Script Error? Help ASAP! :(

[MikkTheKing]

Help Me!

So I'm new to the whole scripting thing and I've made my two first flags, I've followed Foullump's videos and i did EXACTLY what he did, with some adjustings.
So, Everytime I try to talk to the "P" I've made in Advance Map. I can press "Z/ENTER"
Then my screens turns red and it crashes. This is the script for the man it happens to:
(NOTE: POKEMON FIRE RED)

It is suppose to make so when I recieve a Sunstone from a old man (1200), The other guy (1201) will take it, and dissapear out of my way, and I will be able to move on.
Please help me ASAP! :(

1200
#org $script
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x1200
if 0x01 goto $done
message $talk
$talk 1= I'm so old, that I cant use, my Sunstone anymore.\n Here, take it!
boxset 6
giveitem 0x5D
setflag 0x1200
release
end

#org $done
message $how
$how 1 =Joying my Sunstone?
boxset 6
release
end



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1201
#org $dontgotit
lock
faceplayer
if 0x01 goto $gotit
message $dont
$dont 1= I'm gonna need a Sunstone to let you pass.








#org $gotit
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x1200
if 0x01 goto $youhaveit
$youhaveit 1 =You got it!\nNow I'll let you pass.
removeitem 0x5D
fadescreen 1
removesprite 2
pause 0x10
fadescreen 0x00
release
end

 

[droomph]

Try the Script Help thread in ROM Hacking.

 

[MikkTheKing]

How do i do that? Like making a post there, and finding it?
(Sorry, Im new)

 

[Hikamaru]

How do i do that? Like making a post there, and finding it?
(Sorry, Im new)

They have to get moderator approval.

I recommend talking to giradialkia or DrFuji, the mods of that section. They'll tell you more.

 

[Full Metal]

Here sir, a link for you sir! [ link. ]

 

[droomph]

How do i do that? Like making a post there, and finding it?
(Sorry, Im new)

For your purpose, just make a post in this thread. If you want a thread, the threads have to be approved by a mod first.

 

[bobandbill]

And there's several answers for you there. =p

As any other rom/script related questions are better directed in that section/to that section's moderators, going to close this.