Super Mario Bros |PG-13|

[AssassinX]

Super Smash Bros

Category:Comedy
Rating:PG-13 for drug refrences, some sexual refrences, some violence, and some bad language

This comic is about Mario and Luigi, basicly just goofing around. I will be working on this project with my friend Zain_Dolanar. I will probably be doing most of the updates.

I decided since im making a serious comic I might as well make a comedy one, and thus this insane creation was born. Please excuse any bad grammer. All comments and constructive crit are welcome. PLease follow all PC rules when posting.

Season One
Episode One
21 Questions
A Bright Idea
Trippin NYC


Credit
BGHQ, Rogultgot and Spriters Resource

 

[[NovaPirate]]

1. You stole the idea from the Where Theres a Wil tutorial.
2. Comedy Cmics aren't funny, they're stupid, they went out just like PC comics did.
3. Keep your two comics in one thread unless they're large best sellers. Unlike yours.
4. Get a good name.
5. this isn't PG-14, this is just sad.

 

[AssassinX]

I didnt steal any ideas first of all, I didnt even read that tutorial and hey didnt I say constructive crit?

Comedy Cmics aren't funny, they're stupid

That doesnt seem very constructive at all. And seriously this is my second sprite comic series i still fairly new to this so cut me some slack.

 

[Klippy]

That doesnt seem very constructive at all. And seriously this is my second sprite comic series i still fairly new to this so cut me some slack.

No offense...but my first sprite comic was really good. Your's isn't. You don't understand how much I hate people who use that excuse.

My comic was actually good, not trying to be vain, but it was. People who use the "my 1st/2nd comic" excuse, should stop making comics.

I've seen some other people like blueguy and his PokéChow, that's his first comic, I believe. So, you should have no excuses, and should be able to do better.

 

[AssassinX]

Whatever, You've motivated me to do better. This is the way it was when I started spriting, everyone critizied me, no one helped me so I said screw em all and worked hard and became a very good spriter.

 

[parallelzero]

No offense...but my first sprite comic was really good. Your's isn't. You don't understand how much I hate people who use that excuse.

My comic was actually good, not trying to be vain, but it was. People who use the "my 1st/2nd comic" excuse, should stop making comics.

I've seen some other people like blueguy and his PokéChow, that's his first comic, I believe. So, you should have no excuses, and should be able to do better.

Actually, the excuse is indeed valid. Since, you know, not everyone is good at something right from the start? It's people like you who motivate people to give up with uneeded comments like those above. You don't understand how much I hate people who make others feel bad for no valid reason. Honestly dude, go get a clue. If you think he should be able able to do better, you help him get there. You don't demotivate him.

 

[AssassinX]

And the award for the most acurate person to post yet goes to.. ding ding ding, Axel. Thanks dude. I am doing lots of new expirements with my sprite comics now, I will update with 2-5 new episodes tonight.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

Oh, so now your using Staff members to prove a useless point? You can't tell us what to do, asking only for Constructive Critisism. If everyone's nice to you, telling you in a sugarcoated way, you don't get better because you think that people like your comics the second rate way they are. You don't release your first comic, I had practice, my first comic here wasn't second rate. And anyway, SSB is way too overused, think of something original. And so is making fun of Luigi and Mario. Also funny comics are stupid, noone like them, they're like PC comics, they just aren't good comics.

 

[parallelzero]

Oh, so now your using Staff members to prove a useless point? You can't tell us what to do, asking only for Constructive Critisism. If everyone's nice to you, telling you in a sugarcoated way, you don't get better because you think that people like your comics the second rate way they are. You don't release your first comic, I had practice, my first comic here wasn't second rate. And anyway, SSB is way too overused, think of something original. And so is making fun of Luigi and Mario. Also funny comics are stupid, noone like them, they're like PC comics, they just aren't good comics.

He's not using staff members for anything. I came into this on my own accord, thank you very much. Please don't try to assume a useless point.

Nobody has to sugarcoat anything, but walking in and just saying "My first comic was much better than yours, it's true." much like KnewsBought irrationally said is completely pointless and not helpful in any way, shape or form. Unless of course it was KnewsBoughts goal to get people mad at him.

There is nothing that states he can't display his earlier works here. Everyone has to start somewhere. And so if some concepts are overrused, so what? That doesn't mean they don't have the potential to still be good along the line.

Funny comics aren't necessarily stupid. It depends on how it is exectued. Please don't speak on behalf of those thousands of people who read sprite comics. You are but a tiny minority. You don't know what everyone likes.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

But most people don't know how to execute funny comics, that is the problem!

I must admit, they are hard, and I have yet to attempt one, but that's because I know my limit. A long time ago, the comics were always good! We could just say "refer to Episode 26 in PI by TPH to see a good view of romance." (I actually id do that) But without that, now the new people don't know what a good funny comic is!

 

[Careful With That Axe Pichu!]

But most people don't know how to execute funny comics, that is the problem!

Excuse me, but you're no god to come tell that nobody knows how to 'execute funny comics' as if you were the master of hilarity.

I personally don't find the comic hilarious, but it's a good start. My friends, I would expect you to know how to criticize properly before posting in a thread like this... You're only putting the constructive criticism apart and wasting your time writing comments that at least make me believe you are rather jealous or just craving for hatred.

You're nobody to tell him what he should do with his so called "not best selling" comics, nor authorised to demand a different name for them or even try change its rating. The series are not over, so you can't properly tell if it's going to fulfill the given rating...

Aw, I forgot to sugarcoat that... ^____________^

Keep up the good work, AssassinX!

 

[Lily]

Has anyone tried to...oh, I don't know...not read it if they didn't like it? Refrain from commenting in the first place when all you have are negative things to say..=/

About the comic, I can tell it's supposed to strike people as funny, but it didn't emit a laughter from me. A good start, nonetheless. Try to emphasize more on the humor and add more details~ Good luck in the future! Curious to see what'll be next. ^-^

 

[[NovaPirate]]

How long have you been here? Two days? One?

Don't say the same things the person that posted before you said X.x

Well, I can see where he got it from, but it would be nice if he was a tad more iriginal.

Happy?

 

[Careful With That Axe Pichu!]

I'm way more 'iriginal' than you! ^___________^

And she's got a point, didn't repeat anything nor forgot to post a decent comment on the comic which you apparently are not willing to perform.

And we've both been here for more than two years, so obviously, we are better than you, because that's the way it works, ne? No one needs more than two days in here to realize you just want to flame~

And I'm not happy, i'm angry, angry as an ugly ogre. So refrain please, I eat n00bies! ^____________^

 

[Klippy]

we are better than you

...You're ridiculous.

And, all of you should just shut the hell up, you're all flaming each other. So stop.

 

[Careful With That Axe Pichu!]

Quote:
we are better than you
...You're ridiculous.

Sarcasm is not to be showed off, you need to understand it by yourself.
You're so innocent. ^___________^

And excuse me, but I never intend to flame anyone, and if I did, well, shame.
I only made clear of what I thought was Astral's intention. ^^

This kind of people always keep me entertained~

And on topic now, I'm expecting more of your work AssassinX. Try to be more iriginal though, it might bother some people...

 

[Ark Kuvis]

AssasinX, your comic is not original nor funny. Plus the backgrounds aren't working for me. Two tones? No thanks, I'm married. You also should go over your work in a word document program. Since the grammar is indeed killing me.

Now, since this IS a Mario comic, here's a site to help you get started.

www.mfgg.net

Mario Fan Game Galaxy is THE place for Mario spritesheets and background tiles. If it's Mario related, it's there. I recamend not using M&L style sprites, since they've been used many a time, but it's your call.

Oh, and idiots posting above me, kindly stfu.

 

[parallelzero]

...You're ridiculous.

And, all of you should just shut the hell up, you're all flaming each other. So stop.

I don't see any flaming here, just the sharing of views and sarcasm. Please refrain from making accusations like that. It's unwelcomed and entirely unecessary.

 

[Klippy]

just the sharing of views and sarcasm.

Last time I checked, this thread was for AssissanX's comic. Not to spam it with silly "sarcasm".

But, whatever. Assassin, sorry for my comment. I just was trying to get my point across. Not to de-motivate you, but to encourage you. Even though I did horribly at it. : P

But, Mario comics can be good sometimes, Assassin. Maybe if you incorperated some other types of storyline into it, like...I dunno...some type of quest. it may be generic, but, still it would divert from the usual "funny" type. Like, some seriousness every once and awhile.

 

[Lily]

I don't see any flaming here, just the sharing of views and sarcasm. Please refrain from making accusations like that. It's unwelcomed and entirely unecessary.

Oh, and idiots posting above me, kindly stfu.

Sure. Because sarcasm in threads is, like, totally allowed.

Sorry I even commented. =x

Hope you do better on the next installment, AssassinX! :3