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The Flow of Time...

......You atleast improved with the flow...biggest 2 flaws are the horrid text and the horrid collors...use a basic serif/sans serif font and if you use a outer or inner glow keep it at low oppacity and with other colors. bad c4d usage on some of them...
 
keoni said:
......You atleast improved with the flow...biggest 2 flaws are the horrid text and the horrid collors...use a basic serif/sans serif font and if you use a outer or inner glow keep it at low oppacity and with other colors. bad c4d usage on some of them...
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Hmmn.. I can see what you mean via the text, but I can't help what colour it comes out in :\

and thanks for the criticism, it helps :P Well, for some C4D's they weren't really good in the first place x3 so no bigee. but thanks.
 
I suggest not using text until you think you've mastered. The usage of c4d's isn't too pleasing either. Your effects and flow need work too. You lack most of the basics and the effects don't go well together. The sigs are much too messy in some of them.
Keep trying, you'll make it :D
 
Cycle said:
I suggest not using text until you think you've mastered. The usage of c4d's isn't too pleasing either. Your effects and flow need work too. You lack most of the basics and the effects don't go well together. The sigs are much too messy in some of them.
Keep trying, you'll make it :D
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Thanks for the advice ;D
I'm gonna add some more graphics here a bit later, there only simple ones though nothing special ^^
 
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