and has a slim body.

His clothing style consists of what is on the picture below, except he doesn't wear any necklaces and minor differences. He wears a robe that is metallic red with dark green details and edges. It also has long sleeves on both sides. The strings and clothing tied around his waist is dark green in color as well. Tulio wears sandals that are brown in color, his socks the ordinary white. Underneath his robe he wears a slightly weak chest armor. This chest armor is a one-piece with his armored shorts, which are covered by the robe. Underneath all of it is a black fishnet that covers all from neck to wrist, and all the way down to his knees.
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Personality: Tulio can be described as a clown. Although his appearance shows a calm, honest person, he's actually a joker. Able to pull off jokes, keep the people happy, and show off stunts, he's one of a kind. Although positive, he's short-tempered and sticks with his decisions. Thanks to this, he never accepts defeat or mistake, always wanting to win the conversation unless he's been proven wrong with solid evidence. Tulio is the kind of guy who acts before he thinks, and isn't afraid to tell the truth. One major flaw in Tulio is how impatient he is, and sometimes takes rash decisions.
History: When he was born, he was the youngest. Spoiled and given everything, he was envied by his older brothers and sisters; three sisters and two brothers to be exact. Having a big family, he was the one picked on and hated upon by his serious, boring siblings. It wasn't long until he realized that he wanted to be different compared to his older sisters and brothers. Tulio then started to learn tricks, acrobatics, stunts, exercise, and fix himself up to be not only charming, but flexible as well. The only problem was, his personality was a bit off. His parents noticed the many flaws in him, and thought that maybe working in the farms could help him mature a bit more. Of course, we couldn't leave out Julio, but Julio was very mature and decent compared to Tulio. He was against the idea of changing the boy, but he had to agree.

He was sent to work around his early teens. At first it was torture to him. The sweat, pain, hunger, money, and even the lack of free time he usually has. Julio helped him out with half the work, eventually growing in strength and stamina. Unfortunately, Tulio's personality never changed. This only added more flaws, and thus his parents saw him as difficult to manage and understand. By the time he started to grow into a young adult, his parents let him off to do what he pleases. A bit baffled, he decided to stay and manage the farm none of his other siblings wanted to take over. To this day, he comes a few times a week to check and fix up the farm his father still owns.

Skills: Tulio is agile, flexible, and able to do amazing acrobatics such as backflips, front flips, jump from tree to tree, and such stunts. He has also mastered the bow and arrow in his spare time.
Flaws: He can't swim. Another big flaw is his lack of experience with battles. He might be a master at long range battles thanks to his bow and arrows, yet close up he's too weak and defenseless.
Weapon: As odd as it sounds, he uses a bow. He has a talent in bow and arrows, but has no idea how to use the common bladed weapons.

Pokemon: Bisharp
Pokemon Name: Julio
Pokemon Personality: Julio is a very patient, calm, cunning, and fast pokemon. He rarely talks unless spoken to, and finds it hard to befriend others. Although a gentleman, he has a cold personality, and always wants to master the art of battling. Sometimes both Julio and Tulio clash due to their different personalities, yet Julio manages to calm down and take the pressure.
Pokemon History: Just like Tulio, he was youngest out of the family as well. Right away he was given tasks to do and work to accomplish. This lead to his patient, noble personality. Julio helped Tulio work in the farm, cutting down what needed to be cut and using brute strength for other tasks. Along the way he learned to use basic moves and managed to convince Tulio of using the bow and arrow for self defense. One day, on Tulio's 18th birthday, he was taken out for more training. Without warning, they were somehow attacked by a small group of flying pokemon. Although the attack was small and Julio managed to fend them off, this was enough to cause him to evolve into the Bisharp he is.
Pokemon Specialty: Julio's battle style is unique in that he's not only very silent, but fast. He's also a strategic pokemon, so he tends to push it sometimes as to disobey Tulio if his decision makes no sense. One thing Julio has that Tulio needs is accurate eyesight. Julio is the one who points and helps Tulio with his arrow shooting and accuracy.
Pokemon Flaws: Julio can be taken advantage of easily. If somebody was to ask for his help, he wouldn't hesitate to deny. He's been taken advantage of many times due to his docile nature. He's also very emotional, yet doesn't let others show except Tulio.

Proof of Reading: The man's purple marker inked on the map since he pushed on it too hard....mmmhm.

Anything Else: One hobby he secretly has is constellations. If not exhausted or tired enough to sleep, he tends to stare at the night sky with Julio.
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Sorry, forgot about you. Reading it over, I have decided that you are accepted.

I like how much your characters confilict in more than one way. However, do remember that they are linked. They feel the same emotions, suffer each others' pain, and feel the same feelings, even when they're in disagreement.
 
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I finished my sign up hope it's okay

~Genevieve~ said:
Can I reserve for Moltres

Full Name: Seraphina Densetsu

Nicknames: Sera, Phina

Sex: Female

Age: 11

Family: Divine Water

Career: Healer

Appearance: Seraphina stands at average height for her age at 4 feet 4 inches, and weighs about 79 lbs. She has a heart shaped face and her skin is pale and fair, she never tans and her face is clear of any mark or blemish. No freckles, moles, or scars. Her eyes are almond shaped and are a deep emerald green in color standing out against her skin. Her hair is a fiery red in color and goes down in curls stopping at her elbows, she normally has it down but the rare times she has it up it is styled in a high elegant ponytail. Seraphina always wears a floor length dress that is an emerald green in color just like her eyes, the sleeves of the dress are long stopping at her wrists but the fabric extends down so the sleeve flows. On the lining of the sleeves is ribbon colored white and the same is on the bottom of the skirt and around the waist with part of the belt hanging down the front of the skirt. On her feet she wears simple green flats and a crown of flowers in her hair.
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Personality: Seraphina is an extremely sweet little girl. She cares deeply about others and will go out of her way to help them even though she is still a child. Though she isn't naive about what is going on in the world, she knows about the war though she won't say it outright she wishes for peace but until peace comes she will stay with her family. Seraphina holds a great respect for nature and life in general which is why she is a healer. She can't stand to see someone in pain and will always help. Though she still will act like a child. When her help is not needed she loves to play games with other children and with her pokemon link Mai. Seraphina does have a bit of a fiery side to her though, mainly with the fact she hates to do as she's told.

History: Seraphina was only six years old when the tower was destroyed killing the children of Entei, Raikou, and Suicune, in fast to this day she doesn't know they had died at all. All Seraphina knew is that Densetsu-sama had woken her from her nap and he had told her it was time for them to leave. Seraphina followed him without question to their new home. Being so young Seraphina adapted to the change pretty quickly getting used to her new home and training in the ways of healing. Now five years later Seraphina now aged 11 has come a long ways with healing, she can deal with a fair bit of wounds and sickness but still has a long ways to go until her training is complete.

Skills: She can heal minor wounds and treat some illnesses, she is very agile and very strong willed.

Flaws: She still has a long way to go in healing training, she isn't physically strong, and doesn't like to listen

Weapon: a small silver dagger kept in a hidden pocket of her dress.

Pokemon: Moltres

Pokemon Name: Mai

Pokemon Personality: Mai is very protective of Seraphina. She always watches over her and can be a strict judge of character. She just wants her to be safe though and won't let anyone that is not a member of her family near her. You will never find Mai not near Seraphina.

Pokemon History: (Same as Seraphina's)

Pokemon Specialty: Flying in the sky and she can shoot flamethrowers out of his mouth.

Pokemon Flaws: Mai can be too protective of Seraphina and thus can become distracted if she is hurt or in danger.

Proof of Reading: Ethan defeating the team rocket grunt and saving the kimono girls.

Anything Else: nothing.
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~Genevieve~ said:
I finished my sign up hope it's okay
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Hmmm... I'll accept it, but there's a few things you should fix:

  • Linked Pokemon, being born on the same day as their human link, also share the same gender. Therefore, your Moltres would also be female
  • You claim the female Densetsu-sama was the one who took you away, when Lugia family were the ones to retreat, and that Densetsu-sama is a male.
 
I'll change the gender right now :3

and I did refer to the male one, in the sentence when I used the word her I was referring to Seraphina. But I can make the more clear.
 
My SU:
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pokeman10000 said:
My SU:
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Ehhh... A few issues here.

I'm not saying he is, but doesn't extreme knowledge and masterful swordplay seem a little overpowered? Anyways, a lot of these sign-ups seem rather similar to each other, and don't stand out all too much.

Anyways, a Servine transforming into a sword.... Doesn't make any sense. And... I don't think Pokemon should have weapons of their own, either. Because... Well... Pokemon are weapons, with their many powers and abilities.

I stated this with another sign-up, no one really needs to be a soldier in this RP, however, your character could also be a defender for the family.

I think your character could actually be better suited as a librarian of some sort.

Lastly, er... Indian Origin...? I didn't see any reasoning for this, it doesn't really make sense to me.

Erm... I don't think there's really "Different languages" in an RP like this. THe fact that everyone involved is from this region, and this reagion is Japan. However, since English is generally the language used most on this site and most websites, making it possible for everyone to understand. SO I suppose our characters are speaking Japanese, but since everyone here speaks English we'll have everything written as so. Does that make sense?

Anyways, those fixes and I think you're good.
 
I think I've fixed everything you asked me too, and as for the Indian bit... meh, no real significance. And I meant that we are writing in English, but the people in the RP are actually speaking Japanese, if that makes sense.
 
徳清アキオ said:
Sorry, forgot about you. Reading it over, I have decided that you are accepted.

I like how much your characters confilict in more than one way. However, do remember that they are linked. They feel the same emotions, suffer each others' pain, and feel the same feelings, even when they're in disagreement.
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Oh I'll make note of it. Thanks for the help, and I'll make sure to get that link information right.

Thanks, I wanted something that would motivate me to post, such as their small arguments. Although they're not that big, so don't worry..I'll remind myself of this.
 
Found this, is cool! Can I join? Reserve if able!
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Full Name: Kitsune Atarashi Shinseina

Nicknames: Kitsu/Seina/Faiafo

Sex: Female

Age: 20

Family: Sacred Fire

Career: Priestess/musician

Appearance:
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Personality: Kitsu is a very sweet girl with a strong bond between her and Kasai. She loves to play her harp, and is very good with herbs and spices. However, this sweet shell hides the powerful Faiafo, a special spirit inside her body. This brings out the power of Kutaf, the staff that Kitsu holds. Faiafo's side is basically the complete opposite of Kitsu's normal personality. She is still kind to good people, but will battle until the very end. She is very loyal.

History: (What has your character experienced in their life? Keep it mostly to important details.)

Skills: fighting, art, singing

Flaws: reads a bit too much, sometimes leaves things until the last minute

Weapon: Black staff with red jewel at end for fire magic;can turn into a black handled sword with a red blade

Pokemon: Ninetails

Pokemon Name: Kasai

Pokemon Personality: Kasai is elegant and always tries her best to be beautiful.

Pokemon History: Kitsu received Kasai from her dad when the little fox was still a Vulpix.

Pokemon Specialty: Kasai is a very good pokemon stylist when it comes to fur.

Pokemon Flaws: Kasai can sometimes get a bit selfish and put on the whole "I'm so way more pretty/smart etc. then you'll ever be" act.

Proof of Reading: (Prove to me that you actually read the post)

Anything Else: N/A
 
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pokeman10000 said:
I think I've fixed everything you asked me too, and as for the Indian bit... meh, no real significance. And I meant that we are writing in English, but the people in the RP are actually speaking Japanese, if that makes sense.
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Yeah, but... There's really no purpose in even talking about different languages for an RP like this...

Anyways, you're accepted.




Junie, you're reserved.
 
fair point, I was just trying to confirm, because it would be a little weird for the characters to actually speak english.
 
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Full Name: Lorenzo Caesar Andretti
Nicknames: N/A
Age: 25
Family: Divine Water
Career: Captain of the Guard
Appearance:

Lorenzo is very tall, and muscularly built. Lorenzo measures in at six feet, six inches tall, very tall for the time period and Lorenzo stands out amongst the rest. Lorenzo has short, brown hair which Lorenzo keeps ruffled in a stylish manner on top of his head. Lorenzo has a very sharp, chiseled face with facial features that blend in. Lorenzo's skin tone is slightly tanned, although very lightly. Lorenzo has dark green eyes, which gleam like emeralds in the right lighting conditions. Lorenzo's nose ridge is well blended into to his facial complexion and does not appear to protrude out very far. Lorenzo's chin is sharp and chiseled, and angles sharply in from his jawbones. Lorenzo also sports some facial hair, growing out small dark brown goatee.

Lorenzo's Clothes:

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Personality:

Lorenzo is your traditional macho, arrogant youngster. Lorenzo thinks quite highly of himself, due to his close relations to important members in the Divine Water family and his position as the Captain of the Guard. Lorenzo is quite absorbed about his image, and what others think of him, and he takes tons of time out of his day to perfect his image. Lorenzo is very arrogant, believing that he can do anything and will talk down anyone who says he can't do something, even if the task is out of Lorenzo's realm of knowledge. Lorenzo is quite charismatic despite his insanity, and can convince people to do things they would be opposed to. Lorenzo is a weapon by himself, whether it is through his tongue or by his sword. Lorenzo is a very skilled fighter, and is not only naturally talented with a weapon, but is tactical and cunning enough to place a smart blow. Lorenzo is quite egotistical, thinking very highly of himself. Lorenzo has gone insane with power and wealth over a short period of time, and Lorenzo's sense of beliefs are completely twisted. First of all, Lorenzo believes that he is destined to unite all of Johto, not for one of the families, but as his own Empire. Lorenzo isn't truthfully devoted to either family, although he does pull off acting that he devotes himself to Divine Water. Lorenzo's mannerisms are quite like a elitist mercenary, not only does he think very highly of himself, but he is very dishonest and not very loyal. But when it comes down to it, few are as a skilled fighter or diplomat as Lorenzo.

History:

Lorenzo Caesar Andretti was born to two nobles, who owned a farm and ran it in a feudal system. From a young age, Lorenzo was generally ignored by his parents, due to being the second child. Unlike his older brother, Roberto, who was being groomed to take over the family business, Lorenzo stuck to training to become a guard, liking the concepts that came with sword fighting and Lorenzo found himself quite talented at sword fighting. Lorenzo kept training in the art of sword fighting as he grew older, finding an excellent proficiency at the art. Lorenzo also was taught academically, as his brother was as well. Lorenzo succeeded in both trainings, as he started to grow in reputation. Lorenzo joined the guard force when he was 18, after training for most of his life the skills necessary to become a guard. Due to influence by his wealthy parents and his natural talents, Lorenzo quickly worked his way up the ranks and became one of Lugia's most trusted guards when Lorenzo was twenty, which also happened to be the year of separation. Lorenzo was present when the tower was burned to the ground, witnessing the deaths of the children, something Lorenzo has never lived down, due to the fact that he could have saved them and more importantly, looked like the hero. When Lugia and his followers escaped, Lorenzo went with them, looking for a way to escape everything that had been a part of his life. Once arriving in Lugia Town, Lorenzo quickly became one of the more influential people, even being named Captain of the Guard by Lugia, and is in charge of protecting Lugia. Once the tension between the two families began to escalate, Lorenzo pushed himself right into the action, ready to launch his own plan.

Skills: Lorenzo is quite a good fighter, and is quite charismatic when he is dealing with those he considers on his level.

Flaws: Lorenzo gets angered very easily, and will get very angry once angered. Lorenzo also tends to think that he is better than most people. Also suffers from megalomaina, as well as insanity.

Weapon: This Katana:

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Pokemon: Magmortar

Pokemon Name: Caesar

Pokemon Personality: Very much like Lorenzo, although Caesar is much more loyal and honest than Lorenzo.

Pokemon History: Same as Lorenzo

Pokemon Specialty: Caesar is a very skilled and tactical fighter, and that is about it.

Pokemon Flaws: Caesar is also very prone to snaps of anger, which will throw Caesar off balance.

Proof of Reading: The Director was proud of Ethan for defending the Kimono Girls.

Anything Else: Lorenzo is quite fond of spicy food, as is Caesar.

 
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