AyameHikaru
Beauty Queen
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- Seen Jul 7, 2013
Downloaded this today. A couple of notes:
1. Typos being 'irrelevant'. They're not. I suggest you get yourself an editor, as your work is littered with grammatical errors, spelling errors, and inconsistencies. Any programmer worth their salt cares about their work being as professional as possible, and typos are one of the least professional things you can have in a work. They distract from the flow of the story, and at times make it more difficult to follow the plot. Your players are distracted by how bad you are at spelling, when they should be thinking about how great your game is.
2. Playing on fullscreen has graphical errors for me, as well. I'm running Windows 7, and the screen flickers oddly on occasion. Not a major thing, just corroboration.
3. NPCs can and do walk through doors, completely blocking them. You might want to exclude those tiles from their walk areas.
Those points aside, game is great so far. :) I'm looking forward to playing more.
1. Typos being 'irrelevant'. They're not. I suggest you get yourself an editor, as your work is littered with grammatical errors, spelling errors, and inconsistencies. Any programmer worth their salt cares about their work being as professional as possible, and typos are one of the least professional things you can have in a work. They distract from the flow of the story, and at times make it more difficult to follow the plot. Your players are distracted by how bad you are at spelling, when they should be thinking about how great your game is.
2. Playing on fullscreen has graphical errors for me, as well. I'm running Windows 7, and the screen flickers oddly on occasion. Not a major thing, just corroboration.
3. NPCs can and do walk through doors, completely blocking them. You might want to exclude those tiles from their walk areas.
Those points aside, game is great so far. :) I'm looking forward to playing more.