Spriters Showcase Thread

[Crosell]

Made a new overworld of Totodile, time killing took about an hour to finish the first front ow.


I would like some Critism on this sprite sheet please :)

 

[Fox♠]

Made a new overworld of Totodile, time killing took about an hour to finish the first front ow.


I would like some Critism on this sprite sheet please :)

R/S/E style? Looks nice, but a little flat. The Snout also needs to be more present in the front OWs.

Could you give me your thoughts on the WiP i posted a few back? I'd like to hear what you and Opaucs think more than anyone else here.

 

[GFA]

Maybe make the snout longer?

 

[Blazers]

Yea i agree.
It's face looks a little flat, besides that it is really good.
Here's another scratch sprite, 100%. concept by me this time.
It's not finished yet as you can see, but i thought i'd show you so i can see what to work on before i shade the rest of it.

 

[Makeshiftjay]

Are there Any Sprites That Are Willing To work With My Team

 

[Likewise]

I havent sprited in a while, and I needed to make a sprite for my game so...
This is how it was supposed to look like.

I didnt make the overworld.

I personally dont like the trainer sprite but I need a second opinion x_x

 

[Opacus]

Yea i agree.
It's face looks a little flat, besides that it is really good.
Here's another scratch sprite, 100%. concept by me this time.
It's not finished yet as you can see, but i thought i'd show you so i can see what to work on before i shade the rest of it.

That's a pretty nice concept.
But it lacks on the drawing department.

There's alot of things on it that aren't correct, or could look better.
First off, there's his position. It's rather boring, and the positions of his legs don't make much sense. Neither do the legs show any understanding of anatomy. Though pokemon of course are fantasy creatures, they are still based on real life anatomy.
For example your pokemon resembles a dog like creature, so let's just make it's muscle and bone system resemble that of a dog.
Another problem is the complete lack of depth.
You can't tell which legs are front, or back or left or right.
A clear definition of this through shadows and highlights is important.

I redid your pokemon to show you what I mean:

It's a quick 10 minute redo of yours. It has the same design with some small tweaks here and there. I changed the colours, the anatomy, the pose and I added depth.

Remember I'm just trying to help out. I'm not trying to insult you or say that your sprites are bad. I'm just saying there's room for improvement, and I'm trying to get you there.

 

[Crosell]

a lot better, only one problem now, the neck/chest area needs more defining, it just looks like one long neck.

My contest entry, huge WIP

Calling it "The hunter"

C&C plz.

The mountains need a larger pallete.
Also add more shading to the snow, it looks to white.
The guy is good though, maybe make his pose abit more natural.

ow and thanks for commenting on those ow's.
I need to pratice alot more in making ow's, but I'm getting better.
I'll fix those stuff soon :)

 

[Blazers]

That's a pretty nice concept.
But it lacks on the drawing department.

There's alot of things on it that aren't correct, or could look better.
First off, there's his position. It's rather boring, and the positions of his legs don't make much sense. Neither do the legs show any understanding of anatomy. Though pokemon of course are fantasy creatures, they are still based on real life anatomy.
For example your pokemon resembles a dog like creature, so let's just make it's muscle and bone system resemble that of a dog.
Another problem is the complete lack of depth.
You can't tell which legs are front, or back or left or right.
A clear definition of this through shadows and highlights is important.

I redid your pokemon to show you what I mean:

It's a quick 10 minute redo of yours. It has the same design with some small tweaks here and there. I changed the colours, the anatomy, the pose and I added depth.

Remember I'm just trying to help out. I'm not trying to insult you or say that your sprites are bad. I'm just saying there's room for improvement, and I'm trying to get you there.

errr mhm...=)
yes i understand what your saying. im not the greatest artist lol.
Yours made mine look like junk haha.
but i really like it. would you mind if i tweaked it and sprited it?

 

[Opacus]

No I won't mind it.
But you'd learn more if you tried it yourself instead of using mine. It's up to you.

 

[moments.]

Ok I am a beginner Spriter having completed only 2 sprites ever so I need criticism on my recolour and fusion.

First sprite I ever made in an attempt to make Machop more Human like. I took the colours from Jigglypuff and swapped them. Your basic recolour and my first sprite.

Second sprite ever mixing recolour and a fusion. Dratini's body with Caterpie's colour, nose, antennae and tail.

C&C would be nice as I am thinking of opening a showcase when I build up my collection of sprites.

 

[GFA]

[img=https://img218.imageshack.us/img218/8114/kogaoverworldaz8.png]

A horrible rendering of Koga as portrayed in Mt. Moon (In Pokemon Special.) I know its horrible, and critique, or pointers would be greatly appreciated. (As you can tell, in battle sprites, aren't my specialty)

 

[Crosell]

Link doesn't work man.
Try it again.

 

[GFA]

 

[Crosell]

A rocket grunt ?
I dont know what you mixed it with, but it ain't bad.
Maybe try to fix some atonomy on the hand.
And add some more shading to the cape.

 

[Likewise]

i fixed up my sprite xD

 

[GFA]

A rocket grunt ?
I dont know what you mixed it with, but it ain't bad.
Maybe try to fix some atonomy on the hand.
And add some more shading to the cape.

I gave it Koga's head. In Pokemon Special, you encounter him at Mt. Moon in this sort of outfit ...

Oh and which hand (both?)?

 

[Crosell]

The right arm, thats hanging down, look unreal.
Check other sprites as a reference to make the hand better.
the other hand looks also weird, maybe make the pokeball and fingers abit more realistic.

Ps: I dont watch the anime so I dont know what episode your talking about haha :p

 

[GFA]

It's Ok, (that you don't watch the anime ...) considering this is from the manga! Now its time for me to do a reference check ...

 

[Metallic]

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I could really use some crit on these two.
The first is a Wooper/Piplup mix, and the
second is a Dunsparce/Relicanth mix.
-Jake-
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