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True, but showing 2 more sprites in the post would've been helpful. As first impressions can be first impressions. o_o Feel free to create another thread if you wish, then.
 
Since no one really goes to my pixel art showcase any more, and I really need feedback on this piece, I'll post it here;
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I used this image:
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It looks pretty good. The lineart is accurate, but I guess that wasn't too hard since you had an image to sprite from. The shading looks well done for the most part. I would have gone with a little less dithering, but nevertheless, it's well done. The left hand looks quite odd, almost like a flipper more than a hand. You should move the line right in the middle there, and add 2 or 3 smaller lines for the fingers. On the right hand, I would shorten the long finger by a pixel. It just looks slightly too long. I'm not following your attempt on the eyes. I'm thinking there is one too many white pixels in there. You seem to have missed the top silver line on the belt bucket too. I would also work on outlining with some black. Granted, you don't want to outline in all black, but adding some black here and there on the darker sections of the sprite can add depth. Phew...hope all that helps. It's a well done sprite, but I think a few little adjustments could make it quite good. XD
 
It looks pretty good. The lineart is accurate, but I guess that wasn't too hard since you had an image to sprite from. The shading looks well done for the most part. I would have gone with a little less dithering, but nevertheless, it's well done. The left hand looks quite odd, almost like a flipper more than a hand. You should move the line right in the middle there, and add 2 or 3 smaller lines for the fingers. On the right hand, I would shorten the long finger by a pixel. It just looks slightly too long. I'm not following your attempt on the eyes. I'm thinking there is one too many white pixels in there. You seem to have missed the top silver line on the belt bucket too. I would also work on outlining with some black. Granted, you don't want to outline in all black, but adding some black here and there on the darker sections of the sprite can add depth. Phew...hope all that helps. It's a well done sprite, but I think a few little adjustments could make it quite good. XD

Thank you very much. I will definetly take all of that into considerations. Thanks much again.

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And once again, since no one goes to my pixel art thread anymore, I shall post it here as well;
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I really don't like it as much as Natane. =/ Did it for a friend of mine.
 
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Here are two scratch sprites I did. I made a body template then did this.
Santa and a Phat Fighter(pun intended)
 
Here are two scratch sprites I did. I made a body template then did this.
Santa and a Phat Fighter(pun intended)

those are actually very nice. it seems that you've got your own little style working there. haven't seen some of your work in a while. hope to see more =)
 
Magma Grunt + FR/LG Beauty + Gabby and Ty's palette =
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This is one of my very old sprites. I corrected her pompoms (sp?) just yesterday though.

Please, rate. ^^
 
my first sprite

what do you think of this female bugcatcher i made.
p.s. i added some more (didnt want to 2x post)
 
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Quite some time since ive posted here, anyways:
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First sprite in ages. I tried to put in lots of pokemon without making it look really dumb.
I used Rentoraa as base then i used arcanine, flareon, rayquaza, rapidash, gastly and a little bit of scratching, tried to make it look D/P style although i prefer ADV.
 
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KeesZ: Looks perfectly fine to me, though it doesn't really seem like an Imakuni? pose, if you know what a mean. Still, an excellent effort none the less.

Chaos Chao: Eh, it's a mix of a whole bunch of pokemon. The shading on the wings, legs, torso and neck are wrong. Moreover, the wings seem to be placed to low on the back - they should be coming out from behind it's shoulder's.
 
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