♥RanaRocket!☆
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lol, ok.. ima gunna try liiighten the aptnosphereeeee hereeee abouts~
i found a sheet with some of y first sprites here, so you guys have your eyes bled out with THIS. yes i think they were even JPG'D!
hahahha yeha i rmemeber c&c being all harsh and eliteist (sp?8D hah)
but you peopel have gotta learn to chill, i mean honest.
you all kidna sud a leeeettel to much like petulant children to me, with all due respect and that.... ^^' its just some pixels...
just relax, if you have nothin nice to say, don't say anythin. thats how i work. and if someone says somthin to you you dont like, take it, it might just be useful, and if its not, you can remember for when you GTE YOUR AWESOME WORLD DOMINATING REVEN-- *ahem* no thats just me...
where was i? ah yes. if you dont liek it, its not useful, IGNORE IT.
nothing with irk anyone as much as being ignored does, right?
NOW, here is how i contruct a comment.
1- something nice, it might be difficult, but it always works for me so: yeah, i liek the concept behind Pikalar, the fact something as lame as pikachu can lose its ciute and become somthin awesome and kick-butt. :3
2-sommething useful, start with words like: however, or but.
(or that imply the same kinda thing)
it just seems to me (make it clear its just your opinion, you might not be right, ya know?)
that the shading needs a little bit of work, only here and there. also some of the lineart, especially on his arms could do with neatening up, make it only one line thick, the whole way round? ooh, and dont forget to shade the line in places too :3!!!
oh and the tail? mebbe recolour it? itll look more unified >.> i think :p
(remember, suggest ways to improve, be specific! :3 CONSTRUCTIVE.)
3- end with something good, it'll make the person warm up to the idea of taking your advice if you flatter them. also, it helps to tell peopel what theyve done well, that means they'll know to do the bits they did good again.
overall, its still an awesome concept! the feet and the legs seem to fit quite well with the bulky body, i'd have never though that either~ well done, keep up the good work!
(sorry to use yours as an example TTOTT forgivenessness?)
Anyways, on wiht my life~
i realy like the lavender pichu, its really cute. the colours complimwnt that so well! i do agree that the mouth should get toned down, hows baby pink for you? :3 also agree that the lines need to be darker in areas to add that little bit more depth :3~
but acctually, its a very good recolour, really clean :3 fantastic shot, mebbe try onto fusions or somthin 8D?! i bet you'd be good at those~!
i found a sheet with some of y first sprites here, so you guys have your eyes bled out with THIS. yes i think they were even JPG'D!
hahahha yeha i rmemeber c&c being all harsh and eliteist (sp?8D hah)
but you peopel have gotta learn to chill, i mean honest.
you all kidna sud a leeeettel to much like petulant children to me, with all due respect and that.... ^^' its just some pixels...
just relax, if you have nothin nice to say, don't say anythin. thats how i work. and if someone says somthin to you you dont like, take it, it might just be useful, and if its not, you can remember for when you GTE YOUR AWESOME WORLD DOMINATING REVEN-- *ahem* no thats just me...
where was i? ah yes. if you dont liek it, its not useful, IGNORE IT.
nothing with irk anyone as much as being ignored does, right?
NOW, here is how i contruct a comment.
1- something nice, it might be difficult, but it always works for me so: yeah, i liek the concept behind Pikalar, the fact something as lame as pikachu can lose its ciute and become somthin awesome and kick-butt. :3
2-sommething useful, start with words like: however, or but.
(or that imply the same kinda thing)
it just seems to me (make it clear its just your opinion, you might not be right, ya know?)
that the shading needs a little bit of work, only here and there. also some of the lineart, especially on his arms could do with neatening up, make it only one line thick, the whole way round? ooh, and dont forget to shade the line in places too :3!!!
oh and the tail? mebbe recolour it? itll look more unified >.> i think :p
(remember, suggest ways to improve, be specific! :3 CONSTRUCTIVE.)
3- end with something good, it'll make the person warm up to the idea of taking your advice if you flatter them. also, it helps to tell peopel what theyve done well, that means they'll know to do the bits they did good again.
overall, its still an awesome concept! the feet and the legs seem to fit quite well with the bulky body, i'd have never though that either~ well done, keep up the good work!
(sorry to use yours as an example TTOTT forgivenessness?)
Anyways, on wiht my life~
i realy like the lavender pichu, its really cute. the colours complimwnt that so well! i do agree that the mouth should get toned down, hows baby pink for you? :3 also agree that the lines need to be darker in areas to add that little bit more depth :3~
but acctually, its a very good recolour, really clean :3 fantastic shot, mebbe try onto fusions or somthin 8D?! i bet you'd be good at those~!
