BCKC
A nobody, just like you.
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- 14
- Years
- In front of my screen.
- Seen Apr 22, 2016
Ok, going to gym for mistakes.
(Btw, the survey guy is missing a period if you talk to him after completing it.)
Ventus Gym
Gym Guide
"Just change your Super Eevee into a Jolteon and you should be able to wipe the floor with him"
No period? :(
First trainer missing a period
Second trainer missing apostrophe in That's
Falkner chat
"Hell Yes! Time to get my first gym badge!"
"Hell, yes! Time to get my first gym badge!"
"Cocky one aren't ya."
"Cocky one, aren't ya?"
"From the smallest Spearow to the biggest Pidgeot"
Period
With my knowledge of my Pokemon I will win.
With my knowledge of (Bird) Pokemon, I will win!
(After battle)
Here's your prize
PERIOD
"Good luck in getting the other 7"
"Good luck in getting the other seven!"
The Trophy "Flock off feather-face" still says Flanker instead of Falkner :P
So does the statue saying the gym leader and recent winners :)
After Falkner battle, the guide's speech should have a exclamation point after "That was an ... Electrifying battle"
Also, "Actually, I don't know [...] programmed to say that line"
missing period
Continue Garden later.
EDIT: Hey, cool! The number 000000 gives a Rare Candy!
Shady Guy
Thats some pretty powerful[...]
Apostrophe
Ok, instead of a battle, you can have one of my Pokemon
period
next one too
Resta Falls Poke Center
Aid is missing SEVERAL periods.
Also, he still says you need to use form switch in battle :P
And I got the levla stone from him... (But its actually a Everstone)
Attacks Tut guy
Also missing periods :'(
And it's output, not outputted.
Sav tut girl
I think refresger was mentioned.
And viola, not vola
Randomly capitalized It's :(
Also missing period in last sentence
Kamon battle
Second sentence missing period
Your sentence also is missing one
and his response
Defeat message
Randomly capitalized Rival
missing period
and the one after that
Nurse Joy
Hope you don't have to come back
missing period (I'm gonna copy and paste this message from now on -.-')
Depositing pokemon
Randomly capitalized Team
(Btw, the survey guy is missing a period if you talk to him after completing it.)
Ventus Gym
Gym Guide
"Just change your Super Eevee into a Jolteon and you should be able to wipe the floor with him"
No period? :(
First trainer missing a period
Second trainer missing apostrophe in That's
Falkner chat
"Hell Yes! Time to get my first gym badge!"
"Hell, yes! Time to get my first gym badge!"
"Cocky one aren't ya."
"Cocky one, aren't ya?"
"From the smallest Spearow to the biggest Pidgeot"
Period
With my knowledge of my Pokemon I will win.
With my knowledge of (Bird) Pokemon, I will win!
(After battle)
Here's your prize
PERIOD
"Good luck in getting the other 7"
"Good luck in getting the other seven!"
The Trophy "Flock off feather-face" still says Flanker instead of Falkner :P
So does the statue saying the gym leader and recent winners :)
After Falkner battle, the guide's speech should have a exclamation point after "That was an ... Electrifying battle"
Also, "Actually, I don't know [...] programmed to say that line"
missing period
Continue Garden later.
EDIT: Hey, cool! The number 000000 gives a Rare Candy!
Shady Guy
Thats some pretty powerful[...]
Apostrophe
Ok, instead of a battle, you can have one of my Pokemon
period
next one too
Resta Falls Poke Center
Aid is missing SEVERAL periods.
Also, he still says you need to use form switch in battle :P
And I got the levla stone from him... (But its actually a Everstone)
Attacks Tut guy
Also missing periods :'(
And it's output, not outputted.
Sav tut girl
I think refresger was mentioned.
And viola, not vola
Randomly capitalized It's :(
Also missing period in last sentence
Kamon battle
Second sentence missing period
Your sentence also is missing one
and his response
Defeat message
Randomly capitalized Rival
missing period
and the one after that
Nurse Joy
Hope you don't have to come back
missing period (I'm gonna copy and paste this message from now on -.-')
Depositing pokemon
Randomly capitalized Team
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