The Angel of the Digital world

[Fearless Love]

Chapter one

"Ugh, I still can't get this right!" I threw my game controller against the wall and stood up. I had been playing one of my little brother's Digimon games, and I sucked at it. Picking my shoes up I slipped them on.

The other person in the room stood up too and sighed. "Come on Rikki, give it another try." The kid was my age, thirteen, and he was my best friend. I had been practicing the game at his house, since my brother wouldn't let me play it at home, trying to get good enough to beat my brother. Which would probably never happen.

I fell back onto the bed and cried out into my friends pillow. "JoJo, I can't feel my fingers anymore! I think it's time to give up!!" It was safe to say I was mad. JoJo walked over and grabbed a hold of my feet. "Don't even think abo-" My words were taking right out of my mouth as he pulled me over board. I landed head first onto the room's floor, which was really hard. I stood up rubbing my head and glared at JoJo.

He was laughing now, just as I figured he would. All I knew though was that if he didn't stop laughing I'd give him something to cry about. "Sorry Rikki, but you gotta admit that was pretty funny!" He said while trying to stop laughing.

"Oh you think so? Well, then you better start running." I said. He quickly got the idea and bolted down the flight of stairs by his room. Smiling I ran after him only to be caught off guard by my shoe not being tied. So I tumbled down the stairs. Luckily for me I landed on something soft. Unluckily for JoJo, it was him. "Whoops" I whispered as I saw him glaring at me.

Getting the message I quickly got up only to see Miss Joshin standing there in her normal apron. "Now, Jonathan, please go get ready for school." She pleaded brushing a piece of black hair from her eyes.

JoJo sighed and stood. I gave him a sympathetic look as he went upstairs. Then I looked back at Miss Joshin. "Sorry for the ruckus Angie, guess I'm not the greatest role model on him am I?" I laughed at my own remark. Miss Joshin smiled and shook her head.

"He's a big boy Rikkilyn, It's his own fault. In fact I think your the best role model on him!" Her smile grew bigger as she spoke. My got a little smaller at the name 'Rikkilyn'. "Come here there's something I want to show you." She said standing up.

Just as I was going into the kitchen to follow her, JoJo rushed down the stairs. He had on a casual black shirt that had in big letters "ACDC" which was normal for him, and an old pair of blue jeans. His brown hair that reached down half of his neck was still as messy as ever. "Okay gotta head to school, bye Mom" he said throwing me my backpack and pulling me through the door.

Once we were walking on the sidewalk I made him stop. "What was the big rush JoJo?" I asked striating out my black jeans, and red T-shirt. JoJo turned around and smiled nervously.

"Just didn't want to be late for school" he said then turned around to continue walking.

I started walking again but yelled, "Bull JoJo, what's up?" I asked again this time walking beside him gripping my backpack. He sighed and looked at the ground.

"I'll tell you after school...okay?!" he looked like he was going to burst any moment. I nodded and we continued our walk in silence. He sounded like he was upset, and he's been distant, like he's hiding something. I shook it off and kept walking.

Soon we saw Serio Middle School. JoJo and I looked at eachother, both smiling wildly. We dashed towards the school in our usual race. Every kid had moved out of our way, they were used to our race. Some people said I'd win some said JoJo would. In the end JoJo, being the first to make it to our class room.

Taking our seats we turned around to face the person behind us, and also our best friend. She was a few months older then us, she had long blond hair and she had on a pink flowery dress with pink flip-flops. "Hey JoJo, Rikki!" She said excitingly. Her bright smile was almost as contagious as her attitude.

"Hey Casey, nice to see you back at school" JoJo said. I knew he was flirting with her, he always does. Unfortunately for him, she has a boyfriend.

I playfully shove him in the arm just as Casey begins to speak. "Oh you too are so cute together." I just about knocked her out for that comment. We are not cute together. "Are you guys entering the Digimon contest, it's supposed to be next week?" Casey asked holding up a piece of paper with the information.

I laughed. "Please tell me you aren't serious, I can't even beat my own eleven year old brother and he's disabled!" I threw my hands up in the air wildly. JoJo smiled and pulled my arms back to my side.

"One, your brothers not disabled. Two, come out it will be fun. Don't you want to try and be the best of the best?" JoJo asked poking me in the side.

"That ain't gonna happen JoJo, and I can't be the best, I couldn't even beat a one-year-old!" I raised my voice a little, trying to sound a little more crazy then I was.

Casey changed her look from JoJo to me. "Isn't." She said calmly. I gave her one of those what-the-heck-are-you-talking-about looks. "It's supposed to be isn't, ain't isn't a word." She exclaimed. I shook my head, she never learns.

Just then the teacher came in. "Okay, no more talk of Digimon, turn around and get ready to listen!" Mr.Derage announced. Just as he said that a boy rushed into the room, nearly falling on top of him. "Mr.Haney, please take your seat." Mr.Derage said and pointed towards the seat to my right. The boy nodded and sat down.

"Hi I'm Danny" he whispered to me. I turned my head in his direction and smiled. He had blond hair, from what I could see under his "Digimon" baseball cap. He also had normal faded blue jeans and an overly long blue shirt.

"I'm Rikki!" I whispered back. Danny smiled and turned to face the teacher again. I saw him fiddling with a piece of paper and what looked like an oversized straw. He poked me and I turned to face him. He had the piece of paper in-between two stick like things, and a rubber thing behind it. A sling shot! I thought as he pulled it back. "You'll get in trouble." I whispered, but he wasn't listening.

He pulled it back far enough and BAM!! The teacher turned around angrily at the piece of paper being thrown at his neck. "Mr.Haney, I am fully aware you threw that and I would appreciate if you would step out of my class room now!" Mr.Derage was definitely angry.

Danny shrugged and stood up. I pulled on his arm, but all he did was look down and smile. Just as he was about to reach the door I jumped up. "It wasn't all his fault!" I shouted. "I gave him the slingshot." I felt like I was going to die.

Mr.Derage, Danny, Casey, and JoJo all turned and gave me weird looks. "Fine then you can go wait with Danny for a punishment" I nodded and walked out with Danny.

We sat down and he stared at me. "Why'd ya do that?" He asked wide-eyed. Thinking about it, I wasn't sure why myself.

"Guess it's just my nature." I shrugged and looked at the ceiling. It's not as if I haven't got into trouble before, happens all the time. Danny smiled and turned to face me, what was he doing.

I realized he wasn't blinking. I got the idea and stared also. Staring contest were always fun, who wouldn't enjoy a good staring contest. This went on for about six minutes before I blinked. Danny's smile grew wider as he held out a hand. "Your all right Rikki." He announced. I wasn't sure what he meant but I took his hand and shook it.

All of a sudden the school began to shake. I was flung against one of the walls while Danny landed head down on the floor. "I didn't know there were earthquakes in Fairden?" he said looking around once the shaking stopped.

I stood up and offered Danny a hand. "There aren't." I simply said and ran into the class room, Danny following. Everyone in the room looked freaked, well except JoJo and Casey. Looking out the window I noticed there was a white mist surrounding the school.

JoJo ran past Danny and I, seamed to be headed for the front gate. "What's he thinking?" Danny asked. I shook my head, and I ran after. It wasn't a far run and I could see JoJo.

We reached the front gate after running out of the school only, JoJo didn't see me. Outside there was a big "Thing". It looked familiar but I couldn't place it. Then a thought hit me. "That's a Lynxmon!" I said. I knew that fire-cat anywhere. How could a Digimon be here, it's just a game.

I'm about to run over to JoJo when I see him pull out a weird device. It looked like one of those toy digivices like from Digimon frontier things, but more real, it wasn't plastic. "Kudamon release!" he called. His digivices began to glow white and before I knew a weird weasel like creature was in front of him. It was white except it had a gold ring around it's neck.

I couldn't move, those were Digimon. That was JoJo, and he just called out a Digimon. I tried to speak but couldn't. All I could do was watch.

Kudamon rolled into a ball and jumped throwing himself as Lynxmon like a bowling ball. He hit the flames, but burst back, standing hopping around. "Hot. Hot. Hot." It called jumping around holding his tail. I wanted to laugh, inside I was, but my physical form wouldn't laugh. I wasn't even sure I was breathing.

I stared on as Kudamon tried time after time to hit Lynxmon but each time got burned. Suddenly I heard a voice. "Ow, stop moving around so much. Ow, hey I'm trying to unhook myself!" I heard it but wasn't sure where it was coming from. I turned to Lynxmon. Something was hanging off it's side.

I squinted closer with my eyes to see what it was. Another Digimon! Looking over I saw that Kudamon was now in the air and about to land a hit on the little Digimon. It scared me. Seeing that, I ran out towards the two Digimon. Lynxmon looked angry and shot a fire bolt towards me I jumped to the side, spun and kept running.

When I was close enough I turned behind him and looked at the Digimon. It needed help. Apparently it got it's ear stuck on Lynxmon by some kind of...It looked like a giant paperclip! "Oh do you need help?" I asked concerned. The little Digimon turned to me and frowned.

"Yes,. Oh yes please help me, I'm stuck." I nodded and bent down trying to remove the paperclip from the side of Lynxmon. Once I didn't think that was going anywhere I stopped. "Try just pulling me out!" the Digimon said. Again I nodded and bent for the Digimon. As soon as I came in contact with it's ear a blinding white light surveyed the area. I grabbed hold of the Digimon as the light flunk me and it backwards.

We hit the wall hard, and I was unconscious. The last thing I remember was hearing someone yell, "Rikki!"


So what do you think?

 

[chanchimi]

Great work! I liked it alot, and not only because I love Digimon! I hope you continue this.

 

[Fearless Love]

Look, this chapter isn't very long, but the next one will. Hope you like the chapter!!

~Chapter Two~

Things began to come into view. It was blurry but I could see. My eyes flickered open as I stared forward. A face came to view, one I recognized. "JoJo" I called throwing my arms around him. I had been scared to say the least. The light, the Digimon. Wait, the Digimon.

I quickly pulled away from him and looked around. Where was it? Then I looked down in my lap to see the little Digimon from before lying there asleep. It looked like a bunny, but it was brown with pink ear tops and part of it's body was pink. Beside it sat a device just like JoJo's except purple.

I picked it up and pressed a button. "Lopmon, rookie level. Known for keeping a calm interior until blown the wrong way" It read. I looked at it and up at JoJo. He had pulled back and was looking at Lopmon.

Seeing as how all my thoughts came rushing back to me I stood up while still holding Lopmon in my arms. "Why didn't you tell me you were a tamer?" I screamed. JoJo flinched but didn't look up. He seemed...distressed? For a short period of time, he didn't answer just looked the other way. Then a thought hit me. "Was this what you were going to tell me after school?" I asked.

He looked up at me and into my eyes. That moment I knew, he didn't intend on keeping it a secret. "Yes, I would have told you earlier but there's a rule. No one can no you have a Digimon, not unless they themselves have one." JoJo said and pointed to Lopmon. So did that mean I'm aloud to know? "Your a tamer now, you got your digivices and you got your Digimon." He announced and stepped back.

I looked over to see Casey and Danny watching us a few feet away. I stepped forward and walked over to them. "You Knew Casey?" I asked but it was more of a statement. She nodded and hung her head, apparently she didn't like lying either.

"I wanted to tell you, but I couldn't...I have a Digimon too!" She said, her head hung low. Oh that's great, everybody knew about the Digimon but me! I thought and folded my arms. Lopmon began to squirm and I turned to Danny who was watching the little fur ball.

"I don't have one, but that's kinda cool!" He said holding a hand up to his head. He smiled and I smiled back. Danny bent down turning his gaze away from me, to pick up his baseball cap. After placing it he looked up and smiled.

"Let's go" JoJo demanded and turned. I looked at him, questionably. "It'd be best if we go back to my house, ya know, to talk about...That" he said pointing to Lopmon. I looked to the others and we all nodded.

JoJo's House......

We settled into JoJo's room conformably. JoJo was sitting on the bean bag by the door, Casey hanging upside down on the bed, followed by Danny, then me sitting on the opposite side of the bed.

JoJo was the first to speak up, "Okay, so Casey, Rikki, and I, all have Digimon," he started then turned to Danny, "That means you'll get a Digimon soon enough." He finished.

Danny smiled greatly. I rolled my eyes and faced my best friend. "So...how exactly does all this work...I mean, training them in real life. I can't beat a video game!" I screamed kinda annoyed with the idea.

My friend nodded laughed. "Well, this isn't as hard really. Ya see, it's different. We don't just fight for the heck of it-" JoJo stopped when someone else spoke.

"We fight to protect people. That digivice that you have is made to keep your Digimon in until battle. The way to put it in, you point it at your Digimon, then say 'Digimon Capture'. And to release it you say 'Digimon Release." Casey exclaimed folding her hands in her lap.

I had my hand to my chin thinking. JoJo must have noticed cause he gave me a weird look. "Your thinking about something big. What's up?" He asked tilting his head.

Biting my lip I looked at him. "Can we...ya know...capture other Digimon with these?" I asked biting my lip even harder.

JoJo blinked at the question. I turned to Casey but it seems she didn't know. Then JoJo spoke up.

"Actually Rikki, we've never tried. We never even thought of it!" He exclaimed giving a low chuckle.

I smiled at that, at least I was good for something. All of a sudden I felt a tap at my shoulder. I turned around to see Danny smiling mischievously. "Your thinking of something, and I don't want to know!" I ordered standing up and walking over to the wall.

Danny stood too like he was following me but he didn't move. "I just had a joke, what's wrong with that?" He asked innocently.

I shook my fist at him, and he laughed. "What's so funny Danny?" I asked folding my arms in front of me. Danny only seemed to make another round of laughing.

"You think you can even try and fight me, your just a little girl!" He spat in between laughs. Okay, I can be a very calm person, but I think he just crossed the line on my last good nerve.

"So I can't beat you." I asked simply but gave him a death glare.

He shrunk back but stood his ground. "No, you can't, at least you can admit it." Danny stated shrugging. This time even JoJo and Casey stood clear, they knew when I was mad to stay very, very far away, especially if they caused the problem.

Unfortunately Danny didn't get the memo, oh well his fault. I stopped over to in front of him and glared. His smile quickly evaporated into a weary frown. "ut-oh" he murmured.

Before I could reach him he was out the door. Quick little thing. I ran after him. Just as I about had him he ran into the bathroom and locked the door.

"Danny Haney, you are so dead, come out here right now!" I screamed. I heard him squeal, then all of a sudden I fell and bumped my head on the ground. "What in the world," I looked up to see Casey, JoJo, Lopmon and, another Digimon!

This one was more shaped as a dinosaur, with a long puffy, furry tail. It had black striped on it's ears, and two black wings on it's back. It was purple and had a red crystal on it's head.

"Dorumon is an animal type Digimon. Rookie level it's a strong opponent, It is legendary among both human and digital world. It hides away to get stronger. When it hides it waits until an unimaginably strong foe comes alon.g Usually anything it barks at it will bite!" The data on that Digimon was amazing, but why was it here.

Casey helped me up and smiled. "Sorry, this is my partner Dorumon! I'm sorry he attacked you Rikki, he doesn't do well with others he doesn't know," she sighed and turned to her partner. "Dorumon Capture!" she called and her Digimon vanished in the digivice.

I rolled my eyes as I stood up. "Hey Rikki!" I jumped at the sound of my name being called from behind me. I turned around to see Danny.

"Sorry, but come on you guys, Digimon attack!" JoJo called. And with that, Casey, Danny, JoJo and I headed out for the Digimon attack.


Well, how was that chapter. Reviews would be helpful so point out and mistakes if you feel there are many important ones!! Or just say rather you like it or hate.

 

[ANARCHit3cht]

I like it. One of the reasons is because one of my nickames is JoJo, that just makes me feel like I am actually in the story. This.. this inspires me to write my own Digimon story! and write I shall! This good, keep up the work. Thanks for the inspiration! You don't seem lazy, you wrote a story and all.

When you use conjunctions (But, And,Or,or Nor) you put a comma.
Example:It was blurry but I still could see.
Correct:It was blurry, but I still could see.

 

[Fearless Love]

I like it. One of the reasons is because one of my nickames is JoJo, that just makes me feel like I am actually in the story. This.. this inspires me to write my own Digimon story! and write I shall! This good, keep up the work. Thanks for the inspiration! You don't seem lazy, you wrote a story and all.

When you use conjunctions (But, And,Or,or Nor) you put a comma.
Example:It was blurry but I still could see.
Correct:It was blurry, but I still could see.

thank you and that is the simplest thing, I'm supprised I forgot to do that. and theres a kid at my school named Joesph Kennedy and we call him JoJo thats where my charactors name came from. chapter three will be up soon

 

[ANARCHit3cht]

Can't Wait for it. I hope it is as good as your last two.

 

[Fearless Love]

The next chapter will be up soon, just give me sometime. for now, here'sa preview for chapter three.

Chapter Three:A Mystery Battle (preview)

Rikki's first battle with Lopmon. Could she be more excited or freaked out. Battling digimon whom she thought were just videogame charactors.

Rikki can't wait until she gets to fight this enemy attacking the town. But what happens when an unexpected person is controling this digimon? this isn't a wild digimon, it's a tamed one attacking, and it only seems to be going after Rikki!

What can she do when her two best friends are struck unconcious and Danny is nowhere in sight? Will she survive her first digimon battle? Or will she go down with her town? Chack back to figure out!!

 

[miley810]

This is one of your best digimon stories ever!I love it and don't see any mistakes besides the one already stated.I am eager to see the next chapter.I have been planing to write a digimon story today.Now if I could only find digimon I like threw digivolving and don't lead to digimon that have already been used...

 

[Astinus]

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