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True, but showing 2 more sprites in the post would've been helpful. As first impressions can be first impressions. o_o Feel free to create another thread if you wish, then.
Since no one really goes to my pixel art showcase any more, and I really need feedback on this piece, I'll post it here;
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I used this image:
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My new fusion,an Arsues+Houndoom.
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C+C Appericated.
It looks pretty good. The lineart is accurate, but I guess that wasn't too hard since you had an image to sprite from. The shading looks well done for the most part. I would have gone with a little less dithering, but nevertheless, it's well done. The left hand looks quite odd, almost like a flipper more than a hand. You should move the line right in the middle there, and add 2 or 3 smaller lines for the fingers. On the right hand, I would shorten the long finger by a pixel. It just looks slightly too long. I'm not following your attempt on the eyes. I'm thinking there is one too many white pixels in there. You seem to have missed the top silver line on the belt bucket too. I would also work on outlining with some black. Granted, you don't want to outline in all black, but adding some black here and there on the darker sections of the sprite can add depth. Phew...hope all that helps. It's a well done sprite, but I think a few little adjustments could make it quite good. XD
Here are two scratch sprites I did. I made a body template then did this.
Santa and a Phat Fighter(pun intended)
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Can someone PLEASE rate this?
I hate mixes.
Just a simple edit with a recolour :3