The Bleach Fan Club

[Livewire]

^Sounds pretty cool :D

Just a question, could their be Espada rankings? :o [/shot for stupid idea]

Thank ya. n__n

OOOOO I think that sounds pretty cool too. :D we could have a war.

 

[Charizard★]

Thank ya. n__n

OOOOO I think that sounds pretty cool too. :D we could have a war.

lol XD

I mean it could be like from most active to least active XD

Also, anyone have any ideas what to come next chapter?

 

[Merciless Cremator]

Keiri

May I join this club as well?

I hope I get to know the members here...I'm a big fan.

Spoiler:

Zanpaktou

Zanpaktou Name: Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon)
Type: Fire/Heat/Kido
Release Command: Yakedo (Burn)
Manifested Form: Dragon
Sword Description: The sword is a katana with a flame shaped hilt. It also has a red line over the hilt and in the middle of the sword vertically.
Spirit: Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail. His scales are as red as fire, and his eyes are golden. He is around the size of a small mountain and whiskers are as a house.
Humanoid: In Human Form, he is dark skinned with golden eyes; his hair is black with red tips and is around 7 feet tall. He wears a robe with a bluish black sash; he carries his sword on his left side. His arms and legs are still draconic, but his body and head are human.


Shikai Information: The sword becomes engulfed in flames and spreads to both my arms; it then becomes two Claymores and two canons on my arms. Each Claymore weights about ten pounds; one is blue and black while the other is red and golden. On my arms are now covered from fingertip to shoulder in a glove that is red and black, it protects my body from my flame attacks and also absorbs heat from attacks and the surrounding area. The canon themselves are nearly unseen, they are located on my wrists and are designed to look like and angry dragon.


[Battle Data]

In Shikai, I can attack with fire from my canons or absorb heat (Thermal energy) with my claymores. The fire is fueled by my own reitsu and spiritual pressure, which means I can make fire out of thin air as long as oxygen and heat are available. The Claymores absorb heat at the rate of every swipe or hit. They also can become super heated during combat from absorbing enough heat and become able to slash through almost anything with resistance, due to melting whatever it touches, before it ever makes contact.

The gloves also regulate my body heat so that anything extra will go into my claymores. This also prevents me from becoming over heated and protects me from Fire based attacks and partially from lightning based attacks. (I'll still be electrocuted if I'm not careful.) Which is why I use an Air lance in conjunction with this, to protect myself.


[Techniques]

Furea-Tsugeki (Flare Seeker)
A hundred tiny fireballs are shot at the foe, locking on to there body temperature. They will follow them until impact; can be avoided by changing body temperature.

Kasai Hei (Fire Wall)
Flames form a protective barrier against attacks.

Hitan Kaen (Sorrow Flame)
I can only use this move if fueled by emotion, in exchange for calmness and control, my attacks before much more destructive and heated, making me capable of melting flesh to the bone in mere seconds. It also increases my speed as well, enough to cause friction burn, but thanks to my gloves, it makes it look like my arms are on fire.

Iten Sakusei Su-pa Inferuno Bakufuu (Demise Creating Super Inferno Blast)
My ultimate Shikai attack, all the heat and spiritual pressure around me is collected and released in a devastating explosion, with enough range to cover ten miles.

Bankai Information:

Name: Mokushi Iroriryuu (Apocalypse Furnace Dragon)
Type: Fire/Kido/Heat
Bankai Information:
When using Bankai, My entire body is engulfed in flames, after my transition from Shikai to Bankai is complete, I'll reveal myself by moving my fiery wings. In my Bankai form, my outfit is completely changed. I'm now wearing a body suit, colored Red, for Flames of Passion, Blue for flames of Destruction, Black for Flames of Despair and Golden for Flames of Glory. My entire body is covered, save for my eyes. I'm also wearing armor that covers my torso and limbs, I now have giant wings of fire bigger than my body. The wings absorb heat and spiritual energy faster than my swords and be divided in four or six. My Claymores are now sharper and heavier, around fifteen pounds now. I can now fight with no fear of getting burned by flames at all, or by heat based attacks, or any attacks that has a heat source. (I can freeze water or evaporate it, but can't control it or absorb it completely. My legs now have the miniature canons as well, but they are mainly used in defense.


[Battle Data (Bankai)]

Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.

Su-pa Shinsei Bakufuu Yakedo (Supernova Blast Burn)
All the heat and fire in a 10 miles is absorbed and then released in a devastating blast.

Kuru Kaen (Dark Flame)
If I ever end up in a mental state that I come full circle and can't possibly be fueled by raging emotions anymore, this attack becomes usable. All my emotions are channeled into my Zanpaktou, leaving me only stoic and rational, calm and infallible, emotionless and driven only by resolving what ever caused me to use this move in the first place. My armor, Body suit and flames turn pitch black, my eyes become red with black irises, all my attacks are maxed out and my speed and power are greatly increased. This mode is extremely dangerous; I can no longer remember or care who I am, who my opponent is or who my allies are.

 

[Livewire]

^ You get in simply because that is the most awesome post in this thread, ever.

 

[Charizard★]

Welcome to the club :D

Wow, thats a pretty long info list. :o

 

[Zameric]

Quick question, What chapter in the manga is the anime at?

I'm fed up of waiting for the episodes weekly so i've decided to go against my usual and switch mid arc.

Oh, and if i haven't all ready. *Joins*

According to the Bleach Wiki, the latest episode in Japan (ep. 290) is from manga chapters 385 + 386. The English dubs are currently on a filler arc.

You're missing something, please go re-read the rules. :)

Well here would be my proto-type Zanpakuto:

Spoiler:

Raikiri (Lightning Edge)

Lightning/Melee/Kido

A combination of a man and the lightning god Raiju. looks like a lion-like man.

Stun, Raikiri!

Basically the blade is converted into electricity, and takes the shape of a bolt of lightning. Since it has no definite shape, I can manipulate the size and shape of the actual blade, based on the atmospheric conditions. Allows for manipulation of all electric processes.

Eisō Raikiri (roughly 'Sharp lightning edge spear' 1 of 2 Bankai Techs. the sword disappears into a storm cloud then takes the shape of a giant spear composed of Lightning. It can be thrown with explosive effects, and can recreated to throw again. Relies on the charged particles in the atmosphere for maximum effect. Sort of similar in process to Ulquiorra's Lanza del Relampago. Also augments the users' shunpo and kido abilities.

Still working on the final Bankai tech, just can't think of anything. ;_;

Hmm, very interesting. It sounds quite powerful. :)
But it would look a little more organized if you use the form on the first post.

@ Charizard★
I don't know about having Arrancar/Espada ranks. I'd rather focus on the good guys.
And I think they would add un-needed complications.
The 13 CGS is just a more stable and organized ranking method to me. :)

Keiri

May I join this club as well?

I hope I get to know the members here...I'm a big fan.

Profile

Spoiler:

Name: Jorudan Inferuno (False Identity) Kouei Atae (Real Name)

Gender: Male

Rank/Squad: 3rd seat of Squad 6?

Zanpaktou: Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon)

Blood type: N/A

Personality: Warm and friendly as well as responsible. Trains a lot and visits multiple Captains daily. Loves to read, fire, train, mediate and chill out with friends. In battle, cold calculating and analytical, refuses to speak unless calling out an attack or deconstructing the enemy's reason to fight or live. Can pep talk any fellow allies who need it and always try to kill all enemies as quickly and efficiently as possible.

Battle style: When training with fellow members, I'm hot blooded, trying to bring the absolute best out of them and actually will talk to them during combat. I also give pointers during combat as well as offer to help them improve more.

When fighting an enemy, I try to kill them as soon as possible, unless I need them alive, then I'll drain the body heat till they are hypothermic, then interrogate them. I aim for the heart, lungs, brain, throat, veins and intestines as well a liver for stabbing attacks. Slashing attacks are usually veins and decapitating or mutilating moves. Also after or as a finishing move I attack with flames hot enough to cremate the body to ashes.

Back story: I had a relatively nice childhood and was the middle child of five, one older brother and older sister and two younger brothers, until assassins came and killed my older siblings and several other family members, including Elders that were my grandparents. After the assault on my noble family, we had several braches of the family, fight to be the head of it, since I was next to lead it, but they argued I was too young and tried to take my position away, even going so far as to try to assassinate me. Afterwards, I went under alias and with three of my best bodyguards, went to kill the assassins while my family that I could trust dealt with the power struggle. I got separated from them after the assassins grouped themselves with an organization, afterwards I went on too destroy the organization with the help a child soldier (Ilp), A rokongai resident (Eon) and two guys who wanted to be soul Reapers {Zam and Muffin.)

Zanpaktou

Zanpaktou Name: Iroriryuu (Furnace Dragon)
Type: Fire/Heat/Kido
Release Command: Yakedo (Burn)
Manifested Form: Dragon
Sword Description: The sword is a katana with a flame shaped hilt. It also has a red line over the hilt and in the middle of the sword vertically.
Spirit: Iroriryuu is a large serpentine dragon with fiery wings and tail. His scales are as red as fire, and his eyes are golden. He is around the size of a small mountain and whiskers are as a house.
Humanoid: In Human Form, he is dark skinned with golden eyes; his hair is black with red tips and is around 7 feet tall. He wears a robe with a bluish black sash; he carries his sword on his left side. His arms and legs are still draconic, but his body and head are human.


Shikai Information: The sword becomes engulfed in flames and spreads to both my arms; it then becomes two Claymores and two canons on my arms. Each Claymore weights about ten pounds; one is blue and black while the other is red and golden. On my arms are now covered from fingertip to shoulder in a glove that is red and black, it protects my body from my flame attacks and also absorbs heat from attacks and the surrounding area. The canon themselves are nearly unseen, they are located on my wrists and are designed to look like and angry dragon.


[Battle Data]

In Shikai, I can attack with fire from my canons or absorb heat (Thermal energy) with my claymores. The fire is fueled by my own reitsu and spiritual pressure, which means I can make fire out of thin air as long as oxygen and heat are available. The Claymores absorb heat at the rate of every swipe or hit. They also can become super heated during combat from absorbing enough heat and become able to slash through almost anything with resistance, due to melting whatever it touches, before it ever makes contact.

The gloves also regulate my body heat so that anything extra will go into my claymores. This also prevents me from becoming over heated and protects me from Fire based attacks and partially from lightning based attacks. (I'll still be electrocuted if I'm not careful.) Which is why I use an Air lance in conjunction with this, to protect myself.


[Techniques]

Furea-Tsugeki (Flare Seeker)
A hundred tiny fireballs are shot at the foe, locking on to there body temperature. They will follow them until impact; can be avoided by changing body temperature.

Kasai Hei (Fire Wall)
Flames form a protective barrier against attacks.

Hitan Kaen (Sorrow Flame)
I can only use this move if fueled by emotion, in exchange for calmness and control, my attacks before much more destructive and heated, making me capable of melting flesh to the bone in mere seconds. It also increases my speed as well, enough to cause friction burn, but thanks to my gloves, it makes it look like my arms are on fire.

Iten Sakusei Su-pa Inferuno Bakufuu (Demise Creating Super Inferno Blast)
My ultimate Shikai attack, all the heat and spiritual pressure around me is collected and released in a devastating explosion, with enough range to cover ten miles.

Bankai Information:

Name: Mokushi Iroriryuu (Apocalypse Furnace Dragon)
Type: Fire/Kido/Heat
Bankai Information:
When using Bankai, My entire body is engulfed in flames, after my transition from Shikai to Bankai is complete, I'll reveal myself by moving my fiery wings. In my Bankai form, my outfit is completely changed. I'm now wearing a body suit, colored Red, for Flames of Passion, Blue for flames of Destruction, Black for Flames of Despair and Golden for Flames of Glory. My entire body is covered, save for my eyes. I'm also wearing armor that covers my torso and limbs, I now have giant wings of fire bigger than my body. The wings absorb heat and spiritual energy faster than my swords and be divided in four or six. My Claymores are now sharper and heavier, around fifteen pounds now. I can now fight with no fear of getting burned by flames at all, or by heat based attacks, or any attacks that has a heat source. (I can freeze water or evaporate it, but can't control it or absorb it completely. My legs now have the miniature canons as well, but they are mainly used in defense.


[Battle Data (Bankai)]

Kasai Hougeki (Fire Bombardment)
Balls of fire, about the size of my head, shoot out of my Flame wings, exploding on contact.

Su-pa Shinsei Bakufuu Yakedo (Supernova Blast Burn)
All the heat and fire in a 10 miles is absorbed and then released in a devastating blast.

Kuru Kaen (Dark Flame)
If I ever end up in a mental state that I come full circle and can't possibly be fueled by raging emotions anymore, this attack becomes usable. All my emotions are channeled into my Zanpaktou, leaving me only stoic and rational, calm and infallible, emotionless and driven only by resolving what ever caused me to use this move in the first place. My armor, Body suit and flames turn pitch black, my eyes become red with black irises, all my attacks are maxed out and my speed and power are greatly increased. This mode is extremely dangerous; I can no longer remember or care who I am, who my opponent is or who my allies are.


Arrancar


Name: Rey Regalo

Appearance: A young man, around 5, 10 with black irises (eyes) and hair. His hair is braided and reaches to his neck, is lean and light brown skin. He wears the standard Arrancar uniform with the coat, black undershirt, pants with a golden sash and sandals.

Mask Location: On the underside of my jaw and on the back of my neck.

Aspect of Death: Passion

Number Location: On my left Shoulder.

Color/Cero firing Location: Blood red, Mouth

Zanpaktou Base: Dragon

Zanpaktou Name: Endriago Rey (Dragon King)

Release Phrase: Raze

Release Details: My Hierro is coated in a light red aura and I gain claws. I also grow eight blades like chrisom wings with black edges. The area around my eyes now have a red marking with two blue lines coming down vertically from my eyebrows to my eye, stopping at my cheek, I also grow a tail.

Release Abilities: I can absorb heat and fire, also control fire to attack or defend. I also have the standard increase in strength and power like other Arrancars. My attacks are like my Zanpaktou, save for the fact I don't have to call their names anymore.

Special Resurrection ability: I have high speed regeneration and can drain heat from anything within the range of my Pesquisa.

Hello and welcome to the Bleach Fan Club, MC. seriously?... xD
I like to see you post some more before you can join a squad. ;p
And you need to fix your profile to fit this club.

 

[Livewire]

Here it is. :)

Zanpakuto Name; Raikiri (Lightning Edge)

Type; Lightning/Kido

Zanpakuto Spirit; A combination of a man and the lightning god Raiju. He looks like a lion-like man.

Release Command; Odorokasu (To surprise/stun)

Shikai Details; Basically the blade is converted into electricity, and takes the shape of a bolt of lightning. Since it has no definite shape, I can manipulate the size and shape of the actual blade, based on the atmospheric conditions. Allows for manipulation of all electric processes.

Bankai Name; Eisō Raikiri (roughly 'Sharp lightning edge spear')

Bankai Details; 1 of 2 Bankai Techs. the sword disappears into a storm cloud then takes the shape of a giant spear composed of Lightning. It can be thrown with explosive effects, and can recreated to throw again. Relies on the charged particles in the atmosphere for maximum effect. Sort of similar in process to Ulquiorra's Lanza del Relampago. Also augments the users' shunpo and kido abilities.

Still working on the final Bankai tech.

 

[Charizard★]

^Nice :D

I'm still kinda thinking of a bankai name XD

I was thinking something Spanish, but that'd be to arrancar like.

 

[RASENCERO]

You should do like me and keep it all in a Word document. ;p

I did wrote it in one, but didn't save, 'cause I wasn't expecting the site to eat my post..... So I lost it twice in one go DX

Still, I rewrote it. It has become a bit longer and I may have forgotten some stuff I had put in the first version, but the basics are there.
It is a bit technical in the beginning and I am not sure if its all correct, but it doesn't really make a difference :P

Edit: *used Spoiler tags* It is quite a story
This is not a final version, after some useful feedback (tnx to ILP^^) I will edit some parts.

Spoiler:

Zanpakuto Name; Polarity (Kyokusei)
Type; Electric Charge – Magnetism/Element/Melee
Zanpakuto Spirit; A female who looks like Cynthia from Pokémon. Her eye and hair colour can change depending on her mood or power which she is using. It is usual Blond (electric), but can change into Purple (Magnetism), Blue (Liquids), Red (Fire), White (Air) or Silver (Metal). She has a fire pattern on her pants, a water/air pattern on her sleeves and a purple lightning bolt on her back. She also has gold shining Angel-like wings.
Release Command; Polarize!

Shikai Details; The Basis of my power is the ability to control electric charge. The electric charge is fundamental to subatomic particles, which determines their electromagnetic interaction. Electrically charged matter is influenced by, and produces, electromagnetic fields, so I can magnetise almost everything to a certain degree. In Shi Kai it does very little though, other then irritating my opponent. Mostly it's used for defensive purposes. An atom consists of a positive core and negative electrons in the orbitals. These cancel each other out, creating a neutral particle. I can pull on the electrons in order to create a positive and negative charged part. This is my main power, creating electricity. I can also add electrons to make the overall charge negative. By just pulling very fast, but not breaking, on molecules I can create and manipulate fire. This is my second power.
Liquids, water to be more specific, are made up of charged ions. I can control and manipulate the flow of water and then hurl it at you. I can also create small amounts of water out of air by combining charged hydrogen and oxygen molecules. And then hurl it at you and shock you with my electricity. It isn't really offensive on its own, unless its your weakness.
When given time to prepare, I can also vaporize liquids and by using differences in concentration gradients I can control the airflow. For example, I can vaporize a poison, put it an "air-bubble" and direct it to a target. When there is a body of water present, I can vaporize it and collect the hydrogen atoms. If needed, I can ignite it. This is one of my assassin moves. I have several assassin moves. But if I tell you, I will have to kill you. I can also condense gasses into liquids or solids/Ice, but I can't control Ice. I can only direct the flow of air, not use it as an attack move. It does make me invulnerable to poison gasses, by using a gradient to facilitate diffusion. I can also just create a vacuum wall. When in Ban Kai, "air-flow" is always active.

In Shi Kai I wield twin Scimitars which are shaped like a lightning bolt. My Spirit is one person though; the two swords are connected through an electric field. The blade's colour is Black, with a silver edge. The handles are Yellow, Red, Purple, Blue, White and Silver striped; One line of each colour.
The electricity and fire are channelled through my swords; they can either shoot it or become engulfed by it. When using magnetism/force shield one of the swords (or both depending on the move) there is a purple aura covering it. Only one move at the time; for example, so one sword can defend with a force shield and another shoot lightning. But I can only hold it for a limited amount of time.

Shi Kai in short:
Electricity
Fire
Magnetism
Liquid/gasses control (water/air, stealth move)

Bankai Name; Electrifying and Incinerating Polarity
Bankai Details; When in Ban Kai, the scimitars fuse with my clothing, creating full body armor. This armor is variable, meaning specific parts can change shape depending on the situation. I don't have a design yet, just some details. It's made of a gold- titanium composite alloy, so its base colour is Black/Gold, with the other colours in different places. There is an at least a neutral form, attack form, defense form and speed form. They only differ in details, but because the armor is variable, I mostly use different parts at the same time. The full forms are just used to look intimidating.
The shoulders and upper arms look like Tesla coils. The lowers arms can become cannons, shooting energy balls/lightning bolts/Fire. They can be reformed into swords for melee battle.
I also have wings, made of gold-titanium. The metal feathers can be used to shoot at opponents. They can grow by collecting metal particles, this drains reiatsu. Like I said before, in Ban Kai "airflow" is always active, making me immune to gasses. It gives me increased speed and in combination with fire control a can go pretty fast. Also, I can create small cyclones, they don't do much, but they look impressive.
By using magnetism I can control gravity, this effects ALL parties.
My signature move is shooting lightning bolts. My finishing move is "Lightning storm". This includes, besides lightning bolts, clouds, rain and a small tornado. This drains almost all of my reiatsu, and my armor also changes for maximum output; the coils on my arms generate electricity (purple), arm cannons and swords come out and wings grow. If didn't have my passive regeneration, I wouldn't survive.
The Regeneration is always active, but only works when not attacking, defending or moving intensely. Heals and restorers power, but a not lot. It's just enough to not get me killed when going all out. Slowly drains reiatsu, can be switched off; only used in Ban Kai.

I can be engulfed in fire/electricity/magnetic field. Looks awesome in flight, but in combat can only be used for short periods of time, since it drains reiatsu.

These are the basics of my power, of course I have other moves, but they also drain quite some reiatsu.

Ban Kai in short:
Energy/Lightning control (Electricity)
Extreme Heat (Fire)
Gravity/Force fields (Magnetism)
Poison/Explosive gas (Liquid evaporation, requires preparation)
Airflow (gradients, automatic)
Armor attacks (swords/wings)
Regenerating (Particle control, passive, drains reiatsu)

Anything Else; Most melee attacks don't cost much reiatsu, but other attack moves drains depending on the size and power and focus needed. Electricity and fire are the least draining, magnetism a bit more. Airflow only used in Shi Kai when not attacking, since it requires focus (automatic in Ban Kai). In Shi Kai I can only use a few big attacks before I need to rest (and regenerate). With some focus I can charge reiatsu, but puts a huge strain on the body. Afterwards I may need to rest a little. Ban Kai enhances the usual abilities.
Superior to most electricity and fire Zanpakuto's, because I can control their particles to decrease their effectiveness. Also my armor is quite sturdy, an effective defense against normal melee and other smaller attacks.

During transformation there is a white flash with purple sparks and a small cyclone.

Weakness: Some against water/ice types. Superior against my water control.
Also earth types are superior to my powers, but in the air I have the advantage.

I may have used Captain Kyouraku Shunsui as a model for my spirit and swords shape.

Anyway I wrote this because I applied for the position of captain of the 2nd squad :)

 

[Charizard★]

^Wow.

Does mine have to be that long? O.o
I feel like I put the least effort into mine, so I'll edit mine after I get some better ideas.

 

[I like Pokemon (...)]

Well here would be my proto-type Zanpakuto:

Spoiler:

Raikiri (Lightning Edge)

Lightning/Melee/Kido

A combination of a man and the lightning god Raiju. looks like a lion-like man.

Stun, Raikiri!

Basically the blade is converted into electricity, and takes the shape of a bolt of lightning. Since it has no definite shape, I can manipulate the size and shape of the actual blade, based on the atmospheric conditions. Allows for manipulation of all electric processes.

Eisō Raikiri (roughly 'Sharp lightning edge spear' 1 of 2 Bankai Techs. the sword disappears into a storm cloud then takes the shape of a giant spear composed of Lightning. It can be thrown with explosive effects, and can recreated to throw again. Relies on the charged particles in the atmosphere for maximum effect. Sort of similar in process to Ulquiorra's Lanza del Relampago. Also augments the users' shunpo and kido abilities.

Still working on the final Bankai tech, just can't think of anything. ;_;

Sounds pretty cool to me.
Though when you say it augments the users' shunpo and kidou abilities... In what ways?

Keiri

May I join this club as well?

Hey MC.

Oh, just so you know, take out the "=profile" on your spoiler tags, those don't work here (it's just

Spoiler:

). Also, we don't have Arrancar profiles yet and I'm not sure if we also have character profiles like you've made Next time, don't just copy+paste XP

I was thinking something Spanish, but that'd be to arrancar like.

Yeah, I think Japanese names are usually zanpakutou, and spanish names are resurreccions.

This next spoiler is dedicated to Rasencero:

Spoiler:

Shikai Details; The Basis of my power is the ability to control electric charge. The electric charge is fundamental to subatomic particles, which determines their electromagnetic interaction. Electrically charged matter is influenced by, and produces, electromagnetic fields, so I can magnetise almost everything to a certain degree. In Shi Kai it does very little though, other then irritating my opponent. Mostly it's used for defensive purposes.

An atom consists of a positive core and negative electrons in the orbitals. These cancel each other out, creating a neutral particle. I can pull on the electrons in order to create a positive and negative charged part. This is my main power, creating electricity. I can also add electrons to make the overall charge negative.

By just pulling very fast, but not breaking, on molecules I can create and manipulate fire. This is my second power.

Liquids, water to be more specific, are made up of charged ions. I can control and manipulate the flow of water and then hurl it at you. I can also create small amounts of water out of air by combining charged hydrogen and oxygen molecules. And then hurl it at you and shock you with my electricity. It isn't really offensive on its own, unless its your weakness.

When given time to prepare, I can also vaporize liquids and by using differences in concentration gradients I can control the airflow. For example, I can vaporize a poison, put it an "air-bubble" and direct it to a target.

When there is a body of water present, I can vaporize it and collect the hydrogen atoms. If needed, I can ignite it. This is one of my assassin moves. I have several assassin moves. But if I tell you, I will have to kill you.

I can also condense gasses into liquids or solids/Ice, but I can't control Ice. I can only direct the flow of air, not use it as an attack move. It does make me invulnerable to poison gasses, by using a gradient to facilitate diffusion.

I can also just create a vacuum wall. When in Ban Kai, "air-flow" is always active.

If you weren't going to the second squad, you'd immediately have a place in the 12th Squad.

Shi Kai in short:
Electricity
Fire
Magnetism
Liquid/gasses control (water/air, stealth move)

I think that you have a bit too much control over a very wide range of abilities. I think almost all zanpakutous control only one type of element, and master it (electricity, or fire, for example).
I've split your zanpakutou explanation into the different chunks you talk about (the first bit talks about electricity and magnetism, the second is how it works, then fire, controlling water, state of matter manipulation, and creating a vacuum wall). Just reading over the list, that's just in your shikai when you would probably need a group of people to cover such a wide range.

Controlling and manipulating fire isn't a very big part of your shikai, for example, especially since it focuses a lot on electrical charges and magnetism. Condensing gases into liquids, or solids also seems very powerful. On its own, it would probably be enough for a zanpakutou, having that in addition to manipulating electrical charges and magnetism etc. is too much. And a vacuum wall... really?

A lot of this is "with the ability to control the electric charges between sub-atomic particles I should be able to...." it's mainly theoretical thinking. "What could I do" rather than what would practically make sense, regarding what is too powerful, and the fact that this is a shikai.

Bankai Name; Electrifying and Incinerating Polarity
Bankai Details; When in Ban Kai, the scimitars fuse with my clothing, creating full body armour.

One thing I noticed... We both have two blades in shikai, and they become armour in our bankai XP

There is an at least a neutral form, attack form, defence form and speed form. They only differ in details, but because the armour is variable, I mostly use different parts at the same time. The full forms are just used to look intimidating. The shoulders and upper arms look like Tesla coils. The lowers arms can become cannons, shooting energy balls/lightning bolts/Fire. They can be reformed into swords for melee battle. I also have wings, made of gold-titanium. The metal feathers can be used to shoot at opponents. They can grow by collecting metal particles, this drains reiatsu.

So you have the ability to make yourself very offensive, very defensive, very fast, or any combination of the three... You can also shoot out energy balls/lightning bolts/fire balls, or have a sword, and you can shoot feathers than drain reiatsu.
My main question to you, now, is what are your big weaknesses. Because of this massive variability that you have, you cover almost all spectrums of abilities.

By using magnetism I can control gravity, this effects ALL parties.

And... You can also affect gravity. While this would be a hindrance in group fights (though we can all float already, can't we?) this is really another massive addition to your powers.

If didn't have my passive regeneration, I wouldn't survive. The Regeneration is always active, but only works when not attacking, defending or moving intensely. Heals and restorers power, but a not lot. It's just enough to not get me killed when going all out. Slowly drains reiatsu, can be switched off; only used in Ban Kai.

A passive regeneration... I would be completely against adding regeneration, but it doesn't work when attacking, defending, or moving fast. And it doesn't heal a lot. I'm tempted to say that I'm okay with it, but if it does more than barely keeps you alive after using that attack, it's probably too much.

Ban Kai in short:
Energy/Lightning control (Electricity)
Extreme Heat (Fire)
Gravity/Force fields (Magnetism)
Poison/Explosive gas (Liquid evaporation, requires preparation)
Airflow (gradients, automatic)
Armour attacks (swords/wings)
Regenerating (Particle control, passive, drains reiatsu)

Like I've mentioned before... you would need a group of people to cover all of these abilities.

Weakness: Some against water/ice types. Superior against my water control.
Also earth types are superior to my powers, but in the air I have the advantage.

So no clear-cut weakness, and any actual "weakness" might not be a weakness.

I know that pretty much all I've been saying are negative comments "this is too powerful", but I really do like it a lot. Manipulating electrical charges between sub-atomic particles... it's a massive power, and just freaking cool as well.

 

[Graceful]

Keiri >.> I want joinage please. I've been watching Bleach for like...one or two months, and I became a little bit of a quite big fan.

 

[Charizard★]

Keiri >.> I want joinage please. I've been watching Bleach for like...one or two months, and I became a little bit of a quite big fan.

Welcome to the club!

Which episode are you on?

 

[RASENCERO]

Welcome!
We have quite a few new members lately.

Spoiler:

A lot of this is "with the ability to control the electric charges between sub-atomic particles I should be able to...." it's mainly theoretical thinking. "What could I do" rather than what would practically make sense, regarding what is too powerful, and the fact that this is a shikai.

Yeah, actually when I was writing this I was thinking the same XD
But I wrote it anyway to get it out of my head. I will change it a bit to make it less all powerfull. I do have to note that these power require massive amounts of reiatsu and with less then half of these moves all reiatsu is drained.

I know that pretty much all I've been saying are negative comments "this is too powerful", but I really do like it a lot. Manipulating electrical charges between sub-atomic particles... it's a massive power, and just freaking cool as well.

I first thought of this when I just watched the first 200 ep of bleach to catch up. I had a biochemistry class about orbitals, shells, electrons and such; and I was thinking, this would be an awesome power if it could be controlled XD

you have the ability to make yourself very offensive, very defensive, very fast, or any combination of the three...

I am not quite sure about the design, but I think will go with just a variable lower arms.

you can shoot feathers than drain reiatsu.

I meant to say, growing them back drains My reiatsu. XD
I may not have been really clear in explaining some parts :P

My main question to you, now, is what are your big weaknesses. Because of this massive variability that you have, you cover almost all spectrums of abilities.

Water/Ice is my weakness, since I will zap myself if I get wet XD (I will probably remove the water control part altogether).
Wind elements have the advantage of range and multi direction against my one way attacks. Note: My "airflow" is only used to remove wind resistance to increase speed and to circulate the air around me.
Also earth elements "neutralizes" electricity and can resist fire. "In electronic circuit theory, a "ground" is usually idealized as an infinite source or sink for charge, which can absorb an unlimited amount of current without changing its potential." And if you hit me with a rock slide, there isn't much I can do other then trying to evade it.

...barely keeps you alive after using that attack...

That is indeed all it does. It isn't effective to regenerate battle wounds.


I will change some parts to be more specific or remove stuff altogether, to not be all powerful. ^^
I will post a final version in the coming days.

 

[I like Pokemon (...)]

Keiri >.> I want joinage please. I've been watching Bleach for like...one or two months, and I became a little bit of a quite big fan.

Welcome to the Bleach Fan Club! I am the Captain of the 12th Squad, I like Pokemon (...) but you may also call me ILP/Ilpy/Ilpeh/Aaroniero/Anternero/Ant/Any other nickname.

Welcome!
We have quite a few new members lately.

Yeah, I'm beginning to wonder whether or not Zam has been advertising.

Spoiler:

But I wrote it anyway to get it out of my head. I will change it a bit to make it less all powerfull. I do have to note that these power require massive amounts of reiatsu and with less then half of these moves all reiatsu is drained.

Okay, that's good at least. It's always a good idea to mention the repercussions of pretty much all of your moves, even if it seems obvious, because it really does help make your zan seem less godmoddy.

I first thought of this when I just watched the first 200 ep of bleach to catch up. I had a biochemistry class about orbitals, shells, electrons and such; and I was thinking, this would be an awesome power if it could be controlled XD

Haha, a similar thought came to me when I was researching black holes and their effect on space/time.

I am not quite sure about the design, but I think will go with just a variable lower arms.

I don't think I understand what you mean, please elaborate.

I meant to say, growing them back drains My reiatsu. XD
I may not have been really clear in explaining some parts :P

Oh, haha. Yeah, maybe XP.

Water/Ice is my weakness, since I will zap myself if I get wet XD (I will probably remove the water control part altogether).
Wind elements have the advantage of range and multi direction against my one way attacks. Note: My "airflow" is only used to remove wind resistance to increase speed and to circulate the air around me.
Also earth elements "neutralizes" electricity and can resist fire. "In electronic circuit theory, a "ground" is usually idealized as an infinite source or sink for charge, which can absorb an unlimited amount of current without changing its potential." And if you hit me with a rock slide, there isn't much I can do other then trying to evade it.

Yeah, this seems a lot better.

I will change some parts to be more specific or remove stuff altogether, to not be all powerful. ^^
I will post a final version in the coming days.

Okay, good. I'm sure you can understand why I had to say this Maybe if you joined my squad, I wouldn't have~

 

[Livewire]

Sounds pretty cool to me.
Though when you say it augments the users' shunpo and kidou abilities... In what ways?

Well my Shikai allows me to manipulate electrical processes, including ones in my own body. I can speed up the electrical impulses to my muscles, thus making my reactions and movements much faster.

As far as Kido goes, I thought of an ability that allows me to convert electrical energy into Reiryoku/Reiatsu, and vice-versa. I draw electricity from the atmosphere, and can convert it into a suitable energy source- to enhance a Kidou spell, etc. Hadou 63 is my personal favorite. :D

 

[Zameric]

Ok i believe it to be fixed now, I followed the form. ;)

Well I meant more if you used the layout like in mine or Ransencero's zanpakuto description.
I'll PM you an example of what I mean. ;p

^Nice

I'm still kinda thinking of a bankai name XD

I was thinking something Spanish, but that'd be to arrancar like.

Well like ILP said, zanpakuto names are usually in Japanese.
But I guess you can make it Spanish if you want.

I did wrote it in one, but didn't save, 'cause I wasn't expecting the site to eat my post..... So I lost it twice in one go DX

Still, I rewrote it. It has become a bit longer and I may have forgotten some stuff I had put in the first version, but the basics are there.
It is a bit technical in the beginning and I am not sure if its all correct, but it doesn't really make a difference

Anyway I wrote this because I applied for the position of captain of the 2nd squad

I think your zanpakuto controls too wide of a range with its abilities.
Maybe it would be better to narrow it down to like one or two.
You could have one as shikai and the other as bankai if you could relate them.

Since you're still new-ish, I'm going to make you lieutenant of Squad 2 for now.
But I'm sure you can earn the captain position pretty fast.

Keiri >.> I want joinage please. I've been watching Bleach for like...one or two months, and I became a little bit of a quite big fan.

Cool, glad to see a new Bleach fan join the club. :)
Hello and welcome to the Bleach Fan Club, Graceful.

 

[Eternal Nightmare]

Ah sorry all...I'm so not as active as I used to be :[. But anyway

Spoiler:

Not much to comment on this chapter but why does Ichigo always have to have an explaination for everything D:? But I thought it would have been suspensful if it was Aizen who slashed him or something at the end. Also I'm glad that all the other characters have returned. And I was starting to think Kubo forgot them xD

 

[Livewire]

Ah sorry all...I'm so not as active as I used to be :[. But anyway

Spoiler:

Not much to comment on this chapter but why does Ichigo always have to have an explaination for everything D:? But I thought it would have been suspensful if it was Aizen who slashed him or something at the end. Also I'm glad that all the other characters have returned. And I was starting to think Kubo forgot them xD

Spoiler:

I'm just glad Kenny and Byakuya are alright, and that Yammy is finally (Jopfully) dead. My least favorite among the Espada along with aerionello or whatever his name is.

I kinda like Ichigo's little quip about Aizen, It shows he's growing up. :)

 

[Rinna]

Here's my zanpaku-to.

Zanpakuto Name;Ryukai
Type; Kido/Melee
Zanpakuto Spirit;A red half-man, half-dragon spirit
Release Command;Shatter the skies!
Shikai Details;Has a strange energy around the blade that adds to the cutting power of the blade. The energy can branch from the blade, but has a range of 7 feet.
Bankai Name; Ryukai Matsune
optional
Bankai Details;Two red blades that contain dragonic power. They can shoot energy similar to Wind Scar or blade shaped blasts. The energy can be manipulated in any way, but the attack has to be made quickly, or the energy dissipates.
Anything Else; optional